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Title: Chapter 7

 ****chef's kiss**** Yummy awesome sauce Mirage.

This is delicious!

I want more. I will gobble up everything you write and always crave more.

Squeee Jarod and Parker together at last and plot twist they are inside the Centre. I love it. I'm so damn stoked. More please? Soon please.

Reviewer: Miss Parkere Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29/05/25 04:41 am
Title: Chapter 7

I remember when Parker learned of what happened to Timmy to create Angelo and how she knelt beside him and they cried. OMG. This tearful scene when Jarod tells her that they chipped Angelo first takes me back. Parker has a sweet spot for Angelo and children.

Parker and Jarod know too well the repecussions. Jarod can never leave now until Angelo escapes and removes his chip. Mirage, I love this. You're a real wordsmith, too. Thank you for updating. I look forward to reading the next chapter.

Reviewer: Rozzo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29/05/25 02:23 am
Title: Chapter 1

I'm chair-dancing. This is delightful.

The way Parker tells Jarod to escape. The way Jarod tells Parker to escape. 💞🀯🀀Those 2 are maddening. I want them to escape together. Neither of them can escape right now without risking Angelo and Parker's baby brother's lives. The Centre really has them now. I want more. I've always wanted to see Jarod and Parker in the Centre at the same time and forced to communicate. That forced proximity thing man. I'm so down for that. I'm so stoked. More of this please.

Reviewer: Jana Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28/05/25 06:45 am
Title: Chapter 7

Uhhh-hmmmmm I love this so much. I need more and more.

Reviewer: Lorraina Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28/05/25 04:28 am
Title: Chapter 7

This is exquisite dear author.

Jarod's longing to tell Parker the entire truth, to have her think only good things about him is so visceral and poignant.

He loves her so much that he stops himself and doesn't say the three words because he fears it will be a burden to her.
The way he reproves himself after confessing everything else because in the end he still lied to her is so in character for him, or he believes he lied. He didn't pick up on the fact that she was dishonest. She isn't leaving. She never agreed to leave either but she didn't say she woudln't. She was still deceptive but her reasons are valid.A lot of people would paint it black or white and wrong or right but there's always more to with Jarod and Parker. You capture the heart, soul, mind, spirit, the entire body and being of the series. I'm eager to read the next chapters already. I'm becoming more impatient and trying to stay patient. I know you have a real life, job, relationships, and probably a large giant circle of people in your life who need your attention.  I read something about how you have gardens and also in your response to reviews I read that you also rescue cats and find them homes? I don't know how you find time to even write as much as you do write and I appreciate the time you devote to keeping the dream alive. This series has always been near and dear to my heart and it shouldn't have ended. It should never end.

I thank you with all of my heart. ❀

Reviewer: Kyle McLane Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27/05/25 09:02 pm
Title: Chapter 7

Oh I love it! So want to read more now. Please update Peripetia too and Lacuane, Oblivion, and Residuum. I need them all updated. I'm totally jonesing for my pretender fix.

Reviewer: Cal Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27/05/25 01:48 am
Title: Chapter 7

Extraordinary Mirage. This is powerful and tender, subtle and poignant, and still succinct.

Jarod back inside the Centre. I'm so excited to read more.

Reviewer: Sydney Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27/05/25 12:41 am
Title: Chapter 7

🌹 🌹 🌹 🌹 🌹

Bravo this is Top notch!

Cheers!

🌹🌹🌹 🌹

🌺 🌷 💐💐🌹🌺

 

Reviewer: James Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26/05/25 06:42 pm
Title: Chapter 7

Ahhhh mirage it's always a breath of fresh air to read you.

I'm excited to see how the pair will cope and their relationship evolve inside the Centre together.

 

I'm seriously stoked!  More please like always!! XO

Reviewer: Xena Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26/05/25 03:47 am
Title: Chapter 7

So exciting and magnificent! 😁😁😁😁😁😁

Reviewer: Garbiella Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26/05/25 12:56 am
Title: Chapter 7

OMG they so obviously love each other dearly omg.

