I loved this! The first part at Ocee's is amazing, it looked like an AU fan fiction, I didn't understand it was a dream at once. And I also love Sydney's thoughts and his conversation with J. Lovely...
I think we all wish he would have done exactly what you tell us in this fic...Reviewer: missparker87 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/12/13 12:55 am
Oh my God!...*loooong sigh* I feel as tormented as Jarod right now. *chuckle* Why didn't they ever GET together?!!?
Like I thought: you didn't dissappoint me at all in this other story of yours. Wow! How you described J's feelings for and thoughts about MissP was just right to the point!Great job! Especially LOVED the beginning of the story when you described Jarod's image of MP and what he saw. I could just see it in front of my eyes...like a movie-scene (ok it WAS a movie scnes,but not all of it. so u know what I mean,aye?! ;-)
I could almost feel J's desire for her and how desperately he needed her. And felt his annoyance by the alarmclock ripping him out of that dream.
Very well written. Great character description. Was them 100%.
So thanks for that! :-)
Date: 02/04/10 08:59 pm