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Title: Part 1

"Jarod had blacked out again and Raines was losing patients."

Really? All his patients were dying?  Or perhaps he was losing patience.

Reviewer: Cole Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 30/01/11 06:40 am
Title: Part 1

Great story!  I hope you get to finish it!  If you need help with editing/grammar I can help.  I did book editing for a transcription company. 

Reviewer: VictoriaC Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23/12/08 03:17 pm
Title: Part 1

this story is great loved reading it hope theres more t o come please

Reviewer: julie Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06/12/05 09:56 am
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