Did not see that coming!! Please write faster.

Say they will be together please.

You keep the figurative pages turning like no one else.

Oh my godesses I can't even right now but I will anyway. Mirage, I love the way she told him, the way he didn't pick up on what she was saying like he also didn't realize he was shouting I love you at her. He's still dealing with so much and almost lost Sydney and Sydney's the reason he nearly killed Lyle and I think Jarod is experiencing a crisis and I love it. He's so used to knowing everything and how everything will go and being in control of everything and all of the consequences and now this has challenged everything he thought he  knew. I love it. It's so plausible, too. I love how you challenge everything, too, and keep me riveted on the story. It's amazing. More, please?

Top notch mate! I can't get enough.

Exquisite, Mirage. This story is tight and still has the same tight grip that attracted me to it. I love how well this is written, how sharp the characterisations are, and all of the usual pro author attractions. More than those things I love your knack for subverting tropes and societal expectations, the way you take your pen-sword to the social norms, these psychological deep dive studies into the human mind. You show no fear when you explore mental illness and you excel in the creation and character development of your own original characters as well as the ones we already know. Parker tapped Jarod's foul toss out of the entire park by shutting down what we've seen him do on our screen too many times. He helped Kyle, Ethan, and has excused his own crimes but wants to hold Lyle to different standards. He does play favorites. She's one of his most favorites. Falling in love with her has made it possible for him to excuse so many bad things she's done. I think he's his own most favorite though, and I love Jarod, so, this is coming from me, ultra fangirl. I'd still hit that. Please continue when you can. Thank you for all you've already shared with us.

omg more!!!

Squee it's happening! This is omg so professionally authored that it blows my mind. I love all of the dialog and the characters are perfect. Your originals are beautiful and fleshed out too. I need more.

Perfect. It's always a pleasure Mirage.

Congrats on another brilliantly crafted chapter.

I love all of this and really love the tender scenes between Jarod and Sydney. It's really intimate and tender the way he shaved Sydney. Oh, God. I need more. Please write faster.

Fabulous work as always Mirage. You keep the pages turning for me and I could repeat myself and talk about the perfect characterisations and transitions and all of that brilliance but I know you know what you're doing. Keep doing it. I'm hooked hard.

You still haven't got that selfie with Michael T. Weiss? Have you met him? I think you have and you are holding out. You could update his on how he's doing if you have met him recently jus sayn. I read your response to my reviews. I'm glad I don't bother you by talking about him and it's true what you wrote that it's a testement to him and his ways that I want you to meet him and that I can't shut up about him. Have you seen him lately omg!?! he looks so much older and so much different and still really totally good looking but with gray beard and gray hair and doesn't even look like Jarod much anymore.. and do you like that more or less? I know you once said you didn't like Jarod all that much, his duplicity or something and all. I'm just really curious. I'm glad you're not freaked out by him and all. and all. So yeah. keep writing.

Love you and your work. MORE!! NOW!!!

Aww Mirage. You illustrate with words. I love it. Please don't stop.