Penname: Eveylin [Contact]

Real name: Ellie

Member Since: 09/04/05

Membership status: Member

Bio:

This account archives my old Pretender fic from many, many years ago. The quality is somewhat low and the pretentiousness is ridiculously high. I think I missed the point of fandom, which has always been to have fun. I’m leaving these up for posterity but cannot speak to any sort of recommendation in regards to reading them.



Beta-reader: Yes
Affiliation: Pretender

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Remnants by Eveylin
Rated: PG [Reviews - 2]
Summary: Hope.

Categories: Hope
Characters: Jarod, Miss Parker
Classifications: Genres: Romance, Tragedy
Warnings: None
Challenges: Drabble #03 Hope

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 102
Read Count: 1667
[Report This] Published: 19/04/05 Updated: 19/04/05


Title: Chapter 1: Remnants.

Thank you so much for all your reviews :) My inbox is going nuts and it's greatly cheering first thing in the morning. I'll try to go through and respond to as many as I can after I get back, but I just wanted to let you know they're appreciated.

Reviewer: Blade Mistress Signed
Date: 16/09/07
Wrecked by AngelWings
Rated: PG 13 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 19]
Summary: Miss Parker and her team find Jarod, but get more than they bargained for.

Categories: Indefinite Timeline
Characters: Broots, Jarod, Miss Parker, Sydney
Classifications: Genres: Action/Adventure
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed:No
Word count: 11520
Read Count: 17439
[Report This] Published: 20/05/05 Updated: 07/06/05


Title: Chapter 1: Plane Crazy

Very nice. I was amused at poor Broots having Jarod land on him. Poor guy really doesn't want anything to do with the capture, he just wants his gadgets. I liked Jarod's 'yeah, right' at the 'Stop Jarod!' comments because that always amused me in the series. Yeah like he's going to stop just because you say. I look forward to seeing some more, and welcome back :)

Reviewer: Blade Mistress Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 20/05/05
Title: Chapter 1: Plane Crazy

Ooh. Getting interesting. Great work, keep the chapters coming :)

Reviewer: Blade Mistress Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: 21/05/05
Fine Again by chopsticks
Rated: PG starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2]
Summary: On her.

Categories: Character Musing
Characters: Telling Would Spoil
Classifications: Genres: Character Musing
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 633
Read Count: 1941
[Report This] Published: 23/05/05 Updated: 23/05/05


Title: Chapter 1: Fine Again

(Sorry I missed this on ff.net, but my adversion to that site is bordering on silly.)

I really enjoyed this. At first I thought it was Jarod sort of thinking about his affect on Miss Parker, but then as the piece continued I decided it was Sydney. Which makes it even more interesting because he's really an outsider to their dynamic so can see the effects on both of them, that they can't see in themselves.

I enjoyed the metaphor about her armour, so much is referenced to that in the show that I always enjoy when someone carries it through to a fanfic. I'm not entirely sure about her inspirative quote, it sort of reminds me of the "hang in there kitty" poster. I like the idea, but my own head is saying something of the "any man who falls behind can be trodden on as you rise above" sort of quote.

I skipped the song; I always do.

I really loved the end quote She walks into work Monday like nothing's wrong. She does this because nothing is wrong.

She's fine again.

It speaks so much for her character. She likes to think that nothing is getting to her as it chip-chip-chips away at her.

Very lovely. I enjoyed reading it and welcome to the site ^^ (Oh, and I hope this was critical enough and not too bow-down-before-you ^_~)

~ Blade

Reviewer: Blade Mistress Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23/05/05
Confused Yet? by Dede
Rated: PG starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 4]
Summary: Picks up right after the bombing at the end of season four.

Categories: Post Season 4
Characters: Broots, Ethan, Jarod, Lyle, Miss Parker, Mr Parker, Mr Raines, Original Character, Sam, Sydney
Classifications: Genres: Angst, Vignette
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 3408
Read Count: 2240
[Report This] Published: 25/06/05 Updated: 25/06/05


Title: Chapter 1: Confused Yet?

I remember this from the old archive. One of my favourites, especially the Emily and Lyle.

So happy to see it around again ^^

Reviewer: Blade Mistress Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26/06/05
Family by chopsticks
Rated: G starstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 1]
Summary: They smile at a memory of the past that has become the present. He smiles back.

