This is one of the best stories I've ever read. The Italian haunted island idea is intriguing. I searched online and it really exists and is like you described it. The way you write is amazing. You describe things so easily it seems. You talked about the earth reclaiming and you've become the authority on these characters. Please continue and please tell me Jarod will find Parker again alive.
Author's Response:
I'm glad you like the Island and the fic. Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Reviewer: Shay Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 06/05/19 01:11 am
I think you are way too humble listing your stories as general. I hope you'll list this as drama, romance, and humor too, and you should add your own category 'tingly feelings' like only Michael T. Weiss could evoke because you make me feel like I'm in the story with them and that tension and weirdness between Jarod and Miss Parker... even you have to admit that the actors do an exceptional job convincing us and YOU do an exceptional job of conveying that in writing. I always get the visual and the emotions and I feel those emotions. You're good. You're the best. Kirkland spiking his mylanta with rum is... I can see him doing that. Parker was abducted on his watch and he's a good FBI agent and a good man and Parker is the hero and I get his concern for her. You make it clear that it's concern for her and not his own career. I love Kirkland. You create these original characters and they are unforgettable. The thing I'll always love most about you is this gem said by Jarod.. "It's true that I want you to stop; I want you to stay. More importantly and precisely I want you to make those decisions." Oh my God Mirage. You know that makes me fall in love with Jarod. And you're still NOT a shipper??!!!! How is that even possible when you write these things?"!! Miss Parker has to fall in love with him too. How can she not???!!! I need more and this kind of perfection is so worth the wait..
Author's Response:
You are too kind. No, I'm still not a shipper.
Thank you for the lovely review, needlepoint.
Reviewer: needlepoint Signed [Report This]Date: 05/05/19 06:34 pm
Mirage YOU never disappoint. You're a wordsmith. So eloquent. Rarely do I see quality and quantity exist together at the same time but you've achieved both with your body of work! How do you get these characters so pitch perfectly in character while managing to be succinct and plausible? I can see that you're naturally talented and skilled. You've always been a brilliant story teller and you keep getting better and I keep wanting more. I will always be thankful to you for sharing your talents with us.
Author's Response:
Thanks so much, d_el1.
Reviewer: d_el1 Signed [Report This]Date: 04/05/19 08:16 pm
I'm still around reading fanfic. Yuou are defiantly my favorite author. Please post more soon. I really love your writing and stories.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Reviewer: JarodAndMissParkerForever Anonymous [Report This]Date: 04/05/19 04:22 pm
Bravo! I'm not a softy but I appreciate that they didn't have sex in this chapter. As much as some of us want the story to go in that direction and for Jarod and Miss Parker to grow closer and have sex again it's obviously complicated. Not to mention that she came to him battered and we know Jaord. He's relieved to see her alive and is feeling nothing else but that same boyish affection for her. He patched her up with a doctor's detachment.
I wouldn't have minded a detailed play by play of medical procedures but I know you probably don't care to do that and you have already in several other stories and you did it well. I know you're capable of writing him as a doctor and describing the medical procedures in detail. I think you probably prefer not to. Some of the ladies have an aversion to Jarod as doctor. Some of you have an aversion to Jarod in general but hey I'm not naming names.
Your indifferencence to, and maybe partial dislike of Jarod doesn't show in your writing fortunately. You are a savant and virtuoso. You know where to put the characters and you know where the plausibility limits are. You know when to give us the realistic hardcore sex scenes and you know when to pull back and let the situation be what it is and I'll stop there before my review begins sounding any more similar to that old Air Supply song lol. Things are complicated for Jarod and Miss Parker and that's what so many fans find intriguing about their relationship. It's been forbidden and strained but I hope they will have a semi happy ending. I like the direction and you haven't disappointed me yet.
I'm glad Kirkland was a good guy. Cuban cigars sounds like a nice retirement. Can I thank you for giving them quality dialogue that follows what we know from the series? I look forward to reading more. Until next time.
Reviewer: Michael Anonymous [Report This]Date: 03/05/19 11:31 pm
Ok young lady I'm seriously going to want more of this and soon as possible!! ***cracks whip*** muhawhawbaha. Seriously yeah your writing blows my ass away every time and just gawd I need more.
Reviewer: The Miss Parker Signed [Report This]Date: 03/05/19 02:32 am
Parker's not the only one NOT exonerated if you're following along with real life lol and politics. Thank GOD you're taking my mind off the real life bs.
Things got really tense there when he asked about Dante and what was up with her lip? Is she hiding something from Jarod? I can't wait to see what the next chapter brings. Please continue.
Reviewer: TheDarkAngel Signed
[Report This]Date: 02/05/19 10:07 pm
I love your writing and your style so much and I want to read more. Thank you for sharing your genius with us.
Reviewer: MlleParker Signed [Report This]Date: 02/05/19 06:53 pm
No no of course Parker isn't going to do what Jarod told her to do. That's why I love her so much. But I love him too for caring about her. Oh Mirage you know exactly what you are doing. You know these characters so well. The idea of Jarod watching her sleep for so long .. so many shipper feels in my heart. He has to find her... alive please. Please?
Reviewer: Lacy Signed [Report This]Date: 02/05/19 06:49 am
Miss Parker is so proactive and would take charge of her health but Jarod can't help but to want to help her. I don't blame any woman for having an abortion for any reason and especially in cases of rape. I like how bravely and frankly you talk about abortion and about rape... and about everything. Some people don't say what they mean and it makes it hard to understand what is going on in the story. You choose the words and say it plainly and boldy. Jarod's tenderness with her at the end and his tears...oh he hurts so openly and isn't ashamed to show his tears. That's the Jarod I know and love.
