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Title: Chapter 2

Jarod. Uhmm. It's Jarod, it's plausible. This sequel is what I've wanted for so long and you have delivered. I was afraid you'd gloss over and .. I dont know. I have faith in you. You always follow through with soild writing, so it's not that. It's just that I know it's hard to write this kind of content. I've tried and failed. I wanted to rush through, have it over with. You aren't rushing. Every word is plausible. It's perfect. It's what I hoped for, and better than I even hoped for. So please continue. Thank you.

Reviewer: ClaireBear Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04/09/25 10:54 pm
Title: Chapter 3

Yay, Broots and Sydney are still searching OMG!

Broots is seriously done with Jarod's sh!te and I'm here for it!

More please?

Reviewer: d_el1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03/09/25 09:46 pm
Title: Chapter 2

Oh MY GODDESSES!

Jarod is just so sexily evil. Deliciously awful. Looking that good and being that bad. Uh huh! Slays me.

SO much truth and plausibility in every word. The chapters are SOOOO short.

I need longer chapters. You can do it.

Reviewer: d_el1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03/09/25 09:43 pm
Title: Chapter 1

Bam! Bravo, and oh, snap, the long long long LONG awaited sequel.
I love this already. So much action. What a thriller!

I'm so thankful that there are 3 chapters all set for me. Only 3 tho. I wish there were more. I want to binge read you.

Reviewer: d_el1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03/09/25 09:41 pm
Title: Chapter 3

Congratulations! Oooh I love it!

Please write more. Don't make me break out the whip now.

Because I will if I have to.

Your characters are bang on and the dialog is amazing, heartfelt, such

wholesome moments between two friends and colleagues trying to support

each other while they search for their missing friend.

It's Pretender perfect of course.

Thank you for writing.

Reviewer: Miss Parkere Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03/09/25 05:55 am
Title: Chapter 3

More. Now. Please.

Thank you for writing.

Please never stop.

Reviewer: Revenant Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03/09/25 01:28 am
Title: Chapter 3

Alsways seeing Jarod in these roles and Michael it's so different to the normal Jarod. But not too different as you are right always that he removed a kidney from man without permission and that is assault and doctors can go to prison for that here in my country. this remains plausible and more do and scarier because it is Jarod .

When I first saw Iowa which you might not be familiar with I was startled and I was not startled also.

Freeway felt the same startled but not startled.

This is a fantastico written and the plotting is magnificento!

I want to read more of this now.

I hope Parker will be as okay as she can be when she is away from Jarod again.

The wealth buys power and the power allows this. Just like the Epstein case. All those men, decades of abuse and trafficking, and a lot of people knew and kept it secret. It's realistic. This needs to be written.

 

Reviewer: Nooms Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01/09/25 07:58 pm
Title: Chapter 3

Woot woot 🙌🏼 🎉 didn't know there was a third chappie  for me to read so I'm so thrilled but now I will have to wait for chappie four.

This is amazing really like everything you write

Pure gold 🥇 every time!

I want more. I need it to bad right now!

Reviewer: lisa Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01/09/25 03:20 am
Title: Chapter 2

Yeppies wealth does buy happiness and looking at what trump has done it also buys escape from accountability

.

You are so spot on!

Can't get enough

More please?

Reviewer: lisa Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01/09/25 03:17 am
Title: Chapter 3

Sweet! Action packed and fast paced but doesn't feel rushed at all.

Top notch writing, mate!

Always so on point!

Top notch!

 

Reviewer: Jake Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31/08/25 07:55 pm
Title: Chapter 3

Broots ... he's so cool and I'm a geek too.

I love his tech talk and that he can see that people don't speak his tech language now and

Has to explain it simply to them.

The characters are all spot on!!

I love the action and plot too.

It's all amazing 😍 🤩

More please?

 

Thank you for writing!

Reviewer: Kayla Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31/08/25 07:38 pm
Title: Chapter 3

Woot mirage is back

and better than eva!

You have been missed!

This is so magnificent.

I just want more and more. Please never stop!

Reviewer: TheDarkAngel Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31/08/25 05:36 am
Title: Chapter 3

Woo Hoo! 😀 🙌🏼

I will sometimes find any Sydney scene dull but damn Broots clapping back and also

the intimacy of friendship they have here . It's wholesome and honest.