Categories: Anything/Miscellaneous
Characters: Jarod's Family
Classifications: Genres: Angst, Drama
Warnings: None
Challenges: Drabble #04 Anything

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 191
Read Count: 1811
[Report This] Published: 30/06/05 Updated: 30/06/05


Title: Chapter 1: Family

I'm really not sure if I was suppose to, but I got a weird vibe from this. Charles and Margaret are so desperate and they seem to look at the boy with such hunger. Poor kid, as much as Jarod protests 'you're you' he's still going to be young-Jarod to them.

Very interesting.

Reviewer: Blade Mistress Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01/07/05
Omissis by carha
Rated: PG 13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2]
Summary: When she met someone, she did not think that she had. (Miss Parker/Brigitte)

Categories: Prequel
Characters: Brigitte, Miss Parker
Classifications: Genres: Drama, Romance
Warnings: Warning: Slash

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 1942
Read Count: 1883
[Report This] Published: 12/09/05 Updated: 12/09/05


Title: Chapter 1: Omissis

Well done. I had no idea that that pairing could ever work but you pull it off well. I enjoyed your take on younger Miss Parker and the gun. Their relationship was very well done and realistic. The part with the apartment was great. There are a few minor errors I could point out if you'd like, but other than that a great read ^^

Reviewer: Blade Mistress Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15/09/05
Summary: Locked in a freezer together, Sam the Centre sweeper and Monk (the obsessive compulsive detective from the USA show MONK) get to know each other while waiting to be freed.

Categories: Challenges, Crossovers
Characters: Miss Parker, Sam
Classifications: Genres: Drama
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 2668
Read Count: 1617
[Report This] Published: 19/09/06 Updated: 19/09/06


Title: Chapter 1: Mr. Monk meets Sam the Centre Sweeper

Hehe, yay Monk. And I'm glad that though you used Monk you didn't go to the dirty place. I'm not sure my brain could have taken it ;) I like Sam. How can someone who says so little be so cool?


Author's Response: Thanks Blade. Putting Monk and Sam together seemed the best way to do a cross over and not have it be confusing.

Reviewer: Blade Mistress Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19/09/06
A Choice by Manoline
Rated: PG starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 7]
Summary: We all wish for freedom, the question is how far are we willing to go to get it?

Categories: Poetry
Characters: Jarod, Miss Parker
Classifications: Genres: Angst, Tragedy
Warnings: Warning: Character Death

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 198
Read Count: 3161
[Report This] Published: 24/11/06 Updated: 24/11/06


Title: Chapter 1: A choice

I really love this. Dark, but not unbelievable, and I especially love "The voices chant "Murder!" while he dreams of the light". Very lyrical and beautiful. And btw, it already didn't suck when I got it ;)


Author's Response: Hehe, thank you ;)

Reviewer: Blade Mistress Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30/11/06
Dioscuri by icd
Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2]
Summary: Was it gifted? Special?

Categories: Indefinite Timeline
Characters: Telling Would Spoil
Classifications: Genres: Drama, General
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 1357
Read Count: 532
[Report This] Published: 25/11/06 Updated: 25/11/06


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Damn you, that child really intrigues me. It really is a sign you've been on the 'net too long when you sense incest twists from first pargraphs, isn't it? Ah well, I really like this. :) Write more *hint*. Well, not really a hint is it? Just a statement. Write more. The child will get older and Jarod would want to meet it...


Author's Response: hee hee. yep, it's an intriguing kid... glad you like

Reviewer: Blade Mistress Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30/11/06
A test story by jacs
Rated: PG starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 151]
Summary: jsut testing to see if it works...

Categories: Poetry
Characters: All the characters
Classifications: Genres: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed:No
Word count: 364
Read Count: 147389
[Report This] Published: 19/01/07 Updated: 03/07/08


Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

God, it's so simple, yet evocative. "Hey, hey", but of course. It speaks of childish innocence, golden age of comedy and the ease of which Jarod greats those - and becomes part of their lives - that he saves. 

 I'm moved. Thank you. 



Author's Response: I am so very pleased you like it and i will endevour to keep the emotional intensity in the forthcoming chapters.