Mirage this is everything and so pretenderY. I need more and more!

Please? πŸ™πŸΌ πŸ™πŸΌ

Reviewer: Chloe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25/05/25 05:01 am
Title: Chapter 7

Ahhh uhh bless. The bunnies! It'll always come back to the bunnies πŸ‡ πŸ‡ 🐰 🐰 πŸ‡

I need more! Now!

Please and thank you!

 

Reviewer: Jen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25/05/25 03:56 am
Title: Chapter 7

Exquisite πŸ˜‹

I'm excited to read more.

Reviewer: Miss Shanon Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24/05/25 09:03 pm
Title: Chapter 7

This one is a tearjerker. Angelo. My heart.

Smart of the centre to implant Jarod tho.

That's one way to make him stay.

More please!

Reviewer: Jillian Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24/05/25 03:19 am
Title: Chapter 7

Bravo! 🌹🌹👏🏼 👏🏼 πŸ™ŒπŸΌ

It's always unexpected when you write Miss Parker showing the softener side, and essentially confessing her feelings for Jarod, and I don't know why it feels unexpected or out of character for you because you've written that side of her many times. For some reason it seems like you are reluctantly for those two to be together even though they are often together when you write them.

I'm in awe as always, impressed.

You know what you're doing.

I'm not even surprised. I've come to expect this quality from you.

I'm eager to read the next chapter.

Until next time Mirage 🌹💐,

Ciao!

Reviewer: Michael Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23/05/25 10:24 pm
Title: Chapter 7

Oooh plot thickens. I love it. I'm fantasizing about Jarod and Parker having sex in the Centre!!!

Please make it so.

Soon!

 

Reviewer: Jami Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23/05/25 06:12 pm
Title: Chapter 7

Whoa baby this is my new favorite novel. I don't call them fics. They are novels.
You've got the characters down pat, the dialogue is perfect, all of it is perfect. You are a wordsmith and an amazing storyteller.
I want more and more.
Please never stop writing.

Reviewer: Monica Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23/05/25 05:39 pm
Title: Chapter 7

oh my goodness! You just keep on besting yourself and amazing me, don't you?

The bunnies. It all comes down to the bunnies. Jarod's deja vu. Ohhhhh thank you for the continuity.

I love this.

More please?

Reviewer: valerie_ Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23/05/25 06:36 am
Title: Chapter 7

Squeee! OMG! So many WOWS!

No one writes like this. It's so amazing. YOU are fracking amazing!

"Parker had worked hard for Jarod's anger, had earned it, and had craved his savagery like it was a drug; she was remarkably perturbed that he'd cut it with comfort, laced it with kindness, convincing Parker that one truly could kill with the stuff. Jarod certainly could, if anyone could."

Jarod cutting his anger with comfort FOR HER and lacing his anger with kindness I'm so blown away. Blown all the way away.
More please?

Reviewer: Kayla Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23/05/25 06:17 am
Title: Chapter 7

Oh, Jarod, bless his heart. He always has to purge the sins of his soul. That totally tracks. Thank you for writing about menstruation. More people (men) need to know about this kind of thing. And it's kind of important that girls know about the blood part of sex, those of who didn't rupture a hymen horse back riding that is. Mine was extra tough. I rode horses, bikes, climbed fences, had every reason to not still have a hymen but let me tell that my hymen was nearly impentrable. It took my BF hours to get through it.

So thanks. It's not a fun topic and kind of taboo for some reason but I love you for tackling it and doing it respectfully.

Reviewer: Lizzy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23/05/25 04:33 am
Title: Chapter 7

I was afraid there wouldn't be any emotional Jarod-MP scenes but ohhh Mirage my heart. I love you for this. I love you so much. Your writing is beautiful, so real and plausible. I love it. I want more. Please write as quickly as you can. I know you are writing several stories at once. I don't know how you do it, but I want them all updated and I want more of all them. WRite some new ones too. Thank you for all you do to fix the craving. I still need the fix.

