Reviews For To Honor
Title: Chapter 1

I liked this! The scenes between Lyle and Jarod were amusing. I've never been such a Lyle fan so it's difficult to see him im this gentle new look, but Emily is a beautiful character and I woul have loved to see more of her in the show too. You painted her as a very badass girl! :) I loved the wine-conversation between J and MP, a very original way to start their relationship, and so it was that lovely scene in Jarod's cellar. Thanks for sharing!!:)

Reviewer: missparker87 Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 23/01/13 08:28 am
Title: Chapter 6: To Protect

I enjoyed it; as with many long stories, it faltere a bit in the middle--Parker's relationship with her father could have been explored a little more as could the demise of Raines. That being said...Great disguise for Emily and amusing, yet effective "fight" between Lyle and Jarod when they returned to the house together. On a slightly unrelated note, alot is two words--a lot...

Reviewer: Michelle Anonymous starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 06/09/05 04:13 am


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