Penname: Christoph [Contact]

Real name: Lorelei

Member Since: 26/04/11

Membership status: Member

Bio:

23 year old fan of the best show EVER!



Affiliation: Pretender

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Reviews by Christoph


'Til We Meet Again by 24
Rated: PG starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 5]
Summary: Jarod and Miss Parker share a dream.



Categories: Indefinite Timeline
Characters: Jarod, Miss Parker
Classifications: Genres: Comedy, Vignette
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 938
Read Count: 3227
[Report This] Published: 18/05/05 Updated: 25/04/07


Title: Chapter 1: 'Til We Meet Again

Good job. I thought it was well written and sweet.

Reviewer: Christoph Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19/01/14
Class Reunion by Nicky
Rated: PG starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 7]
Summary: Miss Parker meets up with a couple of old friends and they help her find her heart again.



Categories: Indefinite Timeline
Characters: Jarod, Miss Parker, Original Character
Classifications: Genres: Angst, Romance
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 6356
Read Count: 2073
[Report This] Published: 20/05/05 Updated: 20/05/05


Title: Chapter 1: Class Reunion

That was really swseet. I like the story very much.

Reviewer: Christoph Signed
Date: 22/09/12
Summary: Angelo was robbed of most everything in his life, except for the thing that matters the most.

Categories: Photos
Characters: Angelo
Classifications: Genres: Drama
Warnings: None
Challenges: Drabble #41 Photos

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 356
Read Count: 1453
[Report This] Published: 21/05/05 Updated: 21/05/05


Title: Chapter 1: Can't Rob Me of Myself

This is so sad. I like it very much.

Reviewer: Christoph Signed
Date: 22/09/12
Commercial by 24
Rated: G starstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 2]
Summary: I was watching a commercial and decided to put Jarod and Miss Parker in it.

Categories: Indefinite Timeline
Characters: Jarod, Miss Parker
Classifications: Genres: Comedy, Vignette
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 251
Read Count: 1042
[Report This] Published: 22/05/05 Updated: 22/05/05


Title: Chapter 1: Commercial

That was really good. I like your stories.

Reviewer: Christoph Signed
Date: 22/09/12
Chances by Ash
Rated: PG starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2]
Summary: Jarod's thoughts before a final capture

Categories: Indefinite Timeline
Characters: Jarod, Miss Parker
Classifications: Genres: Drama, General
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 509
Read Count: 1284
[Report This] Published: 20/06/05 Updated: 20/06/05


Title: Chapter 1: Chances

I really love this story! It's something Jarod would have done for Miss Parker in the serie if he felt any kind of love at all for her. They were always JUST friends until the Isle. It should have been this way!

Reviewer: Christoph Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11/10/12
The Paths We Take by Amanda Haun
Rated: PG 13 starstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 3]
Summary: jarod saves ms parker,takes her from the centre to her mothers family

Categories: Indefinite Timeline
Characters: Jarod, Miss Parker, Mr Parker, Mr Raines, Original Character, Sydney
Classifications: Genres: Action/Adventure
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:No
Word count: 2214
Read Count: 1559
[Report This] Published: 12/08/05 Updated: 12/08/05


Title: Chapter 1: Part 1

This is really good. No update? Please keep going.

Reviewer: Christoph Signed
Date: 22/09/12
Summary: When Miss Parker opens up to an old friend....strange wonders accure. (wink wink, nudge nudge:)

Categories: Season 3
Characters: Angelo, Jarod, Miss Parker, Original Character, Sydney
Classifications: Genres: General, Romance
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:No
Word count: 1156
Read Count: 1384
[Report This] Published: 24/11/05 Updated: 24/11/05


Title: Chapter 1: Part 1

This was really great. I like the plot and interactions. I would be interested in reading more.

Reviewer: Christoph Signed
Date: 22/09/12
Happiness by 24
Rated: PG 13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3]
Summary: Miss Parker leaves with Thomas.


