You're one of those authors who knows how to captivate and thrill. I get excited for every new update and story. You haven't disappointed me yet. Thanks for contacting to entertain me.
Reviewer: Miss Shanon Signed
[Report This]Date: 27/07/23 05:05 am
You really know the characters and understand the nuance, and I'm really excited to see you here and updating and even more excited that you will explore incest, really explore it and not just as an aside. Your talent astounds me. Waiting patiently for more.
Reviewer: Con-O Signed [Report This]Date: 26/07/23 03:37 am
Magnificent. You capture the allure of the Pretender series, the essence, and that forbiddenness too. So absorbing and I can't get enough.
They should bring our series back to television and YOU should be involved with the writing.
Reviewer: Gunner Signed [Report This]Date: 25/07/23 10:11 pm
You keep outdoing yourself and I keep wanting more and more. Oh, please never stop.
Reviewer: d_el1 Signed [Report This]Date: 24/07/23 10:12 pm
Oohh Bravo Mirage!
This is spectacular. Miss Parker seemed a little salty and a little concerned may be that Jarod didn't want her anymore.
It's so beautiful and I want more. now. NOW!
Reviewer: The Miss Parker Signed [Report This]Date: 24/07/23 06:42 am
I wish of you to write more. foer us. Grand writing.
Reviewer: Archange Signed [Report This]Date: 23/07/23 10:30 pm
It's always exciting to see you back and a pleasure read you work..
I love that you're exploring this subject and so happy for Sydney and Michele. It's beautiful..Please continue.
Reviewer: Contessa Signed [Report This]Date: 22/07/23 10:21 pm
Why are you so phenomenal and addicting? I can't get enough. More!!
Reviewer: Jen Signed [Report This]Date: 22/07/23 01:24 am
Top notch, mate.
Reviewer: King Of Pain Signed [Report This]Date: 20/07/23 08:43 pm
Oooh you don't pull any punches do you? It's a compliment I swear. I love that about you, and it works only because you're a skilled author and story teller. You insert details that honestly I'd forgotten from the tv series as supporting evidence in each sentence you write. Your work is not only consistently addicting to read and consistent with the Pretender story, the lore if you will, etc. it's elqouent and pleasant to read and exciting. Please tell me you're quickly writing more as quickly as possible. All stars from me.
Reviewer: Thara Nicole Signed [Report This]Date: 19/07/23 09:45 pm
You are such a stand out author, breaking from the pack, not afraid to write anything, not afraid to say people uncomfortable, and I was a little bit but also I'm intrigued and I think two consenting adults have a right to be together if they want to and if they use precautions and not procreate.You write so eloquently that it becomes so plausible and you add dialogue that makes it all feel perfect. It's genius. I hope for more.
Reviewer: Leese Signed [Report This]Date: 19/07/23 05:22 pm
Heyyyy! I love it. I was so totally hoping and wishing that Parker would shrug it all of and be with Jarod. YES. LOVE for the win! Thank you. I could go on and on about how amazing your writing is and how much of a wordsmith you are and ... all that but I'm not good wiith words. I'm still here reading your work and reviewing so that's enough said I hope. Thank you and please don't stop here.
Reviewer: Leslie Signed [Report This]Date: 19/07/23 01:05 am
I meant to type chapter not episode in that review I just left you, but it felt like an episode and I watch your writing if that makes sense. You illustrate with words. Just wanted you to know I haven't lost my entire mind and clear any confusion you might have.
Reviewer: Cal Signed [Report This]Date: 18/07/23 05:34 am
Omg why do I want them to get married now? Hell of a twist and Parker seems to have come around to Jared's way of thinking after what he said in the previous episode.
I'm excited for more!
Reviewer: Cal Signed [Report This]Date: 18/07/23 05:30 am
Merci Mirage! There is nothing you need to do to this wonderful chapterr.
Please do not alter anything about it. It is pretender perfect.
Reviewer: MlleParker Signed [Report This]Date: 17/07/23 10:44 pm
I'm late to the party. Oops. Oh, Mirage, each piece you write is irresistible and satisfying. I read you compulsively. The characters... how do you write them so in character? I can't get enough. The topic is important and controversial and so original. You're tackling it gracefully.
Reviewer: Sammi Signed [Report This]Date: 17/07/23 08:51 pm
OMG it's so funny 🤣 how I was like 'ermagherdt Jarod and Parker just wedded' and then after reading on and seeing it's Syd and Michele's wedding I was like 'I would be ok with Jarod and Parker getting married actually...wish they were ' and did you know that would be the reaction? Shock that they married and then disappointment that they didn't marry? We are a strange bunch of pretender fans to sail this ship no matter what and you seem to know that and understand the nuances....even tho you aren't a shipper at all.
