Nice. I hope you'll update soon. You write the intimate parts very tastefully and professionally and we need more of that. You really keep them in character and know where to put them and it's a craft you've mastered. You're a wordsmith obviously. I'm glad Syd is ok. You got me on a cliffhangar worried about what Lyle is doing tho. Please update soon.
Reviewer: James Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 02/05/21 01:15 am
OMG. Just omg. I can't get enough of this.
Hot hot hot and hot.
I can't help but to see Michael T. Weiss and Andrea here, doing this. You're awesome.
More!!
Reviewer: Valerie Anonymous [Report This]Date: 01/05/21 11:39 pm
How bad am I that Jarod's OhKay and thrusting his fingers in his mouth are scenes I can't stop seeing and that I will always remember? God I have always wanted to see him do that after fingering her.. booya instadamp panties. Good GOD woman. No obscenities this time and.. as much as I love darkJarod and rapeyJarod there is something to be said for SexyJarod in the heat of summer. I can see them shooting each other with water pistols too. Feel free to c ontinue making me happy. i'm so fuckn happy now. I'm glad they're not together and I'm glad they haven't had d*ck and kitten intercourse. Thanks for this and sorry if I was rude with obscenties. Love ya so much and love the way you write them. I saw no typos and wow your ability to keep them in character is crazy amazing.
Reviewer: Gunner Signed [Report This]Date: 01/05/21 08:19 pm
Ohhhhh! So wow. Had to change my panties. That was hot and hot. I love the way you write, how professional it is and how well plotted and written. You added oral sex to appease fans, how cool is that, and I can't tell where you added anything because it's so seamless, like it had belonged there, all the transitions were smooth. Something DID happen, but not sex sex, just oral, but that's amazing. I need more. More details. More sex. WOW. Just freaking wow. I love how chelly and Nick takes care of Parker and I need more of that too. So intense and rich. Powerful Mirage. More, I beg you.
Reviewer: Miss Shannon Anonymous [Report This]Date: 01/05/21 04:26 pm
Loving this and still waiting for more. I hope you're ok. It's been a while.
Reviewer: Kels Anonymous [Report This]Date: 30/04/21 12:04 am
Holy cow! This exceeded my expectations Mirage. What on earth are you doing in fanfic? You could be writing best selling novels. Even those stupid trumps get on the best sellers list! They buy their own books to do it and that's a bad example but you could be there, too, legitimately. You should be writing the Pretender novels. Please update soon. I need to know what happens next. Will Jarod and Miss Parker get closer now? Will he tell her what he discovered? Will she hate him when he tells her what he discovered? It's so intense. It's just like the series. Dare I say this is better than the series. Is that ok? Is there something I can say to make you share the next chapter faster? I need more.
Reviewer: Ree Anonymous [Report This]Date: 07/04/21 05:58 pm
I literally just sat down and read all of this in one delicious serving and I can't wait to read the next installment. I'm usually a hardcore die hard Jarod-MP shipper with little care for the Centre stuff or the Sydney stuff but balance the two perfectly and I don't know why or how because they aren't even together in this but the possibility that they were during a weekend made me hungry to know more and you write it well with the same forbidden fruit tension thing the pair have from what I saw on the series. I'm glad that Sydney is alive and hope he can be ok but with a lobotomy a person usually is never ok again. But that means Jarod and MP will have to take care of him forever? Being that close all the time would lead to them becoming intimate? I like that Jarod wanted her and couldn't have her on the tv series and you continue that want and need he has so beautifully. Your writing is really clean and professional. You know what you're doing and right now you're driving me crazy. I need more. Please?
Reviewer: Angie Anonymous [Report This]Date: 02/04/21 10:05 pm
What do I have to do to get more of this? Please tell me and I'll do it. You make it feel like coming home from school and tuning in on tv only you really make it plausible and you're continuing. The characters are the characters I know from the tv and love and ohhh thank you. I love this. It's so much fresher but it's still what I know. I love it. More please?
Reviewer: Amy Nicole Anonymous [Report This]Date: 01/04/21 03:40 am
Top notch writing as always. You're one of the few authors I read here and the only one that keeps me coming back.
