This might be my favorite as you continue to outdo yourself!
I 😘 love your strong command of the characters and language.
You must update this and everything you're writing.
I hope you will also share more stories here yours are so wonderful.
Did you know that the Michael is a shrink now?!!
Isn't that wild!
What did you think about that ...or did you even know this fact?!
How do you feel about this mirage????!!!
He is practicing in the southern US!!!
Aren't you there sometimes in the south of the US or it did I hear wrong?!
I want your thoughts!!
I love your writing.
Don't stop ever!
I need more! So hot!




[Report This]Date: 19/05/25 01:06 am
I'm relieved that they didn't worry about blood testing and decided to choose each other.
Sydney's drug was named the original Greek Katherine and I love that personal touch.
I think Jarod is gonna have major issues trying to accept that he was sometimes spared while parker was sacrificed.
He always struggles when people are hurt because of him, handles it worse than if he were the one suffering.
I'm so stoked for more.
Reviewer: valerie_ Signed



[Report This]Date: 01/05/25 07:10 am
Oh, stunning work, Mirage. It's profound that Jarod would get upset to the point of vomiting over what happened to Parker but not himself. From a genius's perspective he knows he can handle anything and he isn't wrong when contrasting that to Parker. We already we see that Parker handles things by drinking excessively (in the series) and avoiding Jarod ..she did that on the series and in this story.
It wasn't the potential incest thing that drove Jarod to his knees or his past pain at Sydneys hands, it was Parker's pain. He began feeling ill since meeting with Lyle and hearing lyle talk about Parker, voice concerns for her. I think Jarod has been dreading learning that worse things happened to Parker. He loves her obviously and would react that way. It's plausible, in character. Everyone is in character.
Congratulations.
Reviewer: Imogen Signed



[Report This]Date: 30/04/25 06:33 pm
I can't even think right now. I love this. LOVE! I kind of want them to be daughter and father now. It's the Centre so you definitely didn't strain plausibility. It IS possible.
I love how Jarod stepped heavily intentionally so as not to suprise her. He seemed to do that all of the time during the tv series. I love the scenery. You always describe the scenery and ... I love your descriptive work. It's beautiful and lends to the story and reading and watching experience. You know exactly the perfect amount to add.
I love how comfortable they are with each other, the way she acted like she hadn't heard him and was ignoring him. So adorable. I love them this way.
"The trout probably wouldn't appreciate that." lmao! That was awesome and I can see and hear Jarod OUR MICHAEL T WEISS saying that.
Susan gets a mention. That'a awesome that he's helping her find missing people after she tried to help him back in ... was that season 1? Oh, wow.
THIS GEM THO:: MY FAVORITE::: "You're right," Parker agreed, instinctively reciprocating, closing her fingers, squeezing Jarod's hand. "The ECG coffee mug would've been a dead giveaway." "Sydney's a doctor, too. It could just as easily belong to him." "Mm, no, it couldn't," Parker argued placidly, "not with the words sinus in the streets tachy in the sheets stamped on it--emphasis on tacky, Jarod." Jarod smiled brightly, and with a soft laugh informed Parker, "I spent thirteen months trying to figure out what that meant." Jarod's passionate pleas.. ohhhh. "ARe you going to let them take this from us too?" MIND IS BLOWN.
I can't even... can't.




[Report This]Date: 26/09/24 12:00 am
Magnificent. You capture the allure of the Pretender series, the essence, and that forbiddenness too. So absorbing and I can't get enough.
They should bring our series back to television and YOU should be involved with the writing.
Reviewer: Gunner Signed



[Report This]Date: 25/07/23 10:11 pm
Awesome first chapter. I love your insights into the troubled mind.
Reviewer: lisa Signed



[Report This]Date: 25/03/23 03:51 am
please update this one too
Reviewer: Leslie Signed



[Report This]Date: 19/05/22 06:04 pm
Exquisite. Another poignant chapter and I'm pleasantly surprised by the character devolpment and growth. I'm, as always, astounded by your prose and characterizations, and look forward to reading the remainder.
Ciao!
Reviewer: Michael Signed



[Report This]Date: 12/04/22 04:35 pm
First rate writing. People leave each other but the love doesn't always leave too and in these circumstances this makes total sense to me. Parker didn't walk away because she didn't love Jarod. Jarod didn't stay away and respect her wishes because he didn't love Parker. Love can mean giving a person distance too. Thought-provoking work as usual and always incredibly profound.
Reviewer: Jeremy Anonymous



