Ohhhh, wooot! Mirage is back! "women frighten me" so much this. I love it. I like that Jarod has women's backs and I love that you know that Jarod would have our backs lol. You're not the Jarod hater I thought you were and I guess you've been trying to tell us that for a while. This helps.

SO, omg. Aversion therapy and tampering like that would explain why MP always forgets that Jarod helped her and her daddy betrayed her like the very next episode lol. And that the drug used in the aversion therapy could have caused the ulcer... wow! 

Mind=blown!

Reading your description of how Jarod reacted to Parker's tears reminded me of their graveyard scene when he almost lost it and then took a deep breath and lifted an eyebrow and then he totally ran from there because it was just too much. He took a breath so deep his chest moved. So I think that's what he did in this scene too that you wrote. OMG. Amazing. That Jarod vomited too when he realized what had been done to her, that she had been given a drug that made her vomit tons over the years ^I googles it^  is a  stroke of genius on your part. He reacted to her vomiting presumably after being induced to vomit as a react to Jarod. That's like the ultimate in Jarod feeling what she had felt then. It wasn't her fault, and realizing his own wrongs because he was tormenting her all those years under the assumption that rejecting him was a choice, but it wasn't really completely her choice. Even if she hadn't been drugged, coercion was involved.

The visuals are amazing.

I'm so super glad that Syd is ok for now. I love the details you impart like how he's speaking German and asking for his mother. It tells something about the state of his mind and the trauma.

This was so rich in detail and craftsmanship. You're a wordsmith and I'm an addict. I need more. You go places I'd never thought of. I want more. I need more.

well done!I'm such a Jarod fan and I usually read the Jarod stories and pass everything else by but you yanked me in. I'm one of Michael T. Weiss 's biggest ever fans, have a selfie and everything though he was like in the background of my selfie so maybe didn't know lol. Show me your selfie with him and I'll show you mine. If don't have a selfie with him you need to get one and you need to update this and all your fics cos ima read them all. I love the way you write you really have command of the wrod and the characters. more please.

*can't stop reading.

I'm drunk on brilliant grammar and still in this storyverse/not back in reality yet.

Amazing Mirage. I'm always impressed with your wirting, voice, characterisations, etc. You are such a wordsmith. I'm envious, and I'm addicted. More please?

*bows dow* 

Impressive Mirage.

Jarod and Miss Parker have never been more Jarody and Miss Parkery as when you write them not since Pretender aired. This is Pretender perfect and I'm so glad you continue to honor the series I love so much. Please update soon.

Magnifique!

You have a command of the stories and characters that is rare. You are the most gifted author! You have mastered the craft of writing and storytelling and always leave me amazed. I dare to ask for more.

Thank you for this! Thank you for still being here. Thank you for not having Sydney saved at the dreaded "last minute" trope. I hope he's ok but the story is the story and I love it and it's plausible. It's an amazing ride, Mirage. Give me more!!

I have a question about Michael T. Weiss, but first let me say that I'm impressed. I have no tips or suggestions. You've got this and you know what you're doing and where to put the characters. It's a dark one though. I guess that makes sense because the Centre was dark and there were going to lobotomize Kyle on the series so. I have no complaints and look forward to reading more. My question is do you think Michael resembles Keana Reeves? I think he does. They look so much alike. You probably get these questions all the time but I still have to ask. I don't know anyone  who knows this series and have no one to chat with about it. Keep writing. My addiction needs to be fed.

So many visuals here. The entire story is like being right there with them. It's like watching the dvds only this will have an ending. You write like the professionals and really need to be on the Pretender team.

It's all stunning Mirage.

"When did you decide to care if I mind? You break in, threaten-" Parker fell silent with alarming abruptness. The rage dissolved with the same suddenness it had erupted from her. "Jarod," she whispered tremulously, "what are we going to do?"

I can't get enough. Pretender perfection. More please?

Oh doh. I just looked at your profile and saw you have other works and you've completed tons of them. I don't have to ask you to keep writing. Sorry. Sometimes I'm a faithless heathen but I have begun reading way too many fics that never got finished and I hate being left hanging .. I say that after being left hanging by Sickle and Mitchel for forever.

Is Sydney gonna be ok?

Please update soon.

Oh, let Jarod and Miss Parker get together!

Tell me more about that weekend. I need the dirty details.

It's always a pleasure Mirage. I gasped in horror, giggled in amusement, shook my head in agreement with Jarod and grinned way too much. You know these characters and where to put them and do it brilliantly.

More please?