Wow. Please don't leave me waiting too long for more. I need more.

That is all.

Fast update! This is scary and exciting... a horror novel Mirage! Thank you so much.

I love that you illustrate with your words so I can SEE what is happening in detail and it's stunning Mirage.... stunning word, so visual, and always in character. I want more.

Outstanding work Mirage. It's a delight to read a story that is well written & paced, packed with action and drama (and angst hehee) that is well told. There's never a boring moment. I'm grateful that you share your natural talents and gifts with us and I hope there will be more soon. Stay well.

Ciao!

Yaahy Mirage so good to have you back again. More please?

Grateful for the update. You're the best.

Cheers!

I'm grinning ear to ear like a big idiot. You always break from the pack and do something unexpected. It horrifies people but it's plausible and you've never done anything outside the canon. You are canon for me now, THE go to author for all things Pretender. LOVE this! Lyle cherring, I got him, brings me back to that episode when he thought Jarod would shoot him with the big gun and Lyle went running to Miss Parker for help lol. Amazing stuff Mirage. You are magic!

I need more now. Please. OMG. Jarod's "that's not how this works" just kills it. I love him. I love that you write these characters the way they were and how they should be!

Bravo! Top notch Mirage. It's hard seeing Sydney in these dire straits and I know how much you love him but it's plausible. Terrifying and plausible. We've seen Centre projects go back and attack Raines and Mr. Parker with Sydney always coming up smelling like roses but the mind is complicated as you've pointed out before and as Sydney has pointed out and Jacod did bad things and Jacob looks like Sydney so I find this refreshing on on point. You've pointed out before in Forces of Nature that Sydney IS culpable too. His just folllowing orders is no different than the nazis that were just following orders. Please don't stop writing. I love your insights and style and I've never seen the characters more in character. It's like watching the series again. Thank you! Ciao!

Mirage Mirage Mirage Mirage. I've sat staring in space for some long while. It's one of those kinds of chapters you know? I'm here speechless. There was no warning. If you could put a warning on this it would help people like me. This is really scary. I felt like I'm there with Sydney or that I am Sydney. Wooh. The writing is out of this world amazing as always. The content is dark. Those things on Sydney give me the creeps big time. I need to read more to make sure Sydney comes out of this alive. I don't see how he will. I'm so scared. I want more. Please update soon. Please update all of your stories soon.

I'm off for the hols and found time to read this and so glad I did. Oh Mirage you are brilliant. I keep thinking how some people need to fed to alligators and right now with children in cages. I think America would stop Mary and Joseph at the border and deport them and have Jesus adopted to some entitled family or sold into human trafficking. This wasn't cheerful at all and I guess it's because some people aren't cheerful right now and you're thinking of them. I glad someone is thinking of them. I think Sydney would be angry now and rightfully so that history is repeating because the world lied. The world has forgotten. I don't know if you're jewish or what but I'm thankful that this is the story you chose to share during this holiday that really doesn't feel like a holiday at all. :( He's thinking of Jarod and regrets and he's thinking of how he's leaving this world how he didn't change it. I guess we are all responsible. I have a lot of thoughts that I can't begin to think.. and there were so few words. So succinct and powerful Mirage. Keep going. We need you.

Mirage! I love that you keep writing for us and I'm impressed with what you write and your eye for detail. This is just pure awesomeness gold! Syd's internal dialouge is so telling and fitting with what we know and you pay homage over and over to the television series which is what I love. It's no offense intended to the creators or tv writers. There is a top and bottom and saving luke and rebirth are the bottom for me because I fell in love with the original story line from the tv series. That's all so please don't think I'm being mean to the creators who I know you respect and love and care about. I know you're kind and you want everyone to be kind. I'm not being mean. You follow the tv series and I prefer that. That's all. See? Do keep writing for us. I can't get enough. Really top notch writing.

Wowz. I hope Sydney will survive this. Please make it so Mirage. Amazingly well written as always. I hope you're having a happy holidays.