The Pretender returns.
Parent Series: None
Categories: Post IOTH
Characters: All the characters, Broots, Jarod, Miss Parker, Sydney
Genres: Angst, Drama, General, Romance, Smut, Suspence/Mystery
Warnings: Warning: Sexual Content
Challenges: None
j'adore le caméléon!!
The Pretender returns.
Incredible. I could read your stories always and maybe you'll write more and more. This is a great start and serie! I love it so far.
Reviewer: Archange SignedI read this before and thought I had reviewed. It's incredible.
Reviewer: Archange SignedIn 2002, the corporation known as the Centre was infiltrated by various law enforcement agencies that acted in a synchronized global effort to eradicate the organization. And then one day, Jarod's huntress ran away.
I'm just reading this and already am addicted. What happened to Parker? I hope she'll come through.
Reviewer: Archange SignedMiss Parker. Jarod. A kiss. Death.
This is another one I haven't seen. Jarod dead from Miss Parker's pistachio flavored kiss. Clever to kill him so sweetly. Original and of pretender caliber. First string writing. I want a sequel.
Reviewer: Archange SignedRetribution goes awry when Jarod inadvertently kills a man. (Story in English)
Please update this.
Author's Response:
I will. Soon. Thanks.
Reviewer: Archange SignedYou show again that you command your universe and the characters in it. I read in awe when I read you. My heart was warmed by this even though it was violent in places. My heart was warmed because those are my characters. You worked your magic again! I don't know how you will end this one but I think you will do justice to the series and the characters I love as you always do. I hope Sydney will be able to help Jarod get back to himself! Mirage you are the reason I've been coming here for six years!! I hope you will stay on with the writing.
I wouldn't say it's magic haha. That's really odd. Am I being punked? I'm not certain that I will do justice or not. I appreciate that you think I will. Keep your fingers crossed for me. Thank you for reading and reviewing, Archange.
Reviewer: Archange SignedTwelve years after Carthis, the death of a dear friend reunites predator and prey. *If adultery bothers you, click elsewhere or prepare to be bothered.
Oh Oh Mirage Mirage Mirage... am going to stay up all night reading. I've read only the first five chapters and your fics to me are like crack cocaine to addicts. You know the characters on fundamental plane.. are you sure you weren't a TP writer for the serie? In another life on a parrallel universe? I think Jarod would find himself feeling those emotion..his relationship with Miss Parker is "highly explosive". Plausible, original, always well written. Please I hope you will finish this because now I'm reading.
Reviewer: Archange SignedI read this chapter ten times at least...and it's painful and dark and doesn't get easier to not actually find I'm in the scene. The most bleak cloud on Parker... and I cried for her. You illustrate with your words ...painful talent. I felt stabbed. And Robert...oh, I hate him. I was afraid Parker would get in a car crash...DUI. Am glad you didn't go there.
Reviewer: Archange SignedYou make me hate Jarod for pounding at her walls until they fall. "He slipped out of bed and his dark, probing eyes narrowed. "Then why are you here with me?" And it's his fault she didn't leave. But it's her fault too because she did want him. You are amazing. Your muse is bold..she loves to make already complex characters even more complex to. I had a feeling he wasn't wearing a condom and I wondered....
Reviewer: Archange SignedThe way you pulled that off was brilliant. With brochures scribbled on by Astra their daughter. Robert's death and their little girl throw the "dyfunctional duo" togeether. It's symbolic..your writing is very symbolic and subtle.. while being brutal.
Reviewer: Archange SignedMy favorite chapter so far. So many brilliant parts. First I'm so glad that Ethan isn't groaning and acting whacky. I love that he is the voice of reason and tries to negotiate. I love so much the conversation between sister and brother.. "I don't know." Ethan replied, and then dipped his head and raised a brow at the sight of his sister in such distress. "Why don't you tell me how complicated this is?"Parker buried her face in her hands and shook her head."Sister?""Parker? Are you all right?"He grimaced when his sister sobbed into her hands."Oh, Parker." He whispered."
I mean just wow. I love the scene between Jarod and Astra too. You climbed into everyone's head and I could hear them, a little girl, Jarod, Ethan, Parker, all of them carrying on these conversations is like being there and being real.I love NEMO. I love Radney Foster song you used in the club where Ethan found Jarod. Top notch Mirage!
I spotted one spelling error typo.. " a crouch near the desk " think you meant couch or sofa but your stories are so great I laugh everytime I spot one thinking of you making fun of yourself. Must have sleep now.
Reviewer: Archange SignedParker corners Jarod. Or does she?
Oh my..that was so hot. I want more and more.
And you will get it, Archange. With reviews like these how could I stop writing? Thank you so much for reading and reviewing and THAT rating. I'm not worthy.
Reviewer: Archange SignedJarod has an epiphany. (payback doesn't have to be a bitch)
Short and sweet. I didn't know this one and missed it. It's beautiful.
Reviewer: Archange SignedWhen Jarod and his clone are presumed dead and further cloning attempts prove futile, Raines is determined to find another way. He finds it in Dry River, Arizona.
magnifique!
Thanks, Archange, for reading and reviewing.
Reviewer: Archange SignedTop notch Pretender caliber quality writing and characterisations as always. You really know how to flesh out the characters and dialog so we can SEE in our mind what is transpiring. You ARE a writer, m'dear, the best Pretender writer bar none. This story is what I'd love to have seen Craig Van Sickle and Steven Long Mitchell do with the series. Thanks for your constant continuity and consistently amazing story telling abilities. I can't rate it anything but a 10.
Reviewer: Archange Signed
Dont' forget tabout it.
Author's Response:
I haven't forgotten. Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Reviewer: Archange SignedJarod is always trying to do good by her. "YOU DO remember Ethan?" I always love your dialouge. This is like watching the series on tv again. I don't have to miss the show and I get new scenes thanks to you. Thank you for sharing your talents and skills with us.
Reviewer: Archange SignedLife after Carthis. Short independent chapters about different characters.
Very nice. I hate Zoe, but this was good. If there is more, I will read it!
Reviewer: Archange SignedJarod wants something more.
I echo everyone else with this... You are a genius. The one I come to read as other reviewers say the only one of substance. You know Miss Parker and all the characters on a personal way. You should be a Pretender writer. Thank you for keeping the fandom alive also by taking the time to read and review others.
Thanks for reading and reviewing, Archange. I feel horrible about leaving reviews un-responded to ( I've only just now seen these reviews).
Reviewer: Archange SignedThe Return series.
Incredible. I could read your stories always and maybe you'll write more and more. This is a great start and serie! I love it so far.
Thanks for reading and reviewing, Archange. I'll write more- although, I'm not sure that's a good thing.
Reviewer: Archange SignedJarod's married? That took me a moment to get over and I have to say I'm not happy about it but the characters are in character and I love the plot. I want more.
You'll get more.
Reviewer: Archange SignedHannibal Lector. I love that..Keep the chapters coming please.
Thanks. Glad you like it.
Reviewer: Archange SignedPart two of The Return series.
Please never stop writing... I love this serie and want more.
Thank you, Archange, for reading and reviewing. More is in the works.
Reviewer: Archange SignedJust like watching the show. Thank you for sharing with us.
Thanks again for reading and reviewing.
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