BUT SHE ISN'T YOU
Oh my god. There it is.
Oomph. All of the explosions and fireworks. This was so emotional.
The happy beginning. You always sort of do that for us. Thank you for this. I'd love to read more of this. Sequel?
Reviewer: Rozzo Signed
[Report This]Date: 01/07/25 05:05 am
That twist. Hell of a twist. And she's keeping Nate. Aww. But there has to be happy ending. Has to be!
Reviewer: Rozzo Signed [Report This]Date: 01/07/25 04:59 am
Parker is so bad ass. I love her bad ass self.
Reviewer: Rozzo Signed [Report This]Date: 01/07/25 04:56 am
I can never get enough. I love how Jarod plays hard ball with her.
Reviewer: Rozzo Signed [Report This]Date: 01/07/25 04:50 am
Jarod knew something had gone wrong before the call. Oh. I hope everything is ok now.
Reviewer: Rozzo Signed [Report This]Date: 01/07/25 04:49 am
When they were interrogating Parker, asking if she would apologize it reminded me of the orange clown grabber in the white house with gang of weasles trying to gang up on the wonderful and brave President Volodymyr Zelenskyy.
All abusive arseholes are the same as the orange rapist in chief.
Brilliant writing.
[Report This]Date: 01/07/25 04:24 am
OOmpah I love this! So raw and real and so much raw emotion. My new favorite! Inception? Oh, gods.
Reviewer: Rozzo Signed [Report This]Date: 01/07/25 04:17 am
Oohh another mutlichapter! You've already held my attention with the first paragraph. The excitement is already tingling in my spine.
Reviewer: Rozzo Signed [Report This]Date: 01/07/25 04:06 am
Wow. A happy ending or the promise of one, and that's all we ever wanted. Oh, Mirage. I love this. I know you aren't a shipper but I'm thankful to you for giving us this amazing win. Thank you so much.
Reviewer: nopiupiroie Signed [Report This]Date: 10/06/25 05:06 am
"Never." Oh, Jarod. I weep for that man. I commend the way he held it together when Parker told him the truth about his father. He was worried for her and cared about nothing else. That's how much he loves her. Amazing. The subtleties are brilliant.
Reviewer: nopiupiroie Signed [Report This]Date: 10/06/25 05:04 am
Those chapter titles. It was like that on the series. Jarod would be progress, a step forward, and then bam two steps back. The struggle is real with those 2.
Reviewer: nopiupiroie Signed [Report This]Date: 10/06/25 05:01 am
It is important for patients to try to remember what happened to them. Your Doctor Jarod is awesome by the way. Damn. SO hot. I can literally SEE them in everything you write. Gah. I love it so hard.
Reviewer: nopiupiroie Signed [Report This]Date: 10/06/25 04:59 am
Jarod always with the gentle nudge. I like this. They leave it open and unresolved during the tv series so this I like more, because either Ben is her father or Jarod is a cruel manipulative liar for leading Parker to believe that Ben is her father. I wouldn't want her to be with him if he lied and deceived her that much.Thank you for redeeming him.
Reviewer: nopiupiroie Signed [Report This]Date: 10/06/25 04:56 am
Dark. Gloriously dark. Oh. *BOWS DEEPLY*
Reviewer: nopiupiroie Signed [Report This]Date: 10/06/25 04:52 am
I'm a little afraid of how dark this might get. So far everything seems typical of the series. I'm really excited too because it feels like watching an episode. You are addicting.
Reviewer: nopiupiroie Signed [Report This]Date: 10/06/25 04:50 am
I love your ability to make the writing so vivid that I'm there with the characters, and I love how in character they all are. The action's terrific. I like the pacing, that you don't bog me down in excessive detail. You strike a balance that satisfies me.
Reviewer: nopiupiroie Signed [Report This]Date: 10/06/25 04:45 am
Oooh snap another multi-chapter story from Mirage. I thought I had read this one years ago but I didn't. I was missing out. This one really hits. First chapter is sharp and plunges us into Centre action invoking ALL of The Pretender feels. Your writing is like magic or miracles. I love it.
Reviewer: nopiupiroie Signed [Report This]Date: 10/06/25 04:41 am
Pretender perfection.
Thank you.
Reviewer: lisa Signed [Report This]Date: 02/06/25 03:30 am
I was cheering for a happen ending the entire time I want you to know ’ ’ 😘
Reviewer: lisa Signed [Report This]Date: 02/06/25 03:28 am
Parker has her own side thing going and no one else knew because she is Parker. That tracks.and she's so bad ass.
Reviewer: lisa Signed [Report This]Date: 02/06/25 02:52 am
Stay.
That's enough said. What better said!
Reviewer: lisa Signed [Report This]Date: 02/06/25 02:50 am
Just all the oomphs!After a second read through it still hits 🎯
Reviewer: lisa Signed [Report This]Date: 02/06/25 02:47 am
Damnn. Lyke is so snarky and darkly funny.. a wrong morbid funny. You tapped into him and all of the characters. I love that Jarod has to physically and forcefully pull parker away from Lyle to keep her from killing him with her bare hands. So amazing 😍 🤩
Reviewer: lisa Signed [Report This]Date: 02/06/25 02:45 am
Truth is in every word. You really watched the series closer than I did and the characters. I'm in awe over here. I'm also in the edge of my ‘
Reviewer: lisa Signed [Report This]Date: 02/06/25 02:41 am