Categories: Alternate Universe
Characters: Miss Parker, Thomas
Classifications: Genres: General
Warnings: None

Series: Leaving Blue Cove
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 854
Read Count: 2835
[Report This] Published: 08/04/07 Updated: 08/04/07


Title: Chapter 1: True Happiness

Oh I love it. I like how you have them doing normal things and ...being in love and togehter.

Reviewer: Christoph Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19/04/20
Title: Chapter 2: True Happiness

I think the second is the same as first? I love it. Jarod is so sweet to help her.

Reviewer: Christoph Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19/04/20
Worst Nightmare by 24
Rated: PG starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3]
Summary: Jarod gets caught. What will happen?


Categories: Alternate Universe
Characters: Angelo, Broots, Debbie, Jarod, Sydney
Classifications: Genres: General
Warnings: None

Series: Leaving Blue Cove
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 706
Read Count: 3731
[Report This] Published: 08/04/07 Updated: 08/04/07


Title: Chapter 1: Caught

Such short amazing chapters. I do hope Jarod will be ok.

Reviewer: Christoph Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19/04/20
Title: Chapter 2: Almost Over

The quote sounded perfect to me. You got it right.

Reviewer: Christoph Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19/04/20
Memo by 24
Rated: G starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2]
Summary: A Centre Memo.

Categories: Alternate Universe
Characters: Angelo, Broots, Debbie, Jarod, Sydney
Classifications: Genres: General
Warnings: None

Series: Leaving Blue Cove
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 378
Read Count: 1542
[Report This] Published: 08/04/07 Updated: 08/04/07


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oh! I'm so glad there is another part to this. The suspence is so hard.

Reviewer: Christoph Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19/04/20
Meeting Place by 24
Rated: G starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 7]
Summary: Everyone arrives at the meeting place.


Categories: Alternate Universe
Characters: Angelo, Broots, Debbie, Jarod, Miss Parker, Sydney, Thomas
Classifications: Genres: General
Warnings: None

Series: Leaving Blue Cove
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 1887
Read Count: 6575
[Report This] Published: 08/04/07 Updated: 08/04/07


Title: Chapter 1: Miss Parker, Thomas, Sydney, Broots and Debbie at the Meeting Place

I like how it isn't awkward at all for them to all be together. It's really good.

Reviewer: Christoph Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19/04/20
Title: Chapter 2: Jarod arrives

Wow that took a turn with Jarod's arrival. ;)

Reviewer: Christoph Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19/04/20
Title: Chapter 3: Morning comes

Aw so many shippery feels here. Melanie. Jarod Jarod Jarod.

Reviewer: Christoph Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19/04/20
Title: Chapter 4: What happened

This takes me right back, this same old conundrum, their circumstances. I really enjoy this.

Reviewer: Christoph Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19/04/20
Title: Chapter 5: Caught listening

Uh.... they got some explaining to do.

Reviewer: Christoph Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19/04/20
Title: Chapter 6: End Of The Centre and Happy Ending

An abrupt end but a happy end and I'm happy about that. Thank you for sharing these stories with us..

Reviewer: Christoph Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19/04/20
Summary:

Retribution goes awry when Jarod inadvertently kills a man. (Story in English)



Categories: Post IOTH
Characters: Broots, Cox, Jarod, Lyle, Miss Parker, Original Character, Other Non-Centre Related Character, Sam, Sydney
Classifications: Genres: Angst, General
Warnings: Warning: Character Death, Warning: Language, Warning: Non Consensual Sexual Content, Warning: Slash, Warning: Violence

Series: None
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 52749
Read Count: 12881
[Report This] Published: 30/06/11 Updated: 08/12/17


Title: Chapter 1: jacta alea est! (The Die Is Cast)

Thank you! Jarod is free for now and I hope he will stay so. I love how real everything is and the characters are as I remember them too! This was so action packed I almost fell off the edge of my seat!! Oooh Mirage! It's like being home to read you. What a way for Cox to die and that was bitching the way Jarod killed with his bare hands! He's going to be so sorrry later isn't he? He doesn't know that Luc died. Ohhh. So sad. Please post more.