Stunned, pleased, amazed, and grateful as always with your work I keep wanting more and more of you.
Reviewer: needlepoint Signed [Report This]Date: 16/07/23 06:09 pm
You capture all of the characters perfectly. Love Parker's "THE most unpleasant" comment and the descriptive work. Beautiful work. More please?
Reviewer: Sydney Signed [Report This]Date: 16/07/23 04:48 am
Is the other shoe about to drop? Or will they continue being happy? I want to find out.
Beautifully written. I was just about to go to Twitter to tweet about you but here you are, and I'm glad you haven't abandoned us.
Reviewer: Jake Signed
[Report This]Date: 15/07/23 12:29 am
for a minute I thought mp and Jarod were getting married and was like wtf but it wasn't and then I was like oh no I wish they had gotten married..I love the way parker told Jarod she wanted to be together with him 😂 happy crying here. Te scene descriptionsvand all the thoughts are brilliant too. oh I love it This is amazing like everything you do. More!!
Reviewer: Chloe Signed [Report This]Date: 14/07/23 10:33 pm
checking in...are you ok??? not mad just hoping all is well and if you need an ear...you got my email ady from all the times I reviewed you that way.
you've always been there for me and many of us... to listen, advise, help with fics
, and you would listen and help anyone even Jarod 😉😜..and every now and then maybe you
need someone too??? I love this story and will patiently wait . take care of you.
Author's Response:
Hi, Jami. Ur. I'm-- here in this moment. Being honest. It's kind of you to ask. I hope you're well, and yeah, same. Take care of you, too.
Yes, of course, anyone in the fandomly can email me. I'll play along and indulge you: if Jarod existed, and for some reason emailed me-- yeah, I know who you mean (your wink emoji gave you away) and, yes, he, too, has permission to email me. I'm not certain that I'd believe it if it happened, but, sure, why not?
Thank you for reading and reviewing, and your sweet words. Be safe.
Reviewer: Jami Signed
[Report This]Date: 07/05/23 09:42 pm
merci beaucoup!!
Author's Response:
Hi, MlleParker. Thank you for reaading.
Reviewer: MlleParker Signed [Report This]Date: 17/04/23 03:22 am
Right this isn't their fault and as long as they don't have children it shouldn't matter at all. You know what? You're the only author to do this [and plausibly] and the only one to delve into shifty G and his crimes. That was completely glossed over during the TV series. Parker basically accused him and he denied it and called it teenagers messing around and used her "twisting" of facts as ammunition to call her a liar about Raines too, but I believe her. Jarod does, too. He probably met Guissepe for that reason. I think it had little to do with Raines. Knowing a child by his works or whatever that bible verse was.... it was about Gusissepe I think now in hindsight and his crimes and hiding behind the church. It all makes sense now. No one ever wrote about it and I never thought about it. But you have. Maybe Jarod was trying to break the religious curse eve then. You really make me think. Please continue.
Author's Response:
Hi, Renea Collins. I tend to agree when I try to seriously consider the scenario, but, ugh, god, I don't like the scenario.
I agree with what you're saying about the digit breaking moment, too. It did sound like Parker was accusing broken-finger dude of sexual assault.
And, yeah, that bible verse part was perhaps about knowing broken-finger dude by his works, maybe Jarod was sending a message to Parker that he believed her. Huh. Weird.
Thank you for reading and reviewing.
Reviewer: Renea Collins Signed [Report This]Date: 02/04/23 02:04 am
Ohh oh my god! I just read all 20 chapters and wahhh can't think. So. OMG. No, I'm not even stammering over the incest. It's this line :" began to swivel. Hesitated. Her legs were poised to walk; her fingers, however, refused to loosen their grasp on Jarod's hand. Parker felt compelled to do both, perceived a violent tug in opposite directions, and the ground snatched from beneath her feet. She imagined her body twisted apart by indecision-- to accurately reflect her present emotional state."
oh my god! She just imagined ripping herself apart because of indecision. The way you write. Word selection. Descriptions. BLOWS MY MIND. It's so illustrative and lyrical. I love it. You really feel the moments don't you? To be able to write them so well you'd have to feel it or imagine the feeling. Parker wants Jarod and wants to do what she's been told is the right thing to do and can't even. You're a wordsmith and a genius. God where are you going to take us next? I'm all strapped in and ready to ride.
Reviewer: Thara Nicole Signed [Report This]Date: 31/03/23 01:26 am
I love how you got the idea and developed it so slowly over these chapters, building and building. Brilliant. I can't wait to see what happens next.
Reviewer: Monica Signed [Report This]Date: 29/03/23 09:36 pm
