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Title: Chapter 1

😢😭

I hope they get revenge together!

Top notch mate!

Reviewer: Jeremy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11/06/25 03:52 am
Title: Chapter 1

A new story from Mirage yes please! I'm so here for it, Mirage.

Boom! This is GOLD from the first word. Emptiness. Jarod and Parker talked about emptiness in Carthis. This seems to pick up at the exact point where we were rudely abandoned.

Thank YOU!

Jarod is SO Jarod.

Parker is SO Parker.

Broots is so Broots.

I love it.

I want more.

Reviewer: Renea Collins Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05/11/24 09:15 pm
Title: Chapter 1

Stunning, stunning, impressive writing as always.

You leave me craving more.

Reviewer: The Miss Parker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01/11/24 09:57 pm
Title: Chapter 1

Top shelf. Continue please.

Reviewer: King Of Pain Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30/10/24 10:16 pm
Title: Chapter 1

Oh wow wow wow. Continuity. Continuity. Continuity. I'm a stickler for continuity.

I love your Pretender perfect characterizations, the dialogue, the plausibility, the mannerisms, the Jarodisms, the Parkerisms, the Brootsisms, the Sydneyisms, your transition and descriptive work, the natural ability you have to tell a story and write it and above all I love continuity and you bring it. You brought it big time. I love that you're true to canon, the bunnies.

My heart is pieces on the floor and I'm gathering them up now and will get some glue. I'll make repairs. I love this chapter even as heartbreaking at it is.

I hope you'll continue. It's exceptionally out of this world amazing. Thank you. It's a painful pleasure to read you.

Reviewer: Amelia_ Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30/10/24 09:29 pm
Title: Chapter 1

I love ths story. "can't keep up with car how will I keep up with a toddler" sounds like every parent I know. You've humanized Parker enough to make her relatable even likable without changing her personality You excel in that area and in not bogging down the story with a lot of extra unnecessary words and ..who am I kidding you excel all around in every area of writing. So addicting, Mirage!

Reviewer: Xena Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30/10/24 08:13 pm
Title: Chapter 1

😮 😯 Oohhh. I've always believed that Briggie was carrying Parker and Jarod's child, and you have dealt us a blow with this.

Parker discovered his death by seeing him and helping with his unfinished business of saying goodbye to his parents and he wanted to give them the 🐇 bunny 😭 😭 😭 😭  that jarod gave him when he was a baby. I'm just weeping like Jarod and Parker now. The bunnies.. remember the bunnies that Jarod and Parker held when they were young? It always comes back to the bunnies.

You never disappoint. Not yet anyway.

 I appreciate all of your hard work.

More please?

Reviewer: Rozzo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30/10/24 05:32 am
Title: Chapter 1

Checking in. I do hope you'll update soon or write anything.

Mostly and of immediacy, I hope you'll check in too. I recall that you were in the path of Hurricane Michael. I don't know where you are in the world. I think you're from outside of the United States but I've heard that you are in a long term relationship with a U.S. Marine. You are a woman. He is a man. You're straight. You must travel back and forth between homes and bases?? My point is that I'm worried that you were or ARE in Helene's path. You have so much going on already and your partner is disabled as a result of his service. You have something wrong with your jaw? I hope you're healthy as can be. I hope everything is well. Let someone know something. You have no social media... I'm worried. 

Until you respond, I wish you and yours well. I miss you. Please be well.

Ciao!



Author's Response:
Yes, Long Term Marine and I were in the southeast (again) just in time for Helene. We're fine.

There was an awful lot of damage (some deaths, too) around us, and I applaud FEMA and the National Gaurd for the massive and prompt response.

Be well -- back atcha.

.

 

Reviewer: Michael Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01/10/24 02:18 am
Title: Chapter 1

I meant to ask about self-insertions in fanfic, too. What is your opinion on all of it?

