CAN'T stop writing. Ugh. That shit say can't.yiu can't stop writing!
Reviewer: Jami Signed
[Report This]Date: 10/10/25 08:35 pm
Hey wow I hope you didn't leave. I'm so excited for more of this and new updates and stories from you. I need more and more please don't say it's done. You have to keep these characters alive and the dream alive. I can't to it alone! It's a heavy torch to carry. I need this fandom. I need new pretender content to stay alive! This is my comfort series, the one I watch when things get bad and I watch loads cos things are always bad now! You have become my comfort author. Please please I'll beg I'll do anything if you'll keep writing and sharing.
I really hope you're well, safe, happy and that you'll come back!
Please!!!
I've been disappointed so many times first but the series cancelation and then the rest of it.
You can stop writing.
Please never stop writing and sharing.
Reviewer: Jami Signed
[Report This]Date: 10/10/25 08:34 pm
Hey. Is everything ok? It's been awhile and I'm worried.
Would love to read more. I was so stoked but now I'm more worried than stoked now .hope you're ok.
If you can't write at least please say u r ok.
Sending love
Reviewer: Leslie Signed [Report This]Date: 02/10/25 11:24 pm
Man, I love this. I should be writing my own story but I spend a lot of time reading you instead. It's my obsession. When I can spare time I come here to read you. I never thought you'd write a sequel to Forces of Nature and I'm so stoked for it. This is action packed and so much like watching an episode. Please continue.
Reviewer: Sammi Signed [Report This]Date: 08/09/25 09:40 pm
Uhhh huh! YOU should be writing the official novels and I won't ever stop saying it!
More Mistress Mirage PLEASE!
Reviewer: twisted Signed [Report This]Date: 08/09/25 06:27 am
My fingers are shaking right now still while trying to review. This is so amazing, so much anticipation for what is coming!!
You build it the story and tension, and omg I need more. Amazing! 😁 😍
‘🏼 ‘🏼 ‘🏼 ‘🏼 ‘🏼 ‘🏼
More please?!!
[Report This]Date: 08/09/25 12:35 am
Ohh my goodness I just love this so much. The suspense and intrigue and the tension plus the camaraderie and heart..ohh I just want more . In addition to all of that the characters are so spot on and the dialog is clever
and there's so much heart and a real sense of urgency and desperation.
I crave more!
Please never stop writing and sharing with us 🙏🏼 🙏🏼
Reviewer: valerie_ Signed [Report This]Date: 07/09/25 03:25 am
Oh no only 3 chapters!
I'm so dying now.
I need more Mirage!
Hurry. Please update this NOW and all of your stories
I can never get enough!
Reviewer: Christoph Signed [Report This]Date: 06/09/25 07:23 am
Thank you! For the chapter, for writing my favorite ever series and characters and actors, but also for
Laying down the truth about wealth.
All my life I heard from wealthy people that money doesn't but happiness...and they say that cos they are scared
We will take their money. They're afraid we'll eat them!!
Cos the truth is money does buy happiness, it buys healthcare, dental care, food, warmth in winter, cooling in summer, a pool to cool off in, healthy food that keeps us healthy.
Money.
Buys
Happinesses.
It purchases a get out of jail free card for trump too.
You are so right.
I just want more!
Reviewer: Christoph Signed [Report This]Date: 06/09/25 07:20 am
😱 Omg forces of nature squeeequel !
I'm so damn stoked!
Reviewer: Christoph Signed [Report This]Date: 06/09/25 07:14 am
Aww Broots is just beside himself. I feel for him. I love Sydney's attempt to console while trying to be realistic. They're both understandably mourning that their friend is in danger and Sydney must feel some responsibility too for Jarod's behavior. He raised him. It reflects badly. I'm excited for more. So eager but trying to be patient.
More please?
Reviewer: Felicia Signed [Report This]Date: 05/09/25 05:58 pm
Poor Broots. He feels it so hard tho right. He's the most normal of the gang, he promised, and... oooooohhh he's keeping the promise. I love this. Ialways loved the Sydney-Broots parts of the series. They're such pals, so much love for each other. It's like watching an episode of The Pretender, only this time Jarod really has gone too far. I hope they get Parker back safely and soon. The damage Jarod has done... I'm so excited about how you will approach that. I know you will. You have no fear! You go all IN. I'm going with YOU! Can't wait for more!
Reviewer: Amelia_ Signed [Report This]Date: 05/09/25 12:48 am
Broots. He's so torn apart by this. Breaks my heart. It's beautiful the way he loves Parker and always has. So beautiful. I have secretly shipped them at times. That cold dick episode made sense to me. They were so cute.
I'm so completely freaking stoked by this. It's a breath of fresh air, Mirage.
