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Title: Chapter 1

It took me a while to get into full story-mode. The need of having to introduce a whole "new" universe with all the similarities and differences with the old one took a while, but it was worth the wait. Once the plot was set in motion, it was quite the exciting ride, with plenty of suspenseful twists and intense moments. It nearly felt like riding a rollercoaster - one that stops right before the finish line. Got that, leochick? The person who is typing this is interested in reading the rest of your story. And he, I mean me, is not alone.

Reviewer: Joel Gomes Signed [Report This]
Date: 29/11/13 02:56 am
Title: Chapter 1

well, after 45 chapters it the story ends on a cliff hanger with no real answers. I looked to see when it was last updated and realized that you have probably left off writing Pretender so here is another well written plot that is left dangling.

 

I will pay more attention  as to the completion and date of last update before beginning such a long story. 

if you are still out there thinking of the Pretender, this would be a wonderful story to finish. 

Reviewer: mrbig Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25/04/08 03:45 am
Title: Chapter 1

Wow this was a page turner. I didnt think I was going to write another review after I finished yesterdays but I just had to. The story progresses so well without dragging along. Its one of the best fics I ever read. You dont get caught up in too much detail which is nice and you have nice continuity which is more than most TV shows are able to accomplish. I really like this human aspect of Miss Parker and how Sarah and Josh are so much like her. Please if you ever read this review concider finishing the fic. One of the reasons I came back in here was to give it a higher raiting than yesterday. Im gonna give this one a solid 10.

Reviewer: Cassandra Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29/07/06 05:28 am
Title: Chapter 1

ok so I'm up to chapter 24 so far but I like it. I love the idea of the alternet reality for Miss Parker and how she also remember the TV show Reality. Really Good Idea. I hope the story keeps progressing as well as it has so far. Too bad you never finished it. I guess like so many others you changed fandoms and lost interest. It is not uncommon. Anyway I just want to say again... so far so good, its really nice to see a fresh idea and someone who was not affraid to write. 45 chapters. Not bad at all. Im going to give it an eight for now because I still havent finished it. Might leave another review when i finish it. No promises though. And I doubt ppl read these reviews anyway,.

Reviewer: Cassandra Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28/07/06 08:15 am
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