Reviewer: Angela Penn Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25/09/24 08:51 pm
Title: Chapter 1

Ohh. You left Twitter? Apparently years and years ago? You are hard to find. I love your work.. LOVE everything about your writing ! I have a question. I want to write but my story might have Mary sue elements. How do you feel personally about Mary Sue fiction or in fanfic? I value your writing and value you as a person.. you are always kind to me in review responses and I know you've been there for some of us when you were needed..I value your input.

Please be honest duh you always seem honest and hold nothing back.

I hope to see you back posting when you are able to. Caretaking for disabled loved one can be hard and keep you busy and your mental health and self care is so so important too .

I'm thinking of you.

Sending good vibes — — — —.’’’’’–’–’–’–’–

Reviewer: Angela Penn Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23/09/24 04:44 pm
Title: Chapter 1

I hope you are well and happy.. really worried about you... it's been so long.

Know that you are in my thoughts and heart and I think of you all the time.. ’– ’– love to you.

Reviewer: Jen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22/09/24 08:18 pm
Title: Chapter 1

Hey, baby sweet heart ’“ friend, are you doing alright? We're worried about you. When you're not busy, after you have whatever time and self-care you need ...if that's what you're doing... and when the time is right and you feel like it please let someone here know that you're ok. If you're not ok and if you need anything...anything...please let me or contessa know.

You always say we're fandomly, you always have been there for fandomly, you have talked to me for hours when I

had no one else..hours and hours chatting and emailing.  I'm here for you that same way. You're my fandomly  too.

Take care of yourself.



Author's Response:
I just discovered that my inbox is full, and came here immediately. I was away and unplugged for several weeks- a purely spontaneous thing.

And then I had to travel to see a barbaric-yet-competent specialist (the jaw saga continues) for yet another procedure. And Sutures. More sutures.

Yeah, so I have sutures in my mouth, again, at the moment, so I don't have an update for you right now.
I'm sorry.

And I'm sorry that you were concerned. Things are probably as good as can be expected. It's life. We're living it one moment at a time, small slices, not making any plans, slowing the pace as much as possible.

You're so kind and compassionate. You are fandomly. Back atcha, Chloe.

I love you all.

 

Reviewer: Chloe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25/08/24 05:16 am
Title: Chapter 1

Are you ok?

We haven't seen you here in a while. You have no other online presence.

I'm worried. I hope you and yours are all ok.

Stay well.

If you need to take it definitely.

I miss you.

 

Ae you ok?

 

 

 

Reviewer: Michael Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03/08/24 08:48 pm

Title: Chapter 1

Ohhh. Did you hear the news? The "grabby" man was holding one of his hatefests and a republican with a weapon tried to take him out. lol. What are your thoughts?

Grabby man wants unity and immunity and calls the attack on the capitol a hoax lol.

What are you thinking?

Unity?

lol.

Please keep writing too mate! I love your work.



Author's Response:

I had to do some homework when I read your review. I've been away for a little while.

I'll preface this response with I abhor violence, and I particularly abhor sexual violence and sexual violence perpetrators aka "grabbers" and their enablers and supporters.

The avowed and adjudicated rapist has been perpetrating and perpetuating violence and hateful rhetoric for decades, and that hasn't changed simply because the violence he spawned returned to graze him "like a boomerang, only you don't throw it."

I'm relieved that no innocent person was harmed. I don't have any other thoughts, really; I'm entirely indifferent to this.

And I won't be gaslit into caring about, or unifying with that rapist (or his enablers and supporters), just as I wouldn't unite with—and wasn't taught to care about—the Mengeles, Dahmers, Hitlers, etc of the world.

I didn't know it happened, and it has had zero impact on my life; that's how little significance he has.

Little is woefully inaccurate. I don't care at all about the rapist, and I don't care if that's politically incorrect, woke, wrong, amoral, abnormal, a sin, or whatever.

