I've never been much into the S/M thing but I decided to read this because I enjoyed your other story, which was NC-17 too but was also full of funny and hot dialogues between J and MP. This fic although was OOC for me, I just couldn't imagine them in such situations and especially MP not telling Jarod ''go to hell!!!'' after what he has done with the other woman.
Still, thanks for sharing:)
Reviewer: Kama Anonymous [Report This]Date: 28/07/13 04:46 am
I read this fic twice, and I must admit it's a bit shocking ;) This Jarod is way over the edge, even if he succeeds in winning Parker's heart. I agree with the fact that him making love to another woman is a bit too much, but of course he has to move on with his 'tests'. Anyway, this story is original and different, I loved to read it! Thanks.
Reviewer: missparker87 Signed [Report This]Date: 03/05/13 10:51 am
one of the best ever in the history of pretender fics!!!!
Reviewer: anon Anonymous [Report This]Date: 29/08/11 12:49 am
I've read it months ago and now I'm reading the original story by Anne Rice ... and ... well, you're story is SO much better ...
Date: 25/02/07 03:44 pm
I really enjoyed reading this story. I read a few J/MP S&M / Dom/sub type fics on adultfanfiction, but most of the stories there are more slash than anything else. I loved the great detail you used in the sexual content in the beginning when he was trying to get to her, but I was a bit disappointed that you didn't use the same detail when they actually made love. I think it would have been nice to see a more loving and mutual wanting and sensual side to their love making after seeing the dominant I can do what I want to side of Jarod. You seemed to gloss over the actual coming together of the two. I also don't think Parker would want him after she watched him screw someone else. She is very vandictive that way, speaking of which I think she might have pushed the test after and started to make love to Malcolm just to spite him. I think she knows him well enough to know he would hate it if she complied. Just my opinion, but I still really enjoyed it.
I also read the sequal which was disappointing only because of them dying in the end. So sad. I loved the way they found their way back to each other. FAte can be a wonderful thing. I can't wait to read more of your work, it really is wonderful.
Wendy
Reviewer: cywen69 Anonymous [Report This]Date: 14/01/07 10:49 am
I loved this story, the way you wrote the characters is pretty much how I would have pictured them reacting to the circumstances you placed them in. Not to mention it is simply a well told story.
Reviewer: Tess Anonymous [Report This]Date: 22/10/05 07:00 pm