Always impressive, Mirage, always, always. Your stories are visual, rich in detail, and so so succinct. Jarod is so ouhhh Jarod ..and all of the characters are so in character.
Please continue. 🙏🏼
Reviewer: Sydney Signed
[Report This]Date: 28/06/25 05:05 am
Oomph! Please type as quickly as your little fingers can, please. I've been waiting so long for this. The writing and story telling is out of this freaking world!
Jarod believed he wouldn't be seeing either men again, and that's precisely what they wanted Jarod to believe." Jarod's purring, his confidence, Parker's voice. I can hear and see and feel it all. Ooh. Chills. Like OLD times. Like watching an episode. You are so in sync with the series and characters. Perfecto! Thank you for writing, for sharing, for being you. I need this in my life. I need more and more and more of The Pretender.
[Report This]Date: 27/06/25 04:24 am
Oh, I've been so eager for this and you exceeded my expectations! I love it. More please?
Reviewer: Jen Signed [Report This]Date: 26/06/25 02:37 am
Scarily plausible. You really know how to craft a seamless story, build tension, maintain the characterisations, and all the rest of the attributes and qualities of an phenomenal author. You know how to engage and hold my attention. Your prose is amazing and your storytelling, like always, takes a hold and doesn't let go. The characters are THE characters. I'm excited to read more. ‘🏼 ‘🏼 🎉
Reviewer: Miss Shanon Signed [Report This]Date: 25/06/25 09:11 pm
Perfect. Pretender perfect. Manipulation and dishonesty has always come natural to Jarod. At the end of each episode he was like, "I lied, I'm not even in the army" or "I'm not really surgeon, and so on" He has lied his way into people's lives and deceived and maybe for the right reasons, it can be argued. That's not the point tho. The point is he can do it and he does it easily and he believes he's always just and he will always justify his reasons. That means this too is plausible and that he can just as easily justify ill intent and can just as easily lie and deceive for ill intent. You're on the really very few authors or fans who will acknowledge Jarod's darkness. He has it. He was going to kill a man with his bare hands but kept seeing his mom's face and couldn't do it but he's capable and pushed a little bit further could easily do it. He violated Luther Ecksely's autonomy by stealing a kidney. Even if Luther had consented, Luther obviously changed his mind and said no but Jarod didn't stop. It was really a rape kind of. It was shocking. Jarod goes too far.I love that you explore the darkness too. You're not afraid to do it or of what reviewers will say. You do it brilliantlly too. Thank you and Congratulations on this second chapter. Bravo!
Reviewer: Con-O Signed [Report This]Date: 25/06/25 08:59 pm
Oh I'm hooked on this and terrified of what will happen. I'm worried about what will happen after Parker discovers what Jarod has done to her. Oh 😱 😱 😮
The writing is solid and beautiful. I want more as soon as you can deliver it ❣️
Reviewer: Garbiella Signed [Report This]Date: 25/06/25 07:05 am
WOW. Just wow. Oh my God. Your writing blows my a$$ away. Quality ALL THE WAY.
[Report This]Date: 25/06/25 06:24 am
Magnificent. I love your approach to informing the reader in a way that doesn't overpower or drown out the story itself. This chapter provides enough detail that I begin to understand how Jarod has successfully kept himself and Parker safe in public. You're concise and clarify before I can even ask, like you anticipate my questions while writing and answer it. You know me the reader well. Money and disguises along with the fact that they are out in public can go a long way in shutting down anyone who might think they recognize the couple. Powerful writing. You have a powerful voice. Thank you for lending it to this fandom. I love The Pretender and I can tell that you do too.
Until next time, Mirage,
Ciao!
Reviewer: Michael Signed [Report This]Date: 25/06/25 05:13 am
Oh my namesake isn't gonna be happy about this when it all falls apart.. I'm so damn stoked to see how it goes and either way I love your writing and nevermind that I'm addicted anyway .
I hope she'll kick jarods ass or even worse. He's done wrong.
Give me more!
Reviewer: The Miss Parker Signed [Report This]Date: 25/06/25 04:58 am
Oh my god. The way you write! It grips me. Jarod is watching Parker swim and also sees Parker in the past, in his other pool, decades ago. I can't even! He's been so careful. I'm so glad Broots is closing in. I hope Parker will recover. I'm reading FON again and trying to... uhhhhh it's such a difficult topic. You handle with grace and respect. I appreciate all you do. You're the best.
Reviewer: Kayla Signed [Report This]Date: 25/06/25 04:58 am
How am I supposed to be able to THINK after that?! Every word clicks, like music. I'm in awe. The way you backfill this, bringing up to speed without going into too much detail, and again... doing that thing where you ease readers towards the the deep end, giving us a chance to see if it's too deep, instead of tossing us in, giving us the chance to get off the ride before it gets too bumpy. I see you, Girl. I know what you're doing. I love you for it. I Prefer it to trigger warnings. Trigger warnings make me feel weird, so thank you for this.