[Report This]Date: 30/01/22 12:00 am
Oh my godesses I can't even right now but I will anyway. Mirage, I love the way she told him, the way he didn't pick up on what she was saying like he also didn't realize he was shouting I love you at her. He's still dealing with so much and almost lost Sydney and Sydney's the reason he nearly killed Lyle and I think Jarod is experiencing a crisis and I love it. He's so used to knowing everything and how everything will go and being in control of everything and all of the consequences and now this has challenged everything he thought he knew. I love it. It's so plausible, too. I love how you challenge everything, too, and keep me riveted on the story. It's amazing. More, please?
Reviewer: Angela Penn Signed



[Report This]Date: 26/01/22 12:45 am
Top notch mate! I can't get enough.
Reviewer: Gunner Signed



[Report This]Date: 25/01/22 09:33 pm
Business took me away from wifi, and it's a pleasure to be back in the land of the living and reading you again. Every letter is so well placed and I don't have to tell you how well you write. The characters are exactly the characters. I'll be quick and say I can't wait to read your next chapter. You really know how to keep the pages turning. Congrats!
Ciao!
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Reviewer: Michael Anonymous



[Report This]Date: 23/11/21 11:59 pm
Awesome job. I love your work!
Reviewer: Jami Signed



[Report This]Date: 02/11/21 01:27 am
hoping you update soon. PLEASE! I can't believe all these original ideas you have in a fandom this old. So fresh and real. I've been reading since the beginning of fanfic here and this is the best. The characters are perfect, not too soft not too mean just like I remember.
Reviewer: crackerjacks Anonymous



[Report This]Date: 15/10/21 12:35 am
I'm so happy you are still here and now ringing in the 25th with us. You are the one I keep coming back for and definitely one of the best authors. Keep going please.
Reviewer: Thara Anonymous [Report This]Date: 12/10/21 09:37 pm
I have been away too long. This is frightening and wonderful. I'm hooked.
Reviewer: Angela Penn Signed



[Report This]Date: 23/09/21 02:47 am
Lyle has been through hell. He's done bad sh!t but bad sh!t was done to him and that's why. This is probably why Jarod never killed Lyle or never had Lyle arrested, why he never took down Lyle the way he did other baddies. If Lyle was so bad Jarod should have done something about him. Thanks for updating and being you.
Reviewer: Gunner Signed



[Report This]Date: 10/07/21 04:13 pm
More.
Now.
please.
omg.
Reviewer: Melissa Anonymous



[Report This]Date: 02/05/21 11:43 pm
Loving this and still waiting for more. I hope you're ok. It's been a while.
Reviewer: Kels Anonymous



[Report This]Date: 30/04/21 12:04 am
Delightful!!! Damn, girl, you're an amazing writer. I'm wowed again. More please.
Reviewer: needlepoint Signed



[Report This]Date: 17/03/21 10:38 pm
well done!I'm such a Jarod fan and I usually read the Jarod stories and pass everything else by but you yanked me in. I'm one of Michael T. Weiss 's biggest ever fans, have a selfie and everything though he was like in the background of my selfie so maybe didn't know lol. Show me your selfie with him and I'll show you mine. If don't have a selfie with him you need to get one and you need to update this and all your fics cos ima read them all. I love the way you write you really have command of the wrod and the characters. more please.
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[Report This]Date: 20/02/21 04:21 am
*can't stop reading.
I'm drunk on brilliant grammar and still in this storyverse/not back in reality yet.
Author's Response:
Hi, The Miss Parker.
Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Reviewer: The Miss Parker Signed



[Report This]Date: 24/01/21 11:59 pm
Magnifique!
You have a command of the stories and characters that is rare. You are the most gifted author! You have mastered the craft of writing and storytelling and always leave me amazed. I dare to ask for more.
Author's Response:
Hi, Archange. Meh, no, I'm not the most gifted anything. I know I'm not supposed to argue with reviewers. I'm supposed to thank you and move on.
Thank you for reading and reviewing.
Reviewer: Archange Signed



[Report This]Date: 16/01/21 07:51 pm
I'm usually drawn to Jarod and Parker central fics, smut, hardcore sex and evil Jarod being a rapist because after cutting a man and taking his organ dear innocent Jarod seemed capable of violating anyone's autonomy BUT I love this. I love how Jarod is all in a rage cos of Syd being gone. I need more young lady and I needs it now. You impress the shit out of me.
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[Report This]Date: 15/05/20 04:36 pm
