Whewww I hope Parker is ok. MORE
Reviewer: lisa Signed



[Report This]Date: 05/11/26 12:09 am
DO keep going please. I love this.
Reviewer: Rozzo Signed



[Report This]Date: 04/11/26 10:32 pm
I'm still enjoying every word. I don't know how you ladies continue to think up original plots for this old series, but bloody well done.
Reviewer: Mr PezHead Signed



[Report This]Date: 04/11/26 09:35 pm
Your humor is wonderful. Keep writing please.
Reviewer: Leese Signed



[Report This]Date: 26/10/26 09:12 pm
Oooh the humor in this "she might have died... people who are shot do that sometimes."lol
😂




[Report This]Date: 25/10/26 03:10 am
i hope miss parker is ok. great job.
Reviewer: Lorraina Signed



[Report This]Date: 23/10/26 02:32 am
The little bit of humor in this "and, really, she might have died, because people have a tendency to do that when they're shot. " lol so accurate lol.
Keep going.
Reviewer: Felicia Signed



[Report This]Date: 22/10/26 11:29 pm
Oh, snap, it's so good!!
Reviewer: Xena Signed



[Report This]Date: 22/10/26 10:58 pm
Good job.
Reviewer: richie Signed



[Report This]Date: 22/10/26 04:06 am
ooh, keep going, I love it.
Reviewer: Gem Signed



[Report This]Date: 22/10/26 03:08 am
Gah, that was hilarious. Your humor is so dead pan but so hilarious. People do have a tendency to die when they've been shot lol. I'm enjoying this.
Reviewer: Cal Signed



[Report This]Date: 21/10/26 05:17 am
Jarod turned that one around. Lyle isn't wrong though. Organ theft is organ theft. Keep going.
Reviewer: Jeremy Signed



[Report This]Date: 21/10/26 04:39 am
MORE.
Reviewer: Amelia_ Signed



[Report This]Date: 21/10/26 04:35 am
Awesome..I hope you'll continue.
Reviewer: Leese Signed



[Report This]Date: 25/03/25 06:14 am
Just read the entire thing. I love it. Well done.
Reviewer: April L Signed



[Report This]Date: 20/03/25 08:40 pm
Ooh nice. I'm here for it.
Reviewer: nopiupiroie Signed



[Report This]Date: 20/03/25 06:30 am
I'm loving the twists. More?
Reviewer: Amelia_ Signed



[Report This]Date: 20/03/25 05:47 am
Omg 😰 😳 I hope miss p will be ok 🙏🏽
So exciting and beautifully written.
Reviewer: Miss Shanon Signed




[Report This]Date: 18/03/25 08:42 pm
Omg more. I need more.
Reviewer: Jen Signed



[Report This]Date: 18/03/25 06:21 am
More please
Reviewer: Monica Signed



[Report This]Date: 17/03/25 03:54 am
I hope you are writing quickly. I love this!
Reviewer: ClaireBear Signed



[Report This]Date: 13/03/25 09:23 pm
A short gut punch of a chapter to keep me on the edge of my seat. I love it.
Reviewer: Jarod Signed



[Report This]Date: 12/03/25 09:47 pm
This is very well done. I love your voice. Beautifully done.
Reviewer: Jarod Signed



[Report This]Date: 12/03/25 09:44 pm
I'll add that I love the dystopian theme which is very realistic for the states currently. It could very easily come to this. People will be finding out soon, those who aren't already aware now.
Reviewer: Michael Signed



[Report This]Date: 11/03/25 08:57 pm
