Just noticed that some people are reviewing each chapter separately? I didn't know. I love them both.
Reviewer: Felicia Signed
[Report This]Date: 12/01/22 09:40 pm
Wows! Just read both chapters and whoa like a train they go by so fast and now I crave more and I know your little fingers are busy typing more right now... right? Right? Say yes.
Author's Response:
Thank you, Felicia.
Reviewer: Felicia Signed [Report This]Date: 12/01/22 09:39 pm
2 chapters? Now that's something wonderful. You do treat us well and gift us with multiple chapters sometimes and I am so appreciative right now. My heart is filled by the appearance of Miss Parker as I remember her. You always get it right and I don't know how that's possible. You haven't made a deal with satan? Or are you a witch? Do tell. Most importantly write more for us.
Author's Response:
Nope. No crossroads deal for me. I'd be demanding a refund if I had. It's only fanfic. Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Reviewer: Ricky Signed [Report This]Date: 10/01/22 09:03 pm
Ahhhh. You're the one I always come back to. Why, young lady? Why do I always get pulled back in? It's because you capture the dynamics of all the characters so well and write so profoundly and brilliantly. I can't give you up. You've got that something that great authors have and it's rare and precious and I feel fortunate that you chose to channel your natural talents through this fandom even though this fandom consists of maybe a couple hundred people, most who are in their sixties by now! I see the younger kids on twitter talking about you and the fandom so you are defnitely doing something right to make this more than just a nostalgia thing. I'm serious. You're talented.
You seem to not hate Jarod at all. I think I used to believe you hated him and that you were't fond of Michael T Weiss either but now I think I confused you with Miss Parker. I get the not fangirling thing. I don't expect you to fawn. I'm just glad there's no hate. I know you said it in review answers that you don't hate anyone but... that's something people say and don't mean. I think the fact that you don't use emojis can be offputting and people don't know what your tone is and think you're being sarcastic. I noticed in reviews that I'm not the only person realizing that you're just normal and that because you don't fawn it doesn't mean that you hate. You said something like that before, like why does it have to be one of the other. Sorry for going maybe off topic but it's not really off topic if he's the chacaracter and actorr. Love your writing and that you continue to share with us
Reviewer: Ricky Signed [Report This]Date: 10/01/22 09:00 pm
I love the wit, intelligence, and excitement you pack into each story. The pages are already flying so to speak. I eagerly await future chapters!
Author's Response:
Thank you for the rather generous review, Sammi.
Reviewer: Sammi Signed [Report This]Date: 07/01/22 12:26 am
Thank you.
You are a breath of fresh air.
Reviewer: Sammi Signed [Report This]Date: 07/01/22 12:20 am
...and there you go besting yourself. I *thought* the first chapter was amazing... the second chapter is even more amazing. Miss Parker in the house!
Author's Response:
Thanks, Joni.
Reviewer: Joni Signed [Report This]Date: 05/01/22 03:01 am
Intriguing and terrifying first chapterr. This is my kind of start to the new year. The lights, the anger on the faces, Jarod abused by the cops... ahhh I see, hear, taste, feel it all. I need more.
Reviewer: Joni Signed [Report This]Date: 05/01/22 02:59 am
Stunning second chapter. I was almost afraid that it was Miss Parker that was missing even though it was pretty clear it was a different pair of blue eyes. This made me so relieved. Miss Parker is on her game here. Strong but not overdone or pretentious. I love it. Quite the mystery-suspence crime thriller in play here. I hope you'll update soon.
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading and the much-too generous review.
Reviewer: Con-O Signed [Report This]Date: 05/01/22 12:49 am
Top notch mate. Short chapters but I can appreciate the quality over quantity any time. You continue to amaze me.
Reviewer: Con-O Signed [Report This]Date: 05/01/22 12:46 am
Hell of a page turner Mirage. Congats!
Reviewer: Gretchen Anonymous [Report This]Date: 04/01/22 09:50 pm
Miss Parker coming in completely in control. I love that Jarod and other men support her story arc in your stories and not the other way. We often see women only empowering the men but she's clearly here to retrieve Jarod for her own benefit and I love that she's attorney and sent by the ACLU. I love that Jarod donates stolen Centre money to the ACLU. I love the ACLU if ya didn't know. I can't imagine how this will move forward but you haven't ever let me down and I don't think you'll start now. I also want to say how much I love that Jarod finally got in a mess he couldn't get himself out of and with the breaking news and social media there would be no easy way out this time. I think, as in your Happenstance masterpiece that other agencies would also want him when they realize he's worked for and with them and impersonated them in the past. I hope you will continue this. I know you have many that seem or seem to me are close to being finished and as sad as I am to see them end I always want more. Happy new year.