Jarod is SO freaking Jarod in this. Watching her swim. His "I think I manage both." ERMAFRAKNgawd! I can see Jarod. I can hear Jarod. I can see Parker, so sexy, so in control or she thinks she is. It will all come tumbling down won't it? She will be so crushed. I'm excited and afraid.
Reviewer: Contessa Signed [Report This]Date: 25/06/25 04:42 am
OMG I need more and more of this. I could read entire books of this. I wish you wrote books and books of this. Until you do I have printed everything you've written and put them in binders. I want real books of you. Congrats!
Reviewer: needlepoint Signed [Report This]Date: 25/06/25 04:07 am
Top shelf here. I'm gonna need more real soon young one.
Reviewer: Jarod Signed [Report This]Date: 25/06/25 03:33 am
Mmmmm--mmmm DarkJarod tho. Damn. Hot. Intelligent, dangerous, evil as can be and still hot. Terrifying. This is plausible. That's the most scary part of all of this. Did he steal the Centre and Triumvirate's money? I'm thinking he did. I know you'll explain it all. You always do. I'm so antsy for more right now. I know you have real life things to do. Oh, but please hurry as fast as you can. Please and thank you.
Reviewer: Xena Signed [Report This]Date: 25/06/25 02:27 am
The dark Jarod. Magnifique!
Reviewer: Archange Signed [Report This]Date: 25/06/25 02:14 am
Oh shit!!! Obscene wealth. Yep we've seen what that ‘🏼 ‘🏼 can do.
It allows avowed and adjudicated sex offenders to be potus in the US and we all know Space Karen keeps getting his way too. Never accountability.
Money does buy happiness. Rich people say it doesn't because they're afraid people will want to take it from them,and it's another way to get pity even to they don't deserve it.
You are right. I've thought about it and used to disagree but now thinking about life and this perspective money DOES buy happiness.
Money buys healthcare and if mental health care can help people be happy and we can't afford the therapy without the money then Yep you nailed it and money allows Jarod to keep Parker and keeping parker makes Jarod happy so yes ’ money buys happiness.
Money buys houses, cars, food, electricity, cool air, warmth in winters, proper clothes, Good health, good teeth, good food, good wine eg things we would be miserable without.
I hope broots nails Jarod! Jarod has to be accountable eventually. Please make it so .
Everyone is in character it's all perfect. I need more !
No complaints!
Reviewer: Leslie Signed [Report This]Date: 25/06/25 01:20 am
Squee!!!!!!!! How did I miss this? Oh, GOD! I almost didn't see "FON sequel" at all. Forces Of Nature! Oh, god. I gotta stock on something stronger than tea for this! I can't wait. I love DarkJarod. I've wondered what will happen next. I finally get to find out! Oh, thank you Mirage!
Reviewer: Rozzo Signed [Report This]Date: 26/03/25 02:29 am
OMG! I've been wanting this for so many years! I'm so excited for this. Please update soon!
Reviewer: Angela Penn Signed [Report This]Date: 25/03/25 04:34 am
Whoa you're finally writing a sequel to Forces of Nature. Mind=BLOWN.
This is a breath-taking, impactful, full blwon, action packed and fast paced, emotional first chapter to the beginning of what I'm sure will be a full blown amazing sequel. I can't wait, or I can, but I don't want to wait.
Reviewer: James Signed [Report This]Date: 24/03/25 10:49 pm
I just read FON and this chapter of the sequel and I'm excited to know how it will all turn out. Jarod is as bad as I always knew he could. I'm glad Parker isn't a Stepford wife. She is still her own person and seems challenging still!
I'm so impressed with your ability to take the dark parts of Jarod and turn them inside out so we can see them so clearly. He keeps his dark hidden well from people.
This was fast paced and visually appealing and SOOOOO professionally written. I want more and more. I will have to go back and review FON but no time now.
Reviewer: Nooms Signed [Report This]Date: 20/03/25 11:49 pm
Oh wow Mirage I don't know the words to say. I have all of the excitement for this. More please!
Reviewer: MlleParker Signed [Report This]Date: 20/03/25 08:50 pm
I'm so excited for this sequel! I thought I'd reviewed this but don't see my review. I hope you can update this soon and update all of your fics!
Reviewer: Jen Signed [Report This]Date: 20/03/25 08:25 pm
THE FON?! You're updating FON! OMG! OMG!
Just OMG.
I can't freaking wait. I've been wishing and hoping for so many years.
Finally.
Big thanks to you. I love this first chapter. My God this springs directly to action and it's so action packed and brilliant genius.
Please wirte as quickly as you can.
[Report This]Date: 20/03/25 06:26 am
I heard the rumors but I didn't believe!
A sequel to Forces of Nature! FIIIIIINALLY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
This is amazing, action packed, so brilliantly writing. Your writing voice is powerful! You have that ability to yank me in from the first word and hold my attention. I LOVE this! More please? Soon!
Reviewer: ClaireBear Signed [Report This]Date: 13/03/25 09:28 pm
