I've missed you so much girl. It's so good to see you here again and what a hell of a wondeful installment to The Return series. It's happening. You're really bringing them together and not just for the sex. In some of your other in process stories they've had sex but haven't even embraced as adults so it's important to see this and the evolution. I love it. You are articulate and provide precious details and I need more. Please.
Reviewer: Leese Signed
[Report This]Date: 15/11/23 05:00 am
Welcome back. Big hugs. Oh, this is it! I love it. Jarod is so gentle with her and oh, I know you're not a shipper but thank you for understanding and giving the shippers these special gifts.
Your descriptive work and characterisations have always been impressive and you've really developed the characters to perfection. Word choice is beautiful. I love this.
Thank you for checking in with us, for not just checking in but also sharing your brilliant gifts with us. Please keep checking in with me or with Jami, both if you want. Let us know if you need anything, even just to talk. I'll give you my number. I know you're a private person. I'm glad you're finally sharing a little bit of your life with us so we can send you positive energy.
Thank you. Thank you. Thank you. Take care of yourself.
Stay well. Happy holidays if you don't post again before then.
Reviewer: Contessa Signed [Report This]Date: 15/11/23 03:53 am
Congratulations!
Let me count the ways I'm in love with this young lady.
I haven't read anyone touch the topic of human sacrifices even though it was discussed heavily during IOTH. The sword in the Alley Sports Bar. The sacrifices that have to be made for messing with the scrolls. I'm glad you're exploring this and I love it. I was afraid you were going another direction with this but you surprised me and made this brilliant turn.
I love how Broots that Broots is, even if his the mastermind and was with the government infiltrating the Centre as a tech. He's still Broots. He's still worried. He must feel like he's sending his children away and putting the oldest, Jarod, in charge.
I love how you describe Jarod's concealed feelings. We don't always get to know how he's feeling. He always plays it cool and it's nice that he isn't so cool now and he's made some mistakes and revealed darkness. It's like you saw that in him before some of the others did, and instead of stopping writing the darker Jarod stories you wrote several more darkJarod stories. I love that about you.
I think it still alienates some fans because he's so sweet and so Greg Brady on the surface. It's his facade. He talks about Parker's. It takes one to know and that's why. He's hiding too. Jarod is dangerous and I needed to read your perspective to see that myself. It's like the truth is there and we don't want to see it.
Did you know that Michael T. Weiss wanted Jarod to be darker? It's in the special featurettes on the DVD. They said it. They said something about arguing about how dark he would go.
Season 5 would have been darker Jarod. Michael wanted Jarod to get darker.
You gave him what the networks didn't whether you're aware or not. I love it.
So, keep doing what you're doing. We like Jarod any flavor we can get him and you write him in all of the flavors of the rainbow and it's terrific. I love your work. More please?
Reviewer: Sydney Signed [Report This]Date: 15/11/23 01:01 am
Happy dancing in my chair right now young lady!
What I love most about reading you is it's the perfect transition from IOTH or any of the seasons. I watch IOTH about once a week and then click any of your stories and it's a perfect flow.
You really know the characters and you know where to put them and obviously spend a lot of time plotting and figuring it all out.
You're brilliant.
more please?
Reviewer: Revenant Signed
[Report This]Date: 14/11/23 10:19 pm
😭 I love this. It's so beautiful the way Jarod tells her it's her turn to listen. She is his life!!!!!
I love that the safehouse is like concealed among houses where it looks like dozens of families live but it's all an illusion.
A new normal..I look forward to reading more of their new normal.
You have so much of a tragedy going on in your life and I can't tell it from reading this.
It doesn't show at all.
You were born to write this. Please continue when you can. Remember to check in with us on your life too.’–’–’–
Reviewer: Jami Signed [Report This]Date: 14/11/23 07:16 pm
Oh woot 🎉 Mirage I have all the love for this 🤩’–!!
It's like coming home from school and watching an episode. I love how he touches her...oh the shipper feels ... written beautifully by a non shipper of all people!!
More!! omg please 🙏 🙏 🙏 more?
Reviewer: Cal Signed [Report This]Date: 14/11/23 04:37 pm
Top notch mate as always.
Reviewer: King Of Pain Signed [Report This]Date: 14/11/23 07:33 am
There you are! Thankfully..Was so worried about you .
Oh oh this is amazing work. I. love. how tender he is with her, how he so obviously loves her... and you're not a shipper???!! I love that Parker wanted Margaret's affection, that the relationships have evolved and grown. I love all of it and could read it forever.
More please.
Reviewer: Chloe Signed [Report This]Date: 14/11/23 07:28 am