It's so real .

The anger and pain .. it's all savagely honest and real. I'm so excited to read more.

Thank you for sharing your gifts with us .

Ta.

Reviewer: The Miss Parker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30/08/25 05:53 pm
Title: Chapter 3

Oh Mirage this is so exquisite and well plotted and I'm already completely addicted.

You really just yank me right in and hold my attention.

 

More please?

Reviewer: Miss Shanon Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30/08/25 06:40 am
Title: Chapter 3

Hey I'm so glad you're back on the radar. You have me worried when you are gone for so long.

I hope all is well with you and your significant man.

My last email wasn't responded to ?

I love this, of course. Your writing is solid, the plotting is solid.

It's a solid story all throughout.

The characters are ..THE characters as always.

I eagerly await more.

Love to you.

Update soon please?

 

Reviewer: Contessa Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30/08/25 05:01 am
Title: Chapter 3

Please please please

 

Never stop writing OMG I love it so much.

I could read books and books filled with your writing.

They are so in character and the plot is so thrilling!

I need more right now.

Please hurry and write faster!

I need it so bad!

 

Reviewer: Joni Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30/08/25 02:33 am
Title: Chapter 3

I'm so relieved that you updated this and that Broots is closing in on Jarod and can rescue from Jarod Parker...soon. How is she going to react? I'm so excited to know more.

 

Please hurry.

Please hurry 🙏🏼 🙏🏼 🙏🏼 🙏🏼

More?

 

Reviewer: Sela Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30/08/25 01:31 am
Title: Chapter 3

Top notch, young lady! 🤩

Bravo!!!

Roses!

Reviewer: richie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30/08/25 01:09 am
Title: Chapter 3

Oomph. This, like everything you write, is amazing.

Reading you is always like watching the series. You bring the characters to life.

Congratulations 🎉.

Thank you for sticking with us

Reviewer: Kat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30/08/25 12:19 am
Title: Chapter 3

 😳

😯

😘

I'm so totally stoked for more.

Now please!?!

Please!

Reviewer: Xena Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29/08/25 10:53 pm
Title: Chapter 3

Aggghhhhh Broots. The poor fellow right? I can feel his agony. I can't wait for the gang to be all back together again. Parker is going to need all of the support she can get.

More please? Soon please!

Reviewer: Gem Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29/08/25 06:02 am
Title: Chapter 3

Hey, I love Sam, too. You really seem to love ALL of the characters, except sometimes maybe not Jarod so much.. not always, not when he torments Parker.

Sydney tells on himself a lot here. "You didn't Sam." And then says Broots has bias. Spot on.

I can feel the frustration they are both living with. I know how infuriating it is for them both. Sydney telling Broots alcohol isn't answer and then Broots saying it is the answer. Broots wishing that Sam had killed Jarod.. it's anger and frustration. Broots always was the normal fan's eyes, he was the normie of the gang, the average person surrounded by craazy and danger, and totally human and wishing Sam had killed Jarod is also really human, it's a normal human response to want horrible people gone, I think. Jarod is horrible, and it doesn't matter that what happened to him was also horrific.

You're really go ALL-IN with this. You seem fearless about it too. I think I would be scared to show all of the humanity, the hope, the friendship but also the ugliness and the pain.

Your summary of Forces of Nature is "Nothing is more hideous than human nature" and you're right.

You're right.

This is brilliant already. I'm eager to read more.

Reviewer: nopiupiroie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29/08/25 03:29 am
Title: Chapter 3

I'm scared but I'm still reading. I love every word that I'm reading. I love how in character they are. It's magical. I feel excitement for more and hope you are writing as quickly as possible.

Reviewer: Thara Nicole Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29/08/25 02:37 am
Title: Chapter 3

Bravo bravo, young lady. You're a hell of an author and I'm glad you chose this fandom to write!❣❣❣💮🌸🌹🌺🌼ðŸ’�🌷🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌼🌼🌼🌼🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹

Reviewer: King Of Pain Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28/08/25 10:53 pm
Title: Chapter 3

Ohh this. So much this!

I can't get enough!!!

Reviewer: Jami Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28/08/25 06:15 pm
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