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Title: You Who Would Have Saved Me

As it is, it's fine, but with a little bit more development it could get even better. You captured Kyle's essence quite well, better than Angelo, and would be interesting to read more.

Reviewer: Joel Gomes Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/12/13 06:04 pm
Title: You Who Would Have Saved Me

Hi

  I just read your story it was very good.

Reviewer: Kate Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 20/02/08 08:26 pm
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