Reviewer: Jameason Signed [Report This]Date: 04/09/25 11:07 pm
Broots. He's so torn apart by this. Breaks my heart. It's beautiful the way he loves Parker and always has. So beautiful. I have secretly shipped them at times. That cold dick episode made sense to me. They were so cute.
I'm so completely freaking stoked by this. It's a breath of fresh air, Mirage.
Reviewer: Jameason Signed [Report This]Date: 04/09/25 11:07 pm
I.
Cannot.
Even.
"The nifty portal Parker and Jarod had ducked into in Munich had spat them out onto a private, sprawling Mahébourg estate that could be accessed only by boat or air."
Oomph! Jarod, Jarod, Jarod. Tsk tsk tsk tsk.
So dark.
Reviewer: Jameason Signed [Report This]Date: 04/09/25 11:03 pm
That third chapter was an amazing surprise. Broots and Sydney! It's so good to see them together and still close. They have Parker's back just like I always knew they would. Broots IS honoring a promise. I hope he takes Jarod down. I have to wonder how that will go. I can't wait to find out. It's so exciting. I was afraid to be excited. I'm a Pretender fan. We've been let down a few times. Our series was canceled. There was a promise of a return. I guess you know the rest.
But you have delivered. Thank you for that.
The only issue I have is that now I have to wait for the next chapter. I hope you continue, and as soon as possible.
Reviewer: ClaireBear Signed [Report This]Date: 04/09/25 10:57 pm
Jarod. Uhmm. It's Jarod, it's plausible. This sequel is what I've wanted for so long and you have delivered. I was afraid you'd gloss over and .. I dont know. I have faith in you. You always follow through with soild writing, so it's not that. It's just that I know it's hard to write this kind of content. I've tried and failed. I wanted to rush through, have it over with. You aren't rushing. Every word is plausible. It's perfect. It's what I hoped for, and better than I even hoped for. So please continue. Thank you.
Reviewer: ClaireBear Signed [Report This]Date: 04/09/25 10:54 pm
Yay, Broots and Sydney are still searching OMG!
Broots is seriously done with Jarod's sh!te and I'm here for it!
More please?
Reviewer: d_el1 Signed [Report This]Date: 03/09/25 09:46 pm
Oh MY GODDESSES!
Jarod is just so sexily evil. Deliciously awful. Looking that good and being that bad. Uh huh! Slays me.
SO much truth and plausibility in every word. The chapters are SOOOO short.
I need longer chapters. You can do it.
Reviewer: d_el1 Signed [Report This]Date: 03/09/25 09:43 pm
Bam! Bravo, and oh, snap, the long long long LONG awaited sequel.
I love this already. So much action. What a thriller!
I'm so thankful that there are 3 chapters all set for me. Only 3 tho. I wish there were more. I want to binge read you.
Reviewer: d_el1 Signed [Report This]Date: 03/09/25 09:41 pm
Congratulations! Oooh I love it!
Please write more. Don't make me break out the whip now.
Because I will if I have to.
Your characters are bang on and the dialog is amazing, heartfelt, such
wholesome moments between two friends and colleagues trying to support
each other while they search for their missing friend.
It's Pretender perfect of course.
Thank you for writing.
Reviewer: Miss Parkere Signed [Report This]Date: 03/09/25 05:55 am
More. Now. Please.
Thank you for writing.
Please never stop.
Reviewer: Revenant Signed [Report This]Date: 03/09/25 01:28 am
Alsways seeing Jarod in these roles and Michael it's so different to the normal Jarod. But not too different as you are right always that he removed a kidney from man without permission and that is assault and doctors can go to prison for that here in my country. this remains plausible and more do and scarier because it is Jarod .
When I first saw Iowa which you might not be familiar with I was startled and I was not startled also.
Freeway felt the same startled but not startled.
This is a fantastico written and the plotting is magnificento!
I want to read more of this now.
I hope Parker will be as okay as she can be when she is away from Jarod again.
The wealth buys power and the power allows this. Just like the Epstein case. All those men, decades of abuse and trafficking, and a lot of people knew and kept it secret. It's realistic. This needs to be written.
Reviewer: Nooms Signed
[Report This]Date: 01/09/25 07:58 pm
Woot woot 🙌🏼 🎉 didn't know there was a third chappie for me to read so I'm so thrilled but now I will have to wait for chappie four.
This is amazing really like everything you write
Pure gold 🥇 every time!
I want more. I need it to bad right now!
[Report This]Date: 01/09/25 03:20 am
Yeppies wealth does buy happiness and looking at what trump has done it also buys escape from accountability
.
You are so spot on!
Can't get enough
More please?
[Report This]Date: 01/09/25 03:17 am
