Extraordinary Mirage. This is powerful and tender, subtle and poignant, and still succinct.

Jarod back inside the Centre. I'm so excited to read more.

Ahhhh mirage it's always a breath of fresh air to read you.

I'm excited to see how the pair will cope and their relationship evolve inside the Centre together.

I'm seriously stoked!  More please like always!! XO

OMG they so obviously love each other dearly omg.

Mirage this is everything and so pretenderY. I need more and more!

Please? �� ��

Exquisite 😋

I'm excited to read more.

Bravo! 🌹🌹�� �� 🙌�

It's always unexpected when you write Miss Parker showing the softener side, and essentially confessing her feelings for Jarod, and I don't know why it feels unexpected or out of character for you because you've written that side of her many times. For some reason it seems like you are reluctantly for those two to be together even though they are often together when you write them.

I'm in awe as always, impressed.

You know what you're doing.

I'm not even surprised. I've come to expect this quality from you.

I'm eager to read the next chapter.

Until next time Mirage 🌹�,

Ciao!

Whoa baby this is my new favorite novel. I don't call them fics. They are novels.
You've got the characters down pat, the dialogue is perfect, all of it is perfect. You are a wordsmith and an amazing storyteller.
I want more and more.
Please never stop writing.

Squeee! OMG! So many WOWS!

No one writes like this. It's so amazing. YOU are fracking amazing!

"Parker had worked hard for Jarod's anger, had earned it, and had craved his savagery like it was a drug; she was remarkably perturbed that he'd cut it with comfort, laced it with kindness, convincing Parker that one truly could kill with the stuff. Jarod certainly could, if anyone could."

Jarod cutting his anger with comfort FOR HER and lacing his anger with kindness I'm so blown away. Blown all the way away.
More please?

I was afraid there wouldn't be any emotional Jarod-MP scenes but ohhh Mirage my heart. I love you for this. I love you so much. Your writing is beautiful, so real and plausible. I love it. I want more. Please write as quickly as you can. I know you are writing several stories at once. I don't know how you do it, but I want them all updated and I want more of all them. WRite some new ones too. Thank you for all you do to fix the craving. I still need the fix.

OMG! She didn't deny it!!! YAAAAAAH! Jarod's like "we know the truth, it's getting harder to conceal it" and OMG Parker didn't deny it. I'm so dead right now I can't EVEN!!!! Oh, I love that Jarod is confessing to Parker that way. He always has to get it out and I LOVE LOVE Freaking LOVE that Parker's opinion is the one he's gonna think about when he dies, so he tells her everything like a guilty cheating husband would. Things like menstruation wouldn't bother Jarod at all. He's THAT man. He's been a doctor, a midwife, he's a genius and he knows it all. First I was like, how does he know Parker knew that Mark was telling the truth, but Jarod knows crap about Parker. JAROD KNOWS PARKER! He knew when she wanted to kill Briggie that it wasn't the unfinished business, HE KNEW IT WAS SOMETHING ELSE. and it was. It was telling Thomas she loved him. He JUST KNEW! He knows her.... but wow I didn't see it coming that he would be Miuna's first man lover and the first time having sex can be a bloody freaking mess.. and I didn't get that memo when I was younger so I was well and proper freaked the freak out..That one's tough. Jarod must feel that his entire life has fallen apart now. He's guilty about Miuna's death, he's gulity about having sex with her while being in love with Parker...He would be. He feels it hard like that. They are both going to be in the Centre. OMG. I can't even wait for more. Hurry and write. Hurry. I love it.

Exquisite. I love how emotional it became between Jarod and Parker. I still have chill bumps all over me. I feel that so much. It's like watching an episode when I read you. You nail it. Every damn time.

Broots just wanting peace. Damn. He's feeling bad and it wasn't his fault. Parker wasn't going to bring Jarod in until Lyle showed up.That's true to her character. She's never captured him. She's never taken him back to the Centre. SHe can't. She won't do it. I feel so much for her. She's standing there telling Jarod to escape, demanding him to leave and he can't! I'm in tears, Mirage.

Jarod can't leave. He tells Parker to leave, and take her people with her. Oh god. He's trying to be strong, wants to confess his love to her but refuses to burden her.. the way Sydney didn't want to burden Jarod if he could escape.

My heart.But they both know they have feelings for each other. Parker doesn't even deny it when Jarod talks about how Faraijii discovering those feelings.

Poor Angelo. Let him be safe and happy.

I hope to see Sydney soon. He's still recovering from the health issue I presume.

That last part tho. Damn. Jarod won't have to feel guilty for long. He'll be seeing her soon I'm guessing. Can't ever get enough of you. Write faster please.

Oh, woot! Bravo my dear on another terrific chapter. I'm so freaking excited to see Jarod and Parker in the Centre at the SAME freaking time and they have to stay. She said she isn't going anywhere without her baby brother and if she doesn't know where he is she is definitely staying. I haven't been this excited about a story update since.... ummmmm the last thing you updated lol. You're amazing Thank you. Please never stop. I'm Miss Parker and I'm ordering YOU. Really my first name is Parker so... I ain't lyin'. MORE!

Solid plotting and story telling. Top notch all the way!

Can't wait to read the next chapter!

Hey there are you ok? You got me worried 😫 😟.

Please check in with me or Contesasa or anyone in the famdomly please.

Take care babygirl. You are loved. 🌺 🌹