Woot! I've never seen incest like this before and I... freaking love it. It weirdly in a strange weird way makes total sense. Jarod has always guided her and loved her and taught her to question. My namesake had stopped asking hard questions but then her real Daddy escape the Centre and began tormenting her. It's a whole different weird kind of torment now that I think of it. You've turned the whole weird series on its head in the best way. This isn't their fault, everything Jarod mused about religion is the lawd's truth and omg ... tachy in the sheets. That's no lied. He would have that mug after my namesake lost her shite 10 years earlier. She was tachy then. So much has happened and I love it all. I want more. NOW! Don't make me get my whip.
Reviewer: The Miss Parker Signed
[Report This]Date: 29/03/23 03:03 am
You cleverly include providing details that make what can seem implausible plausible. First you remind readers of the basically in-lab incest. Jarod and his mother's semen and egg combined is medical incest, and you give a plausible, extremely possible scenario in which Raines' ideas are approved and funded, and I can't believe the US or Russia haven't already prepared to repopulate this way. I hope you don't give republicans any ideas ...they already brag about "grabbing women by the you know what" and defend child predators like Dennis hastert, to Moore, etc, and support Matt gaetz child sex trafficker and rapist Brett kavanaugh and Clarence Thomas. Nixo was in office in 1969..makes sense. I'm curious to to see how they Jarod and Miss Parker go forward from here, and if they can. Jarod makes a compelling argument in their favor. Eloquently written.
Reviewer: Michael Signed
[Report This]Date: 27/03/23 07:31 pm
Can confirm there was talk of ick, and as for stICKy situation this'll do it bang up. I love it. The more forbidden the more sweet. keep it on!
"sinus in the streets tachy in the sheets" omfg! π”₯ π₯΅
Reviewer: TheDarkAngel Signed [Report This]Date: 26/03/23 08:13 pm
I was really shocked π²π³ and thinking oh no they can't be together if it's true but then Jarod, dear dear dear Jarod, dropped some major truth nukes and I agree with him. I actually agree that nothing should change, that love is all that matters and Parker knows it's true. She would have been long gone if the revelation changed her feelings. I think she needed Jarod to tell her it's ok to follow her heart and I love that. Oh, I want more so much right now. Thank you so much for this. π’–
Reviewer: Leslie Signed [Report This]Date: 26/03/23 05:52 pm
That's exactly how I'd expect the inside of Lyle's mind to look. I'd love to have that painting. I'd also love to have your books, all of your work in a printed hard copy. This incest is different than what I'm used to reading but blood is blood. If people don't bitch about sibling incest they shouldn't bitch about this kind either and if they do they're hypocrites. I love this..Please continue
Reviewer: needlepoint Signed [Report This]Date: 26/03/23 04:05 am
hope to read more about willow and giana and Nick. so amazing. now I'm all caught up reviewing all 20 chapters. love each one.
Reviewer: lisa Signed [Report This]Date: 26/03/23 02:26 am
oh so hot π₯΅π€© π”₯ love the deets.
Reviewer: lisa Signed [Report This]Date: 26/03/23 02:23 am
"You must be a genius or something" lol love the light conversation. and Jarod s " but not the correct them" and the thought that they once planned so much and would say " can't go soon enough" to each other oh they are so perfect together and it's so tragic.
Reviewer: lisa Signed [Report This]Date: 26/03/23 02:20 am
"You must be a genius or something" lol love the light conversation. and Jarod s " but not the correct them" and the thought that they once planned so much and would say " can't go soon enough" to each other oh they are so perfect together and it's so tragic.
Reviewer: lisa Signed [Report This]Date: 26/03/23 02:20 am
This is just as intense and emotional the second time around as the first. So powerful.
Reviewer: lisa Signed [Report This]Date: 26/03/23 02:15 am
"nothing if not metaphorical" oh my heart I π’ love this.
Reviewer: lisa Signed [Report This]Date: 26/03/23 02:12 am
We are demanding fans! I love that they tasted each other although Jarod barely got a taste before things took a turn. In hindsight reading this is still exciting even though I know what will happen next..still suspense and that's powerful. I know why Parker reacted that. way now but still wish she hadn't... such a masterpiece!!
Reviewer: lisa Signed [Report This]Date: 25/03/23 08:56 pm
lobotomy..the centre is a messed up place and I'm thankful to you for exploring it's darkness.
Reviewer: lisa Signed [Report This]Date: 25/03/23 08:53 pm
This began so hopeful and ended so unhopefful. Cruel! Exquisitely written too. Even tragic is beautiful when it's well written. I crave more.
Reviewer: Gunner Signed [Report This]Date: 25/03/23 06:19 pm
The incest can be off-putting like you say but it's commonplace here now but I understand why you give people a warning...some people can't handle it. I want to talk about Lyle's artπ¨ and your descriptive work and Jarod's reaction to it..all are outstanding! Each dismembered body part had a mouth opened in screams presumably but those screaming body parts in sl27 all surrounded by a sea of blood concealed another horrific portrait and Lyle and Parker being 2 peas in a pod!! Stunning. I'd love to see that actually drawn or digitally rendered??? can you do it or can I ask someone else to do it? Amazing job as always!
Reviewer: Jameason Signed [Report This]Date: 25/03/23 04:36 pm
Yess! Some of us like our fruit extra forbidden dontcha know??!! This is a delicious chapter in a magnificent story!! Thank you for writing and sharing. More please?
Reviewer: Chloe Signed [Report This]Date: 25/03/23 04:12 pm
After all of the bickering and threats Jarod tells her to lock the door. That's true love right there. I didn't catch that the first go around. THat's proof he loves her. Oh, Mirage. You always write something special and you write it exceptionally....just spectacular.
[Report This]Date: 25/03/23 04:12 am
lol Jarod shouldn't give her such a hard time. She's worried. But you said before that Jarod is going to Jarod. Jarod taking a pin to Lyle's inflated little balloon was hilarious. He just wanted to laugh at Jarod's misery. They're exactly like I remember. I love it.
Reviewer: lisa Signed [Report This]Date: 25/03/23 04:10 am
That's really Sydney's mum and pop and last name is Mikhail. Verrry good Mirage. So you do know how many psychiatrists it takes to change a lightbulb. You understood the assignment. Brilliantly done.
Reviewer: lisa Signed [Report This]Date: 25/03/23 04:08 am
lol, yep, it's true, Jarod has never needed an invitation. Parker's final thoughts before the next update lol. Two sociopaths. lol.
Reviewer: lisa Signed [Report This]Date: 25/03/23 04:05 am
This dude is scary af. I remember being so creeped out the first time around. Poor Sydney. Poor poor Sydney. I was so worried the first run through. I'm still just as worried the second time through.
Reviewer: lisa Signed [Report This]Date: 25/03/23 04:04 am
I remember the first time I read this and how shook I was. I should have reviewed this then. Parker's slipping a little bit, trying to keep up the facade but smoking again and scotch. She's shaken and still trying to be tough. You balance her emotions brilliantly.
Reviewer: lisa Signed [Report This]Date: 25/03/23 04:02 am
Scary darkness. You write it all so well.
Reviewer: lisa Signed [Report This]Date: 25/03/23 03:59 am
Ok now that was just hot. Lyle and Jarod are hot together. I said it. There.
Reviewer: lisa Signed [Report This]Date: 25/03/23 03:57 am
"If I'd only known you wanted to be submissive" When Jarod gets salty he gets extra salty.. and scary. Speaking of scary ... it's scary how in character the characters always are. Gotta love Broots here.
Reviewer: lisa Signed [Report This]Date: 25/03/23 03:56 am