Reviewer: Blade Mistress Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21/01/07
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

God, it's like you're right inside the character's head. You should write the third movie! And the 13th too! And every second one in between! Is it Jarod? I think it's probably Jarod, due to the difficulties he must have being a pretender, and constantly sucking at finding his family and being a genius. 

 *sobs* It's just... so good. Please, do continue. Else I shall cut my wrists. Well, not my wrists. But definitally the wrists of someone close to me who next falls asleep. 

Best tP fic ever! 



Author's Response: Please no cutting of the wrists!!! I will tone it done in the next chap, not so much intensity. I do not wish to hurt or harm my readers, or cause them to harm others.

Reviewer: Blade Mistress Signed
Date: 30/01/07
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

The suspense! It's Killing ME! And Making Me Use Random CaPITALS! 

 Symbol is symbolism, isn't it? I knew it. I totally knew it. Only I and a few others *get* the depth of this story. This is just so good. 



Author's Response: I am SO glad you saw the symbolism in my use of symbol, i was scared i might have been a little too obscure.

the #&%$ popping up in random spots is giving me some grief. Damn the symbols I say!

Reviewer: Blade Mistress Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04/02/07
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

This is the sex chapter isn't it? Wow, so hot. And blue. Hot and blue = the best ever. 

 

Plz continue omg.  



Author's Response: If i clearly mark it as complete, then will that just encourage you to want me to continue even more???

I think we can expect much more continuing coming up... i hope

Reviewer: Blade Mistress Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04/02/07
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

*standing ovation*


Author's Response: Bows to ovation \"blackheart.png\"

Reviewer: Blade Mistress Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25/03/07
Title: Chapter 8: Big Changes

Broots is with you always. He's like Jesus, in a way. And also like the Flying Spagetti monster. <3 Broots. Go, Broots. Did you know that Broots and Miss Parker, and also Sydney, were so doing it? OT3, I'm telling you. I'm so glad that finally someone else realises it. Keeeep gooooing. 

Author's Response:

LMAO

 

Reviewer: Blade Mistress Signed
Date: 25/03/07
Title: Chapter 10: ARRRRGGGGGGHHHHH!!!!

I have no idea what that is, but I think you should kill it with fire. Precious, beautiful fire. Burns so pretty. So, so pretty. Mwahahaha.

 

I mean, awesome. So good. Amazing. Best thing I've ever read, and I'm currently reading Shakespears's sonnets (gayer than you think, more boring than you imagine, and dull. Not at all like this!) 



Author's Response: I am flattered that I am not as gay as the Shakespearean Sonnets, but am concerned about you pyro tendencies. Perhaps some couch time with Syd is in order.

Reviewer: Blade Mistress Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25/03/07
Title: Chapter 11: Calm after the storm

Broots can fix any server issue. If he couldn't, the Centre would have killed his dog. And then him. "What do you mean the wireless isn't up yet!" 

Author's Response:

I am not entirely sure Broots has a dog, so it would be an empty threat.

That is the reason why he is my puff daddy, cos he can fix my broken things. 

Reviewer: Blade Mistress Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25/03/07
Title: Chapter 12: special guest

nice/angry/insulting/beautiful/moving/bitchy/awesome review things happen here. 

Author's Response:

and respond things happen here

 can you let me know if you get an email re this repsonse pls either by shouting out, adding comment to the news item or via a new reveiw?? thanks 

Reviewer: Blade Mistress Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25/03/07
Title: Chapter 13: Broots, you are soooo talented!

*flames*

 

Puff Daddy is evil, and horrible, and a *rapper*.

Oh, you mean Broots. Carry on then. I fully support this endever. and no, I will not spell that word correctly. You dictionary-facsists! Or that one! Ha! 



Author's Response:

Be careful what you say about my beloved there Blade. Even Eleventh Hour won't save you from my wrath!!!!

 

ps if you get an email re this, can you let me know, i think i have fixed the email problems, ta 

Reviewer: Blade Mistress Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25/03/07
Summary: In memory of Steven, a valued Missing Pieces member that was taken from us far too early in life.

Categories: Misc
Characters: None
Classifications: Genres: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 31
Read Count: 6570
[Report This] Published: 16/04/07 Updated: 16/04/07


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I'm so sorry for your loss. My condolences.

Reviewer: Blade Mistress Signed
Date: 18/04/07