Where's the rest of this. It's an interesting beginning but where's the story?
Reviewer: Christina Anonymous [Report This]Date: 18/09/13 09:57 pm
This one needs a continuation, it's really good!
Reviewer: electricq Anonymous




Date: 09/02/10 09:42 pm
Oh my god! Poor Jarod! Please contine this! How will he react to that?
Reviewer: Anna Anonymous [Report This]Date: 13/09/09 11:24 am
Love this story. Would really love to see where you take this next. Please post more soon.
Reviewer: Megan Anonymous




Date: 24/04/08 05:53 am
Great start to a your story. Please post more soon.
Reviewer: Ann Anonymous




Date: 30/07/05 04:21 am
Nice start you allowed a lot of room for twists and turns in your plot. Characters were written well much as we had seen them on the series. hope to see another chapter fairly soon.
Reviewer: bucky Anonymous




Date: 28/07/05 09:34 pm
I am impressed! You have really captured some of the characters and their relationships with one another. The idea of the scrolls was truly a fantastic idea that not even I, a story writer myself, considered. Please finish it soon! I am anxious to know what other secrets you will have them discover!
Reviewer: Melly Anonymous




Date: 26/07/05 04:39 am