23 year old fan of the best show EVER!
PretenderTwincest. With a twist!
Mirage I do hope you will continue this. It was very good and can't believe I didn't read it before. You really have a grasp of these my favorite characters and their feelings, body language and features and I think Parker and Jarod as siblings has never been done. Congratulations!
Thanks, Christoph, I do want to continue. I just don't when. Thanks so much.
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Come on, please! It's been two years and I want to see how they manage this.
Reviewer: Christoph SignedNothing is ever as it seems... Jarod goes for under cover mission that will turn his life upside down... old friends, lost love and powerful enemies await... Set post IOTH.
Jarod finally tells Rachel the truth.
This is really good. Jarod always kept secrets and I know it's because he didn't love Rachel. Would be a sweet squel to see her try to help him. Thanks.
Reviewer: Christoph Signed He's waiting.
I haven't reviewed in a while but I'm still reading fics and lurking. This is a beautiful chapter. Please thank your muse for all of us.
Thanks, Christoph, I'm so glad you enjoyed it, and yes, I'll pass that on to Lady Muse.
Reviewer: Christoph SignedI love it. This is too short, but you did it and I love it. You gave them the happy ending they deserve or at least a happy beginning. More, please?
Thank you so much, Christoph. This story is complete, thank heavens, but there are many other stories here. Thanks again.
Reviewer: Christoph Signed Parker corners Jarod. Or does she?
It's really brilliant work, you have a talent for writing, and have a strong grasp of the characters. I'm fasinated by this plot line and can't wait to see what Lady Muse has in store for Parker who is at Jarod's mercy at last! Please update this one and your fics too!
Thanks, Christoph. Eek. Parker at Jarod's mercy. Oh, my, what have I done? I'll update (and even finish) them all as soon as I possibly can.
Reviewer: Christoph SignedChapter two was awesome to! Can't go wrong with sex when you write it so well...d we don't mind how dirty it gets. You just gotta have faith in yourself. Please update soon.
Reviewer: Christoph SignedOH MY GOD. I thought I'd reviewed this but I don't see it. Mirage, this was incredible. YOu have got to let him be her first you know back door like JarodandParkerForever said in her review, you know what and you know where down there. Seriously Jarod and Parker have never had that kind of sex, you know, down there. Oh My God. It's not that kinky and it's very normal. DO IT. Please!
Thanks for reading and reviewing, Christoph. Haha, yes I know what you mean, anal sex and um, I don't know about anal sex. I've read about it once (stealing lines from Jarod now). I know it's not kinky, I've read papers but I just- I really don't know. I think the muse has something else in mind. I could write you something and email it to you but you'd have to promise to never ever say it came from me. I'm such a coward.
Reviewer: Christoph Signed Dont ever stop writing. This is amazing and I want more!
Reviewer: Christoph Signed Jarod has an epiphany. (payback doesn't have to be a bitch)
I love it. A very accurate Jarod and Miss Parker...your writing always makes it so believable .... and that's not always good lol. This is whati hope will happen. You write beautifully.
Reviewer: Christoph Signed When Jarod and his clone are presumed dead and further cloning attempts prove futile, Raines is determined to find another way. He finds it in Dry River, Arizona.
I love it! Amazingly well written and original as always. Please update this soon. And update the s & m fic as too.
Thanks, Christoph, for reading and reviewing.
Reviewer: Christoph Signed Love it! As always, your writing style is terrific and the characters are perfect, they are just the way they are on the show. Thank you for continuing to share your talent with us. And that note...does that mean they are going to have sex? Please say yes! You write stellar sex scenes that are what I always imagined it would be like for Jarod and her to have sex...excluding the scary non-consent scenes in forces of nature and circles of hell. Update soon!
Thanks, Christoph. Um, sex? Oh, I don't know. Yet. "It's too soon to tell". Yes, probably. Ah, so you imagine him having sex? Haha. Right, we'll "pretend" those nonconsent stories do not exist. I will update soon.
Reviewer: Christoph Signed Wow! I wondered how Jarod would react to MP's flight of fancy..he did so by making a real flight of his own....all the way to Blue Cove. I'm guessing his flight won't be a flight of fancy tho? Kyle was perfect, you have a grasp of all the characters, their expressions, the Centre, the interrelationships..the whole bag. Kudos for the Dr. Isshii mention. He was worse than Mengela and doesn't get much mention. Raines is in the ranks with Ish. This is riveting as always. Welcome back and update soon please. :)
Hello, Christoph. Thanks for reading and reviewing. You are correct: When Jarod makes up his mind, he tends to follow through (eventually anyway); I can say with certainty that his bold move in this chapter is NOT a flight of fancy- oh, and I'm glad the chapter title wasn't lost on anyone (that I'm aware of anyway). Shirō Ishii was indeed one evil son of a bitch- good riddance! Thank you for the warm welcome and the kind words. You are too kind.
Reviewer: Christoph Signed I love it!!! Mirage the scene with the little girl was extremely powerful. It was surreal. You make it seem so real like it's something that really happened. That abuse part read more like a memoir than a story...it was so real! Jarod's reaction when he "started" at Parker's finger being thrust added emotion and tension that made me shiver and break out in chill bumps. Mirage Mirage! Thanks for updating!