Please update soon.
Reviewer: King Of Pain Signed [Report This]Date: 29/03/21 10:31 pm
Brilliant. I need more.
Reviewer: Markus Anonymous [Report This]Date: 28/03/21 10:53 pm
Thank you for your beautiful writing. I missed it very much. Hope to continue reading this soon.
Reviewer: Vania Anonymous [Report This]Date: 25/03/21 08:23 pm
I've been away from the fandom for a long while. Saw you trending among friends on twitter and yep here you are. OmG this amazing. Please keep writing. Your talents and gifts are needed so much. You're the best.
Reviewer: Miss Parkere Signed [Report This]Date: 25/03/21 12:37 am
Phew that was close but I know Syd will be ok cos I know YOU LOVE him. I recall the "older man" thing we discussed and I feel ya there. But you know that MTW is basically an older man too now so... just sayin'. It's 'bout to kick in, the difference is I'm older too but you aren't. You're still young enough that MTW will legit be an odler man. Let the fangirling begin for you lol.
I love the writing, the storytelling. You've mastered the craft and write them in character. I can't ask for more but I'm legit gonna ask you to write more. Please.
Reviewer: Jillian Signed [Report This]Date: 21/03/21 10:17 pm
Delightful!!! Damn, girl, you're an amazing writer. I'm wowed again. More please.
Reviewer: needlepoint Signed [Report This]Date: 17/03/21 10:38 pm
Top notch Mirage. The top of the top notch dare I say.
I'm sorry about the other review. In the future I'll review you as Captain Obvious to remind me of my mistake.
Please update soon. You're rocking it.
Reviewer: Michael formerly not THAT Michael now known as Captain Obvio Anonymous [Report This]Date: 16/03/21 02:58 am
Can I have some more please?
So much drama and excitement. Will Jarod kill the baddie? What next? So excited for more. Masterful story telling and writing.
Reviewer: Gwen Anonymous [Report This]Date: 14/03/21 11:52 pm
Oh my God I love this so much. You write them as they are and I need that so much in my life right now. I saw the review response where you said you might as well drop the medical drama and oh my god are you serious? Someone said you didn't like MTW but now I'm curious and I think it isn't true. I know I LOVE him and can't understand why anyone wouldn't want to hit that. I think you do like him. Would you seriously work with him?! Keep writing. I need you now more than ever.
Reviewer: Claire Anonymous [Report This]Date: 13/03/21 11:59 pm
Can't get enough of this. More please!
Reviewer: Gunner Signed [Report This]Date: 13/03/21 05:19 am
Amazing. Your descriptive work is amazing, the characterizations are amazing. You transition seamlessly. The story has me on the edge of the seat.Please update soon.
Reviewer: Leslie Signed [Report This]Date: 12/03/21 06:30 am
I need more of this now. Please.
Reviewer: Renee Collins Anonymous [Report This]Date: 12/03/21 06:15 am
I love it. It is perfect.
Merci!
Reviewer: Mlle Parker Anonymous [Report This]Date: 12/03/21 04:59 am
You always yank me back me. OMG. I like that Miss P saved the day here by saving Jarod. Saving Jarod helped Jarod help Sydney. Miss P also helped Jarod help Sydney hands on and they do work together well. I feel the chemistry between the characters. I love you for that!
Really complicated things happened but maybe they can work it out. I love that Miss Parker really saved the day. Hero! Right on time for women's day!
More please?
Reviewer: Lorraina Signed [Report This]Date: 12/03/21 04:23 am
Ahhhhh. Oh I love this. I love how Miss Parker recognizes she is not invincible and can't magically save him, and is allowing herself to cry. I love everything about it.. except that there isn't more to read. Hurry and update. Love you.
Reviewer: The Miss Parker Signed [Report This]Date: 12/03/21 01:26 am
Top notch. The rumors are all true. You're amazing. More, please?
Reviewer: Jason N Anonymous [Report This]Date: 11/03/21 05:28 am
Ooh. Stunning. Thank you so much for this Mirage.
Reviewer: Christoph Signed
[Report This]Date: 11/03/21 03:28 am