 

My thoughts and compassion are for genuine victims and survivors, the truly innocent. E. Jean Carroll, Mrs. Giffords, the Parkland students, Sandy Hook students and their families, etc. etc. I care about them. And I care about Gus. I have to mention Gus. Gus is amazing.

Reviewer: King Of Pain Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17/07/24 10:24 pm
Title: Chapter 1

Top notch mate! This is exciting! My god you really have a grasp of the characters, and... where has that little kid been? Thank you for addressing this. Broots Broots Broots. Everyone loves him. I love it when he features prominently. Keep going please. Please. I love it.

Reviewer: Gunner Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03/07/24 09:34 pm
Title: Chapter 1

Ooh Mirage. A new story! Yes yes yes. I need more of this in my life so please continue and please continue as soon as you can. I love it. Jarod delivers. I mean... damn, girl. You've got the characters... you write them dead exactly like they are. I see and hear them. I need more.

Reviewer: Sela Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03/07/24 04:42 am
Title: Chapter 1

Woot, I'm so excited

that's an earworm...

and I just can't hide it

I know I know I know I know I know I want

TO r

ead more.

I made it work.

I do a singalong when someone talks in lyrics. Can't help it.

This is awesome. Please continue. Please continue quickly!

Reviewer: Miss Parkere Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03/07/24 03:01 am
Title: Chapter 1

I read your response to my review of RUPTURE and you're right. This is THE HOTEL CALIFORNIA of fandoms. I will never leave. I'll just check out. It's good to have your company fellow guest. You young folks keep me young in many ways. You certainly grip my attention and hold fast to it.

This new story is a holy smokes on fire one already. Plausible, accurate  characterizations, intelligent dialogue, remarkable descriptive work, lyrical prose, tension, action, adventure. You have it all. I look forward to chapter two!

Reviewer: James Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02/07/24 11:12 pm
Title: Chapter 1

Woot woot bravo! Mirage in D hoouse again! Thank you for being here. Thank you. Thank you for writing. It means so much to me. I love this series and I love that you don't let it die. Keep keeping the dream alive please!

Reviewer: Cal Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02/07/24 05:45 am
Title: Chapter 1

Merci! More please?

Reviewer: MlleParker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02/07/24 03:10 am
Title: Chapter 1

I began this and starting shaking with excitement and anticipation so I understand Parker's reactions just fine. I've read it 3 times already and it's phenomenal Mirage. I've seen those kinds of dry and parched lands in person and you put me right back there with your descriptions. I'm more of an urban gal now, but there was some beauty back in the rural areas too. You never hold back on us and I'm grateful for that. Thank you. Congratulations on this. I love it already. It hit me right in the Pretender feels.

Reviewer: shauna Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02/07/24 02:47 am
Title: Chapter 1

That was quick! You are on a roll darling. Don't stop now!

Reviewer: Con-O Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02/07/24 01:51 am
Title: Chapter 1

I'm so excited to read something new and fresh from Mirage. This is a most welcomed surprise ma petite! Please keep going.

Reviewer: Jillian Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01/07/24 11:03 pm
Title: Chapter 1

Holy fucking goddesses! A brand new Mirage story to get me hotter during this heat wave. Baby I am SOOOOOO here for this. Jarod did it. Mind you, he did it with Catherine's help but  he.. it seems he got through to her. I hope so.

I know how you are.  You never do what I think you will do so I won't be shook if Miss Parker is  peeling tires in a cloud of dust that chokes Jarod to death and she never looks back. But I hope she doesn't. Mind you either choice is in character for Miss Parker. I hope she listens to her mum this time.

More please? I love it. The characters are spot on like they always are when you write them and the plot is intriguing and original. The setting is HOT as expected. I can tell you think a lot about climate change because you're always describing nature and sometimes it's nature is dying, dead, and nast-AY.

I love it all. This is art for me.

 

Reviewer: Monica_Bitch Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01/07/24 09:03 pm
Title: Chapter 1

I need more.

Now!

Reviewer: TheDarkAngel Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29/06/24 11:19 pm

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