Consider this an apology; I certainly didn't intend the chapter (or the series or anything I write, have written or have yet to write) to resemble childhood or actual events/people (I hate it when real life fodder spills into fiction)- that said, I see now that there are some similarities: I quoted the F.P.U. verbatim at one point during the scene that you mentioned. Moving on: I hope those were good chill bumps and I suppose I'm pleased if anything I write can evoke any sort of reaction/emotion. Thank you, Christoph, for reading and reviewing.
Reviewer: Christoph Signed Don't forget to update this one please. Excellent writing here too.
Thanks for reading and reviewing, Christoph.
Reviewer: Christoph Signed I thought you had forgotten this. I'm so glad you haven't. Very visual and beautiful but not too description. Miss Parker is always mean to Jarod when someone she loves dies. Extremely well written as always Mirage. Thanks for sharing your genius with us.
No, I haven't forgotten this. I'm glad you're liking it. Thanks for reading and reviewing, Christoph.
Reviewer: Christoph SignedI love the fitting title and songs used. throbbing toothache of the mind' and I think it is 'dark inside' Kyle and Miss Parker. Inside Jarod too you think so don't you?!! It is wonderful. I love the body shots but I wish Miss Parker wouldn't have sex with Kyle and I wish Jarod wouldn't have sex with Rachel. :( Your writing is great as alway. :)
"Throbbing toothache of the mind"- I've been touched with that emotion haha. I think you're right. In fact, I think everyone possesses a measure of darkness at some point. The Pretender characters all have a bit of darkness. I believe the darkness is Jarod's playground- I must confess: I love a few of the takedown scenes; I've found myself longing, however, for Jarod to finish the monsters off. Ah, a woman can dream. I was rather proud of him for killing Damon. Now, now. Jarod was having sex with Rachel (and Nia and Zoe) well before I began writing fanfic, and Miss Parker had sex with Michael and Thomas (Jarod's getting more action than our divine lady of ice? Making up for lost time, I suppose.). Miss Parker and Jarod never had sex (with each other) during the series, so please understand why I'm always reluctant to take them there. Don't worry: the Muse is already planning to take them there (no matter how I protest). Haha. Thanks for reading and reviewing, Christoph.
Reviewer: Christoph Signed Thank you for this needed update to escape life, and for the heartfelt words. There are no words. and you know that...you've had loss before I can tell. Stay sweet and please update this beautiful story soon.
Thank you for reading and reviewing, Christoph. I will update soon.
Reviewer: Christoph Signed Wow. Excellent update Mirage. You know these characters and have command of them and command of the language. You write with clarity and coherence. Your talent and genius is so striking and is unparalleled. I love this direction and I've enjoyed each chapter, each building up to what I know will be an amazing climax. I don't think anyone grasps the complexities of Jarod and Miss Parker and all of the characters like you. It was a pleasure Mirage. Welcome back.
Thanks for reading and reviewing, Christoph. You're awfully sweet. Don't get your hopes up please. Thanks for the warm welcome back.
Reviewer: Christoph Signed LOVE your writing. You're a brilliant storyteller and author. The way you write...seriously Mirage you blow me away and I'm an avid reader so that means something. Trust me. You're a fine author. This is the Miss Parker I know and love dearly.. "don't ever pretend with me" Yeah, that's her. Totally. But she knows he's not pretending. She knows he hurt her deeply with the truth in the past and never pretended with her. He's revealed all of his emotions to her. She slapped him because she can't deal with the truth. She's probably afraid of her own feelings. I think she when she hit him and kissed him in the lodge after he came back it means she has feelings for him too and if she grieved him...either way I think it hurt that he went away without saying why or goodbye. I love the double and possibly triple ...and maybe more meanings in the chapter title. Gone. She is gone from him in this and his trust in Rachel is gone and those little girls are still gone. I think the FBI wants them dead. Please don't let them die. You write these characters amazingly well, better than the novels and you story is in line with the story from the tv series which is what I want. Always mature dialog and it all makes sense. Your original characters are a wonderful addition. I still love Olivia from Nemesis and Zina from Darkness Falling. I want to know more about Dante. Love that she called him Dollfuss lol not a well known dictator anymore. A very in character Miss Parker and Jarod. You know them better than anyone. Just more please. Keep going and going.
Reviewer: Christoph Signed Yay! Ooh oohhh Mirage Mirage. That was amazing. You surpass your own writing and that can't be easy. I loved this chapter! Magdalena was wonderful. I'd love to chat with her for hours.
Jarod to Miss Parker- 'you can't ignore me forever' and seeing her reaction ,'that wasn't a challenge' lol. Brilliant. I love you!
Reviewer: Christoph Signed LOVE. So cool how Jarod is rolling it over and over and confusing the waitress who could have brought a salad using ingredients from other dishes. OmG. That was so funny. But there were serious parts as well. Nicely balanced. Just when I think I can't be more amazed with Mirage Mirage goes and pulls out all the stops. I love your writing. Thank you for sharing with us.
Reviewer: Christoph Signed Thank you. Saved me from those American politics. My God what a mess the world is in now...and it aint great.
I enjoy immensely how you evolve the characters in each or your stories. It's always different, always plausible, always worth investigating. Your insight is intriguing and amazing. The characters are always in character when you write them. I can't wait to see where you take us now. I'm buckled in. The way you began this chapter one way and then we find out it's not reality at all IS phenomenal. Thank you for sharing your genius with us.
Reviewer: Christoph Signed Oh thank YOU! Please don't stop. I mean like ever. Just keep all the stories going you know. Forever. LOVE Your stories.
Well, I have to stop eventually. Ha. Thanks, Christoph, for reading and reviewing.
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