Omfg Holy wows! 

Mirage oh please keep going and please go faster!

This chapter MUAH 😘💋 chef's kiss baby! 

"One more rep"

Omg!

There's a fine line between coach-like (coach not couch if Donald bowman VP is reading..don't want him getting excited)  encouragement and coercion and coercive control.

Jarod is less like a cheer leader a lot of times and more like a control freak.

You painted a clear picture with words of what their life together has looked like.

Jarod often reminds me of Dr Mike during the Mike-tries-to-get-into-Robin's-pants years ...and because you're not a soap watcher (I read your review responses and I know that you don't know who Dr. Mike is so I'll spoil it) Yes years! It took him years and then after the frustration and pressure he has the audacity to ask just before taking her v card "are you sure?" If she'd been sure it wouldn't have taken him years. I remember this because Halloween. He took her virginity on Halloween on an island where they were stranded....in a storm. Very carthis only no ocee to rescue the damsel from Mr handsy.

You have Jarod tell Parker to "look at me" in some of your writings and dr Mike did the same to Robin ...so I think he and Jarod both give off those vibes. It's just that type of character maybe? 

maybe?

I try to pick your brain and I hope you'll respond. I'm curious about your method of writing.

I love this chapter. Another level of dark that at first glance doesn't seem that that dark.

I crave more!

Oooh he is a "1 more rep" man inn't he?

You nail the characters.

It's kind of spooky, really actually.

It's Giving big "can't stop now or balls will explode" energy for real ..

Jarod has always been a lil' problematic.

Dr. Mike was a lil' problematic 2. If you're familiar? You're too young to be familiar methinks . I'm shocked that you know what the pretender is ..you are so young.

You won't want to see the man in Iowa or in Freeway or Malibu drive or .

The other freeway. Omg. The characters were like an entire build up from borderline rapey to full blown rapist-phile.

Written in blood was good tho.

Marmalade is blah but Michael's performance was perfect...spitting out that potato lol! Watch it and you will see. All of Michael's performances are perfect...so perfect in fact that it's terrifying to watch sometimes.

If you see Iowa you'll know what I mean. Michael is an amazing actor, really expressive, really goes in all the way, immersing himself so it's scary if he's the baddie.

As you have pointed out Jarod was really the good guy. He crossed lines. Do you know how good Michael is to be able to do that. You agree? I hope?

If you ever watch net worth send me a copy I can't find it any where. It's kike the man was in movies and most of the movies vanished and are hard to find .

I can talk about him all day

I can talk about your writing all day too.

The way you capture the essence of Jarod, the nuances, without showing all of the horror. He pushes her beyond her limits and we know he does it often, and we sort of know what that means in relation to their..marriage? Are they really married? Omfg he is so bad .. and so sexy and so hot and so so bad. That's Jarod tho and always has been. He just .. he's never been completely good. He needs vengeance, needs to labels it justice,

and taking her away and coercing her thru brainwashing or whatever is something he will call justice because that's how he does it ...he is a one man judge, jury and executioner-punishner..

He was always that way during the tv series ..a bit like Kyle...he decides.

She should be able to annul that later?

Oh I need more!

Now!

Heyy yeahhh I love it.

More please?!

Halloween and EvilJarod.

Is he the scariest thing you can think of....which would be understandable. He can be anyone and he can do ANYthing and he said that himself and there were no exceptions mentioned

This is plausible.

He did violate that one prisoner's bodily integrity by stealing his kidney. That is criminal. Rape isn't that different

This long term kidnapping and imprisonment could happen.

Jarod is able in his mind to justify it.

So I love this and how they seem so normal in this chapter. You give us a snapshot peek in at their life with him pushing her beyond her limits which can seem positive and life coachy but "done" means stop and Jarod didn't. You're subtle and not too subtle. It's perfect..dark. Seriously terrifying.

I want more !

Woot! I thought you were gonna leave me hanging on Halloween 🎃 🎃 👻 👻!

Thank you for the treat � �

No tricks. EXCEPT Jarod's!

He is so scary.

So charming, charismatic, sexy, hawwt!

I can see the characters.

Oh the working out ..reminds me of Jeffrey. You should see that one.

No rape, just gay guys . it's all good �� 😊

That guy from Wings co stars.. it's so cute that movie!

This is terrying because Jarod could pull it off and even feel justified

But he isn't and I can't wait for Parker to divorce him IF they are really married.

Putting the horror in the Halloween Mirage and it's a story that needs to be told!

Good looking, sweet, charismatic, kind men   are the least people expect to be rapists .

oh I was just rewatching days of our lives 86 and there's a whole story line where suspicion shifts to dr mike and I instantly thought of youand this story with darkJarod. 

Have you watched Days of our lives?

I know you are too young to have seen it but

I've sent you my files with every episodes Michael is in?

You should watch it .

It's a trip, girl! Like so cool and far out man lol. It's so 80s.

Anyway.. more please soon.

Keep going.

Hey wow I hope you didn't leave. I'm so excited for more of this and new updates and stories from you. I need more and more please don't say it's done. You have to keep these characters alive and the dream alive. I can't to it alone! It's a heavy torch to carry. I need this fandom. I need new pretender content to stay alive! This is my comfort series, the one I watch when things get bad and I watch loads cos things are always bad now! You have become my comfort author. Please please I'll beg I'll do anything if you'll keep writing and sharing.

I really hope you're well, safe, happy and that you'll come back!

Please!!!

I've been disappointed so many times first but the series cancelation and then the rest of it.

You can stop writing.

Please never stop writing and sharing.

Man, I love this. I should be writing my own story but I spend a lot of time reading you instead. It's my obsession. When I can spare time I come here to read you. I never thought you'd write a sequel to Forces of Nature and I'm so stoked for it. This is action packed and so much like watching an episode. Please continue.

My fingers are shaking right now still while trying to review. This is so amazing, so much anticipation for what is coming!!

You build it the story and tension, and omg I need more. Amazing! � �

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More please?!!

Oh no only 3 chapters!

I'm so dying now.

I need more Mirage!

Hurry. Please update this NOW and all of your stories

I can never get enough!

😱 Omg forces of nature squeeequel !

I'm so damn stoked!

Poor Broots. He feels it so hard tho right. He's the most normal of the gang, he promised, and... oooooohhh he's keeping the promise. I love this. Ialways loved the Sydney-Broots parts of the series. They're such pals, so much love for each other. It's like watching an episode of The Pretender, only this time Jarod really has gone too far. I hope they get Parker back safely and soon. The damage Jarod has done... I'm so excited about how you will approach that. I know you will. You have no fear! You go all IN. I'm going with YOU! Can't wait for more!

Broots. He's so torn apart by this. Breaks my heart. It's beautiful the way he loves Parker and always has. So beautiful. I have secretly shipped them at times. That cold dick episode made sense to me. They were so cute.

I'm so completely freaking stoked by this. It's a breath of fresh air, Mirage.

That third chapter was an amazing surprise. Broots and Sydney! It's so good to see them together and still close. They have Parker's back just like I always knew they would. Broots IS honoring a promise. I hope he takes Jarod down. I have to wonder how that will go. I can't wait to find out. It's so exciting. I was afraid to be excited. I'm a Pretender fan. We've been let down a few times. Our series was canceled. There was a promise of a return. I guess you know the rest.

But you have delivered. Thank you for that.

The only issue I have is that now I have to wait for the next chapter. I hope you continue, and as soon as possible.