Reviewer: Christoph Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26/06/15
Title: Chapter 1: jacta alea est! (The Die Is Cast)

Ooh. ooh! Mirage! OmG! This is horrific and wow... one of yours I never read but now I feel I must. I feel sorry for Jarod but I think he did right thing. He didn't mean to do the right thing but jail wouldn't have held the guy long anyway. That so scene with the gators is...felt like I couldn't breathe. I've read this six times over and over and over. You are good girl.

Reviewer: Christoph Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07/03/15
Title: Chapter 2: Fallaces Sunt Rerum Species (The Appearances of Things are Deceptive)

This was just like a script...I've done script reading and it was just like the series cutting in and out wwith key scenes. I love this chapter, how Miss Parker really searches the room and feels beneath things. The dialogue in this blows me away. There are no leaps of logic pulled out of the air. The characters explain what they doing, and how. THey explain why, and from there, we see how they move forward with reasonable explanations. Thank you for that!

Reviewer: Christoph Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07/03/15
Title: Chapter 3: Acta exteriora indicant interiora secreta (External actions show internal secrets)

What an amazingly well written and hauntingly  beautiful scene this was. My fav is 'Several panes of glass were missing from windows and the architecturally unsound structure was blanketed with spider webs- quite a few eight legged occupants were moving about freely, spinning silk as they placed bets as to where the errant moths circling the bare light bulb above the door might fall. Hunters. They were hunters.'

OMG. Who even bothers to paint that kind of beauty anymore and it transitions into Sydney being a hunter leading in to Jarod. Stunning work. The tears becomign laughter....Jarod's about to snap and you give us a clear painting of that. No one  illustrates their words like you can. It's really amazing. I'm in awe.

Reviewer: Christoph Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07/03/15
Title: Chapter 4: Amor et melle et felle est fecundissmismus (Love is rich with both honey and venom)

OH God! Why does she have to be so persistant. But she is and that's what we loved about her on the series and she's been in trouble before for defying Jarod. But it's her Jarod to find him. And she doesn't take orders from him. The part where he says "I have the gun" and then suddenly realizes he has two guns "two guns" ....he's really nuts.

Reviewer: Christoph Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07/03/15
Title: Chapter 5: actus non facit reum nisi mens sit rea (an act does not make a man guilty unless his mind be also guilty)

My Latin is rusty. I'm glad you didn't write the whole thing in Latin. That's my only complaint...and that the chapters are so short. Ohhh MIss Parker. "What about what I need. Have you ever stopped to consider that?" What's telling is they both have this internal dialogue going on that is putting them down andit's like they are each other's inner voice or something...a darker voice. It's wild. I never thought that Raines woud want to insure his actions and had Jarod do a simulation about Catherine's death but that makes sense. Rainesis a coward and he wouldn't want any blacklash. These two. You write them so well and you talk about spiders and their webs but you weave the ultimate webs you spider you. I'm glad she didn't take the pretender too far. Wonderful work Mirage.

Reviewer: Christoph Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07/03/15
Title: Chapter 6: Persona Non Grata (An Unwelcome Person)

I knew that Lyle woudl be persona non grata....and maybe Cox too. Twice as much terror lol. This exam was so dauting and just so...medically accurate but we know that it's as much about taking control from Jarod too. I shiver at this Mirage. Cox. You got them all down, all the characters to a big T, you know them all so welll. It's like watching the series when I read you. Seeing Cox...he always scared me and it's really scary. Love that FYI at the end. We know you don't condone it. I feel so much for Jarod now and I always did but ...ohhh Mirage. You are so talented!

Reviewer: Christoph Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07/03/15