Great story, I hope you finish it
Very funny
Reviewer: Mverderber Signed
[Report This]Date: 20/12/24 12:28 am
Great story, I hope you finish it
Reviewer: Mverderber Signed [Report This]Date: 20/12/24 12:28 am
Great story, I hope you finish it
Reviewer: Mverderber Signed [Report This]Date: 20/12/24 12:28 am
Great story, I hope you finish it
Reviewer: Mverderber Signed [Report This]Date: 20/12/24 12:27 am
Great story, I hope you finish it
Reviewer: Mverderber Signed [Report This]Date: 20/12/24 12:27 am
Great story, I hope you finish it
Reviewer: Mverderber Signed [Report This]Date: 20/12/24 12:27 am
I read all you stories. They re very good. You have the ability to write a complete short story with a complicated plot and fully developed characters. I prefer stories that are 80,000 to 100,000 words, but I really enjoyed you re short stories. I hope you one day write a long fanfic for the pretender. I d love to read it.
Reviewer: Mverderber Signed [Report This]Date: 19/12/24 08:39 pm
I read all you stories. They re very good. You have the ability to write a complete short story with a complicated plot and fully developed characters. I prefer stories that are 80,000 to 100,000 words, but I really enjoyed you re short stories. I hope you one day write a long fanfic for the pretender. I d love to read it.
Reviewer: Mverderber Signed [Report This]Date: 19/12/24 08:39 pm
I read all you stories. They re very good. You have the ability to write a complete short story with a complicated plot and fully developed characters. I prefer stories that are 80,000 to 100,000 words, but I really enjoyed you re short stories. I hope you one day write a long fanfic for the pretender. I d love to read it.
Reviewer: Mverderber Signed [Report This]Date: 19/12/24 08:39 pm
I read all you stories. They re very good. You have the ability to write a complete short story with a complicated plot and fully developed characters. I prefer stories that are 80,000 to 100,000 words, but I really enjoyed you re short stories. I hope you one day write a long fanfic for the pretender. I d love to read it.
Reviewer: Mverderber Signed [Report This]Date: 19/12/24 08:39 pm
I read all you stories. They re very good. You have the ability to write a complete short story with a complicated plot and fully developed characters. I prefer stories that are 80,000 to 100,000 words, but I really enjoyed you re short stories. I hope you one day write a long fanfic for the pretender. I d love to read it.
Reviewer: Mverderber Signed [Report This]Date: 19/12/24 08:39 pm
You 've got to be kidding me ! Just when it was getting interessting Ireally hope that you ill continue this story someday . Until then I cross fingers .
Reviewer: tana Signed [Report This]Date: 11/07/16 08:47 am
Outstanding! This is definitely a keeper! Gotta have more updates to this one. You just captured true Pretender Series writing form. This has so many possibilities and wish it were part of the series DVD!
Reviewer: electricq Anonymous [Report This]Date: 06/01/10 05:01 am
Great! Please ccontinue this! Brootses remarks are so funny!
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: 14/06/09 02:46 pm
Very exciting story ~ please finish it :)
Reviewer: JeanneB Anonymous [Report This]Date: 29/06/08 12:09 am
I'm loving this story. Hope you post more soon.
Reviewer: Ann Anonymous [Report This]Date: 06/04/07 06:56 pm
great story, conflictin characters an amusing situations... Can't wait for more!
Reviewer: bloodymary2 Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 25/06/05 08:49 pm
broots saving jarod! me likey! our unlikely hero is sometimes really a hero! and you keep on giving her the greatest lines, love that! keep the chapters coming!
Reviewer: jerseygirl Anonymous [Report This]Date: 29/05/05 07:43 pm
Thanks for posting a new chapter. Too bad, we have to wait for next to get our fix. ;P Anyway, I loved this chapter. Is MP going to save Jarod's ass? I hope so. ;P Thanks and have a nice weekend.
Reviewer: chocofan Anonymous [Report This]Date: 27/05/05 07:39 am
i am starting to positively love this story. please go on posting. *seats and waits for the new chapeter*
Reviewer: Cassandra2pg Signed [Report This]Date: 25/05/05 05:07 pm
I caught the first two parts on the pretenderfic mailing list yesterday and was thrilled to see part 3 here today. Keep up the good work, I'm looking forward to reading more!
Reviewer: Visiongirl Anonymous [Report This]Date: 25/05/05 02:07 pm
Good action! But what I enjoyed most was the faboulous characterization! Very well within the canon what we have seen along the series. Loved esp. Jarods witty remarks and her trademark barks! *“Nice job, Broots,” she said. “There’s an use for you after all.”* *ggg* just a note asside: maybe one lil oversight in the chapter-titling? 3rd and 1st are titeled the same?
Reviewer: jerseygirl Anonymous [Report This]Date: 25/05/05 08:26 am
Poor Sam! He's dead! Anyway, very interesting fiction. please post as soon as possible. Keep up the *great* work.
Reviewer: chocofan Anonymous [Report This]Date: 25/05/05 07:02 am
Ooh. Getting interesting. Great work, keep the chapters coming :)
Reviewer: Blade Mistress Signed [Report This]Date: 21/05/05 12:52 am