Reviewer: Lacy Signed [Report This]Date: 02/05/19 06:32 am
Jarod KNEW. He knew it was her. Sometimes I can't believe you aren't a JMP shipper and then I read some of your other stories and can definitely believe it. Now I have to say the words. The sex part. OMG! You write it better than anyone!!!
Reviewer: Lacy Signed [Report This]Date: 02/05/19 06:18 am
Margaret is so likeable and maternal and just omg! Parker gave him her mum's St. Anthony and a flash drive during that limo scene in Scotland. I love you for that. ""I didn't realize you were religious," said Margaret, sheepishly.
"Neither did I," Jarod said, explaining succinctly, "It's from her."
and I love this too
"It's no coincidence that I found you one month after Carthis, Mother. You have Miss Parker to thank for that."
Haltingly, Jarod confessed in a low, clipped tone, "I never did."
Jarod's regret is so real and profound. Oh my heart!
Reviewer: Lacy Signed [Report This]Date: 02/05/19 06:10 am
Damn. You know about welding too? You make the guy stuff really cool too and fun to read. So much tension between Kirkland and Rachel. Nice. Plausible that Jarod would collapse even hours after the injury. People do that. Leave the hospital and think they're ok and then die. I remember being so worried that you'd kill him off. lol.
Reviewer: Lacy Signed [Report This]Date: 02/05/19 06:01 am
Kyle's reaction is priceless. Ethan's observations are very telling here and it shows us Jarod's pain and panic. He's still concussed and clearly out of sorts. I'm glad he was able to pull it together finally.
Reviewer: Lacy Signed [Report This]Date: 02/05/19 05:56 am
Jarod does have it coming I agree. Maybe he'll be nicer next time he sees her. Him calling little miss Parker Nancy Drew was the highlight of this day for me. I remember it from the first time I read this and it never gets old. Little Miss Parker is like a snark explosion in this. I love it. One more thing. Rachel. Wow. What Jarod is so cool. I love the guy for it.
Reviewer: Lacy Signed [Report This]Date: 02/05/19 05:40 am
I've needed this in my life for so long Mirage and never thought I'd see Jarod so freaking disturbed. It's time for Miss Parker to get some pay back even if she isn't even aware that he feels he's losing his mind through all of this. It's so well written. I love his reactions and mannerisms. You capture them all perfectly. Closing this chapter this way was cruel and genius. I needed more and wanted it soon because I wanted Jarod to be ok but I still loved the way you wrote it.
Reviewer: Lacy Signed [Report This]Date: 02/05/19 05:34 am
lol "if you squint you can almost see the ocean" bahaha. Misery. I think the misery is bringing Jarod and Miss Parker closer.
Reviewer: Lacy Signed [Report This]Date: 02/05/19 05:22 am
Screaming microwaves lol. "I've seen the movies. I know what men like you get up to." Please tell me that's a reference to Weiss's other movies because it should be. Magdalena even says "juicy" and my first thought was that movie Iowa because he says that word too in that movie. I didn't even pick up on that during my first reading of this story. I did blow through it like a junkie with a drug tho because I can't wait to know what will happen. "Gotta fan the ladies." lol. An aunt of mine referred to her breasts as ladies. So funny. Old people are so funny.
Reviewer: Lacy Signed [Report This]Date: 02/05/19 05:12 am
Ooh ohhhh! Jarod lied to the parents to make them feel better. OMG. I love that he feels bad about it. if he'd listened to Miss Parker he wouldn't have had to lie so.. maybe next time he'll know better. Your original characters rock! The cop and FBI lingo, just all of it. You're versatile and knowledgeable and you must spend a lot of time researching. This is why I can't write. But that's ok. I'll read you.
Reviewer: Lacy Signed [Report This]Date: 02/05/19 05:01 am
Your descriptive work is pretty freaking amazing actually Mirage. You paint me a portrait of the properties and.. wow. It's impressive as hell. Miss Parker was right. Jarod was wrong. For some reason I like that. He's like NEVER wrong during the series and it was getting a little irritating. You keep it real.
Reviewer: Lacy Signed [Report This]Date: 02/05/19 04:54 am
'limo hand crushing scene? lol. I'm sure Jarod didn't hurt her but I totally pulled up IOTH to watch that part and he's totally feeling it lol. So she slipped him a flash drive and I like that plausible and totally cool idea! Rachel is kind of a bitch in this chapter. Grrrah! Jarod is giving Miss Parker hell probably he's falling for her. lol. Guys are weird like that sometimes.
Reviewer: Lacy Signed [Report This]Date: 02/05/19 04:44 am
This is so raw and sharp... so amazingly freaking written. Jarod finding Parker with Kyle. Later, seeing Miss Parker smoke like that kind of hurts you know? Because she is so devastated and unhappy. That wall is up and she is hurting herself so much. She does that. She did it on the show. Life goes on... but it's so miserable for her. You write so well. I feel it all Mirage.
Reviewer: Lacy Signed [Report This]Date: 02/05/19 04:40 am
You're being sarcastic about Jarod sorting it all out aren't you? Bahaha. Perfect chapter. I think I never knew that I wanted to see a Kyle-Parker hook up. It could work. They are so much alike.
Reviewer: Lacy Signed [Report This]Date: 02/05/19 04:33 am
Thanks for keeping it mature. Miss Parker doesn't fight for a man. She'd find another man instead. This chapter exemplifies Miss Parker. I'm not the biggest fan of Rachel but I can see this. Still loving me some Kyle.
Reviewer: Lacy Signed [Report This]Date: 02/05/19 04:08 am
Such a short chapter filled with just the right amount of action and information. I love how Parker and Kyle are playful like children and like adults at the same time. Petuary. Your notes are so funny. I just keep loling.
Reviewer: Lacy Signed [Report This]Date: 02/05/19 03:46 am