Author's Response:
Who doesn't love the ACLU? Thank you for reading and reviewing, Amelia.
Reviewer: Amelia Anonymous [Report This]Date: 31/12/21 09:47 pm
Thank you for another story that already has me craving more. As an author I find it difficult to write so that the reader can see my vision, but you don't have that problem. I see and feel the lights and fear and the injuries inflicted on Jarod by the police. I also always enjoy immensely that I recognize these characters I know and love and how well you flesh them out. You're a paragon Mirage.
Reviewer: Amelia Anonymous [Report This]Date: 31/12/21 09:40 pm
Ooooh!! Love. Will need more of this soon. Thank you for your talent and sharing.
Reviewer: Jana Anonymous [Report This]Date: 30/12/21 11:10 pm
So now I'm in jail. Mirage Mirage Mirage why don't you like me? Why do you hate me? I'm the good guy. The GOOD guy. I have to be innocent. I'm innocent. I've always been innocent. You write amazingly well and your writing voice is powerful and you are probably my favorite but I am good and you need to remember that. I only removed one person's kidney without their consent and... ok at least I didn't eat the kidney like Lyle would do because he is a really bad person. You have to like me. I'm not completely good but at least I'm not Lyle. Update soon please.
Author's Response:
Ah, I see. You're doing the Jarod roleplaying thing. I had a brief what the fuc moment, which is ridiculous, really, because I should be accustomed to this by now. Anyway, Jarod, it was nice of you to fast forward ahead and confess that you aren't good. You only steal kidneys. You don't eat them. Thanks for clarifying, J.
On a serious note, thanks for reading and reviewing.
Reviewer: Jarod the pretender Anonymous [Report This]Date: 29/12/21 10:58 pm
"Hell's intestines" lol! Miss Parker is here with her super snark and bark and I love it. She is super on point and I know how cops are definitely not Andy in Mayberry. You are truly exceptional with characterisations and character placement...and dialogue, transitions...you're just good at every aspect of this.You deliver the professional goods and know how to get my attention and keep it. I love that Miss Parker is there to help Jarod-not really help him-help herself. The chapters are so short so I'm thrilled to tears that you posted two for us. Thank you to the moon and back Mirage.
Reviewer: Jen Signed [Report This]Date: 29/12/21 10:31 pm
Blindsided is spot on m'dear! You blindsided me with this new wonderful story. So super excited for the next part. Woohoo! Have a wonderful new year!!
Reviewer: Jen Signed [Report This]Date: 29/12/21 10:25 pm
2 chapters whoa. I love this new and fresh direction and my GOD the characters are perfect and as they are. Seriously. I love this. The chapters are too short but understandable. You leave me craving more.
Reviewer: Christoph Signed [Report This]Date: 29/12/21 07:16 pm
Oh wows, I love this. Really unexpected and brilliant.
Reviewer: Christoph Signed [Report This]Date: 29/12/21 07:14 pm
More please?
Reviewer: Renee Collins Anonymous [Report This]Date: 28/12/21 02:59 am
More please? OMG I love it!
Reviewer: Melissa B Anonymous [Report This]Date: 26/12/21 11:38 pm
was going to just wish you a merry christmas and saw a new story! Woot! I love this and so excited to see where it will lead with new adventure for our Jarod and Miss Parker. I love your writing and voice and you always do right by our characters and series. More please?
Reviewer: crackerrjacks&pez Anonymous [Report This]Date: 25/12/21 05:48 pm
Oh, snap! I love how crime-mystery-suspense this is and in this day when police brutality is everywhere it's appropriate. I love that Miss Parker is take-no-prisoners. You always put these characters where they need to be in a plausible and sometimes frightening way. *BOWS* Please write more of this and please please add a Forces of Nature and Cirlces of Hell sequel and continue Devil's Advocate and The Return. Have a great winter festivus!
Reviewer: Jami Signed [Report This]Date: 25/12/21 12:04 am
Squee! I've always wanted to read something like this where Jman totally screws up and Miss P helps HIM out.
I gobbled those 2 chapters up and I'm starving for more. Please write more.
Merry hols. You are seriously the best.
Reviewer: Ashley Anonymous [Report This]Date: 24/12/21 11:04 pm
2 chapters I give you 2 reviews. Perfect characterisations. Parker is so strong. I love that she is helping Jarod.
Thank you. Thank you so much for writing for us and keeping this series and loving characters alive.
Happy xmas!!!! xoxoxo
Reviewer: Miss Angel Parker Anonymous [Report This]Date: 24/12/21 07:48 pm
