Very interesting story. I can't believe Sydney and Miss Parker would be so quick to buy Lyle's story and believe the worst of Jarod.
Looking forward to more.......
Author's Response:
Yes, but seeing is believing. (sometimes anyway)
Thanks for commenting.
Reviewer: jeanneb Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/10/08 11:55 pm
Great start to this story. I liked it. Is Jarod going to tell Sydney and Miss Parker that it's Gemini that's killing the people and not him? Will they belive him when he does? Please update soon.
Author's Response:
I just updated with the answers to those questions. I hope you're not too disappointed.
Thanks for the comment!
Reviewer: Ann Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 30/09/08 04:05 am
I am enjoying this story very much and I hope that you will continue with it soon. Your ideas are very refreshing!
Author's Response: Thanks so much for your very kind comments.
[Report This]Date: 29/09/08 07:04 pm
Hey Mirage,
I think this story is really good!
I liked the mystery about Jarod being a killer and also the way Ms. Parker handles the situation
xxx
LS
Author's Response: Thanks so much! Reviewer: LS Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 28/09/08 07:17 pm