Reviewer: ClaireBear Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23/05/25 03:43 am
Title: Chapter 7

Holy god Mirage, you've created a monster in me, one that is always starving for more chapters.I'm the biggest Pretender fan, the biggest ever Michael T. Weiss and omfg you wirte them all so perfectly. More, please.

Reviewer: Nooms Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23/05/25 02:47 am
Title: Chapter 7

OMG! She didn't deny it!!! YAAAAAAH! Jarod's like "we know the truth, it's getting harder to conceal it" and OMG Parker didn't deny it. I'm so dead right now I can't EVEN!!!! Oh, I love that Jarod is confessing to Parker that way. He always has to get it out and I LOVE LOVE Freaking LOVE that Parker's opinion is the one he's gonna think about when he dies, so he tells her everything like a guilty cheating husband would. Things like menstruation wouldn't bother Jarod at all. He's THAT man. He's been a doctor, a midwife, he's a genius and he knows it all. First I was like, how does he know Parker knew that Mark was telling the truth, but Jarod knows crap about Parker. JAROD KNOWS PARKER! He knew when she wanted to kill Briggie that it wasn't the unfinished business, HE KNEW IT WAS SOMETHING ELSE. and it was. It was telling Thomas she loved him. He JUST KNEW! He knows her.... but wow I didn't see it coming that he would be Miuna's first man lover and the first time having sex can be a bloody freaking mess.. and I didn't get that memo when I was younger so I was well and proper freaked the freak out..That one's tough. Jarod must feel that his entire life has fallen apart now. He's guilty about Miuna's death, he's gulity about having sex with her while being in love with Parker...He would be. He feels it hard like that. They are both going to be in the Centre. OMG. I can't even wait for more. Hurry and write. Hurry. I love it.

Reviewer: Leslie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23/05/25 01:18 am
Title: Chapter 7

Phew. It begins with the comedic antics of Broots, and becomes serious quickly. Broots is struggling and while still bringing the comedy the reader still senses the gravity of the situation. It feels like you're taking my hand and gently leading me to the darker side, instead of kicking me over. I'm appreciative of the kid gloves right now. Life's so hard and people are so cruel. The things happening politically, the innocent migrants being roughly arrested by ICE and shipped to a prison in a country they've never even been to is breaking my heart. I just hate magaTs right now. IT's their fault.I'm glad I'm not a US citizen. SO many of them are sick.

Reading you is a breath of fresh air. It reminds me of the good things, the good hearts, the good times. Thank you.

I'm enjoying every word.

Reviewer: Kat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22/05/25 11:15 pm
Title: Chapter 7

Exquisite. I love how emotional it became between Jarod and Parker. I still have chill bumps all over me. I feel that so much. It's like watching an episode when I read you. You nail it. Every damn time.

Broots just wanting peace. Damn. He's feeling bad and it wasn't his fault. Parker wasn't going to bring Jarod in until Lyle showed up.That's true to her character. She's never captured him. She's never taken him back to the Centre. SHe can't. She won't do it. I feel so much for her. She's standing there telling Jarod to escape, demanding him to leave and he can't! I'm in tears, Mirage.

Jarod can't leave. He tells Parker to leave, and take her people with her. Oh god. He's trying to be strong, wants to confess his love to her but refuses to burden her.. the way Sydney didn't want to burden Jarod if he could escape.

My heart.But they both know they have feelings for each other. Parker doesn't even deny it when Jarod talks about how Faraijii discovering those feelings.

Poor Angelo. Let him be safe and happy.

I hope to see Sydney soon. He's still recovering from the health issue I presume.

That last part tho. Damn. Jarod won't have to feel guilty for long. He'll be seeing her soon I'm guessing. Can't ever get enough of you. Write faster please.

Reviewer: Sammi Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22/05/25 09:52 pm
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