Very NiceReviewer: Karleigh Brewer Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 21/08/18 07:43 am
Hi just read your story it was very good.Reviewer: Katescats Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/11/14 10:58 pm
Good sequel. The flow between each of the storylines were done well. I can imagine it's tough to continue a storyline into several sequels unless you've got the whole series written down.
Author's Response: yeah, it is indeed. losing the plot and walking a fine line between character development and staying close enough to the original characters from the series. I'm glad you liked the whole ride. Thanks for reviewing
Date: 15/04/10 12:19 am
Great storyline! Being a clone and a genius for Jay doesn't always mean having all the answers and knowing what to do when you're given life and freedom then told to just 'live'. Good take on his perspective.
Author's Response: thank you. :) Reviewer: electricq Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 14/04/10 07:42 pm
An amusingly quick story. I'll be looking out for your sequel on this. Good writing by the way.
Author's Response: thanks. I'm glad you enjoy the ride
Date: 14/04/10 07:52 am
This is the second time I've read this story. I think I read it on another site, but I've got to say I still enjoyed it the second time around. There isn't alot done with Jarod-Clone and it's nice to see a well written story. Can't wait to start the sequal.
Author's Response: YAY. I'm glad you liked it enough to read it a second time
Date: 27/06/06 03:42 pm
Nice insights into the characters. It will be interesting to see how deep the relationships go .
Author's Response: read on in the sequel then ;)
Date: 02/10/05 03:15 pm
Hey, nice one ! Is there some more chapters ?
Author's Response: Thanks! Glad you like the story. Yes, there are more chapters to come. The story's a work in progress. I'm posting a new chapter every one or two weeks.
Date: 08/09/05 07:00 pm
Go on, go on... the missing one is not going to stay in that hellhole forever.
Author's Response: :) nope, he isn't
Date: 31/08/05 06:45 pm
keep writing !!! As I already told you, I like your story.
Author's Response: *bows* thanks. I'm glad you like it. It's been a long ride
Date: 15/08/05 07:16 pm
Wonderful story! Keep writing because I definitely want some more chapters. I hope Parker and Jarod will kick Lyle's ass in the end, this is always the best part. lol
Author's Response: Hey. Glad you like it! No worries, there will be quite some chapters to come. Thanks for your review.
Date: 27/07/05 04:20 pm
Dramatic ... and perfectly in character. It's exactly how I would expect Jarod and Miss Parker to behave under the circumstances.
I look forward to seeing what happens next.
Author's Response: Sorry for taking so long to reply. Still trying to catch up with what happened while I was on holiday.
Anyway, I'm glad the story works for you so far and that you think I got the characters ok *happy grin*. Thanks for telling me so!
Date: 21/07/05 10:02 pm