Characters: Jarod, Miss Parker
Classifications: Genres: Angst
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed:No
Word count: 4496
Read Count: 31842
I'm grinning like a huge fool. There aren't many authors willing to jump out of the box and turn the shipperdom upside down. There aren't many authors who accept Thomas as a legitimate part of Parker's life. They treat him like a whim...just like her father did. What you did here is intriguing. It's different and probably left many people feeling bitter. It's a spin on Jarod/Parker romance...and when I saw the title I knew it wouldn't be boring. You didn't disappoint.
I read tons of fanfic and it's all the same story, and the stories are the same story basically, they all look alike and end the same with Jarod and MP together forever in love. Jarod, MP, kissy kissy, children and 90% of it is unrealistic and not plausible. This will probably fall on deaf ears but I hope you will add some more chapters. Congratulations on the break from the pack. You rock!
Reviewer: needlepoint SignedTarzan. lol. Sooo fitting. My nephews were watching something one day and I heard Jarod's voice and went in to why I heard Jarods voice and it was Tarzan! Same thing with young justice. Good job on this series.
Reviewer: needlepoint SignedOooh gotta know what happens now.
Reviewer: needlepoint SignedSoo glad to have found another part of the series. ooh a secret exit. So exciting.
Reviewer: needlepoint Signedthat's a very in character miss p. So nice.
Reviewer: needlepoint SignedIn Pieces.
Oh, a multi chapter that I missed? How is that even possible?
Heteropaternal superfecundation? Ooh, gods. Makes sense tho, makes so much sense. So excited for chapter 2.
Oomph! Jarod is always SO Jarod when you write him. JEEEESUUSSS, Mirage.
I love that Parker is trying to save her people. She acts like she doesn't care but they are her people and she will kill for them.
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Oh, god. I read the next chapter because I was freaking out and had to know what happened next. Lyle is a bastard. We knew that but yeah, this tracks.
Reviewer: needlepoint SignedJarod knew. God. He KNEW. I love it.
I love that Jarod had to PHYSICALLY stop Parker to prevent her from killing Lyle. But what they were going to do to her. I DON'T BLAME PARKER.
Reviewer: needlepoint SignedYay. Ben. Ben is her father. That would redeem Jarod for sending her to Lake Catherine and making her think Ben is her father. We never learn the truth in the series. That's why fanfic exists! YAY!
Reviewer: needlepoint SignedPeek a boo gown lol. Parker and her colorful snark. IT can't almost be over already. I could read it forever.
Reviewer: needlepoint SignedDamn but Parker is so bad ass even when injured. And she is stubborn. So bloody stubborn.
Reviewer: needlepoint SignedI'm still hoping for a happy ending. Please I hope it's so!
Reviewer: needlepoint SignedYESSSSS "but she isn't you." OH MY GOD. Oh my god! Best thang EVER!
Thank you!
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This is just beautiful. Magnificent, Mirage.
He dreamed in color.
Oh, Angelo. My whole heart shatters for that man.
I'm sorry I haven't read this before. My loss. I love this. I
hope you don't mind all of the reviews you're getting today from me. I'm catching up on stories I missed.
Thank you for this and all of your stories.
Reviewer: needlepoint SignedMiss Parker. Jarod. A kiss. Death.
Holy wows. I missed a lot of these stories somewhow. This is brilliant. Genius, Mirage. A little evil but definitely genius.
Reviewer: needlepoint SignedA sequel to FUN HOUSE and SIMPLE PLEASURES. You don't have to read either of those to get the gist of this.
I don't know what to say. This was totally sweet and very hot but not cheesy. You never go overboard with the cheddar like too many other writers do.
Reviewer: needlepoint SignedRetribution goes awry when Jarod inadvertently kills a man. (Story in English)
I get the feeling that this won't be a favorite of mine. I'll have to see how bad the nonconsent is.. BUT ...BUT this first chapter is f******* amazing! Jarod goes too far. You never let him be too perfect. I love that about you! In Forces of Nature, he had issues but those aside, he had to struggle to find Miss Parker and when he did find her, it was only because he bumped into a guy ... all that hard work and it was luck that helped him. In Nemesis, he works days and nights through headaches and exhaustion just to try to keep up with her and still she escapes him lol. Circles f Hell he couldn't find her and she ended up finding him more than other way around. You really have a perspective into these characters that no one else has. It's astounding. I love your writing.
Thanks, Needlepoint. It's not my favorite either. None of my fics are my favorite. This one was okay until chapter two. I don't approve of chapters two through how ever many chapters this becomes.
Reviewer: needlepoint SignedMiss Parker is so wonderful here..she always is but there's so much I love here, that's she picking on Broots again and this-- "No," Parker said curtly. "The only thing you'll find in the details, Sydney, is the devil," Parker said as she threw the car into reverse. "And I believe we're searching for Jarod."
She's not going to tell the woman's secret. I see again that woman's code and little girls' code thing here that you first introduced us to in The Return series with Nia and Parker. I remember now that Parker was kind to Zoe as well in Forces of Nature and in Circles of Hell was sorry that Zoe overdosed. I think it's cool that Miss Parker is above being catty most of the time. Fabulous chapter.
Well, she is Miss Parker. She has to belittle Brootsie and Sydney every now and then. A code to live by. I think Miss Parker has a softer soul than what she reveals. I think she is sympathetic to animals, children, the elderly. She certainly didn't grab Nia by the hair when she met her (not on my dvds anyway). I think the little girl inside reveals herself more often than Parker would like her to, betrays the face she prefers to show the world. I'm glad you like this chapter. Thank you for reading and reviewing, needlepoint.
Reviewer: needlepoint SignedOk I see the exits. lol. I have to finish this. Even if I don't like some of the things that happens sometimes, it is what life is all about and the writing is still the best ever so I try to move the scene faster and get past the bad parts...there haven't been bad parts yet. But Parker is about to piss Jarod off. Right?
Reviewer: needlepoint Signed"Parker laughed derisively and stepped out of the car. "Franken-boy believes he's prepared for everything." Her statement was punctuated by a chambered round, a resounding click that could only be Sam's 9mm."As a matter of fact, I do. I am." Came Jarod's angry snarl. "Drop the gun."
"He's not here now, but you are, and I am and I have the gun." His narrowed eyes suddenly widened as if surprised. "Two guns." Jarod chuckled. "And you are going to be taking orders from me for a while." He growled."
I am trembling. That was chilling Mirage. Damn.
Reviewer: needlepoint SignedOMG! I'm glad they just slept. I want some smut because you write is so well, but I don't want it like that.
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