Hi Faith the reviewer, I think the author meant Jarod and Miss Parker were playing rough or something. You know how it would be with those two. Power struggle from hell. Great story by the way. I just read it again.

This would be a great time for the ice bucket challenge lol. It's gone and gotten hot in here all of a sudden lol. Aww God! Jarod pressed the palm of his hand to hers. Oh Mirage. Your Muse is an Angel and obviously is a MPJ shipper even though you aren't. Or are you still not a MPJ shipper? Maybe you changed sides... OH yeah there IT is. Sex. We always ask for sex. Thanks for bringing it!

-bows- OH God that was perfect! The sky and setting, the plotting, dialog, that amazing ending. Mirage you are a genius.

'He replied and then brought the Scout to a stop alongside a private airstrip. “Does this mean we have a deal, Miss Parker?” Jarod asked with a raised brow just as brilliant hues of peach and gold crept up along the dark horizon.

She looked at him then, the promise of a beautiful new day flickering in her eyes.

And he had to catch his breath when she smiled.

"Jarod." She said. “You have yourself a deal."

GENIUS! Thank you for all of your beautiful words!

WOW. I read this three times..I am blown away by your writing and by what you've written..and by how IN character they are, how fleshed out and real this is. I love her warning in the end, she gets his ass and only then does he get hers lol..mirage that is awesome but her ownership of him is amazing. Oh man, I need a cold shower. More, please?

This was perfect! Never have our TP characters been more in character than when you bring them to life the way you and only you can do. I love their dialogue, it is so refreshing. Every story you write I say 'oh wow, that's the way it should be' lol. Please update soon and don't ever stop writing.

Oh, Mirage. So much goodness here. I have a watched tons of The Profiler and I can hear Rachel saying that about Miss Parker. Funguses living in shit and dark is like something Rachel would say. I love how you show Parker cares for Jarod even if she is angry with him. She's going to watch his back. I like that. He can be mean. You remind me of that and then I watch the show again and I'm like 'yep Mirage is right. Jarod CAN be an asshole' lmao. I hate hate hate that Jarod and Rachel are having sex and within Parker's listening range. That is cold. That is LIFE. So touching the way Parker connects with Tess and shares that one thing in common. Keep keeping it real. You do it perfectly. More soon please?

Hey there, do you have any plans to update this? Please?

Was feeling nostalgic for christmas and this always puts a smile on my face Mirage. Thank you.

See this is what I'm talking about! On top of the stellar writing, plotting, dialoge and fleshy decscriptive work you transition well, give us a sense of passing time and always end with a bang. You leave us hungry for more. That is cruel! I hope she will talk to Jarod about her fears. Please? I swear you yank me by the ears and don't let go until the period at the end.;) I love Cate's name and have fallen in love with that baby. Mirage it was a pleasure to read another  update.

Oh HOly cow! Mirage! Will you be participating in the writing going on at thepretenderlives websight? Steve and Craig's sight? You should! You could even write your own stories there! YOu should if you aren't. If you do let me know. I love how true to the characters you are, how I hear and see them and wow.. You are amazing. Keep up the amazing work.

I love your wit, your professionalism, and the fact that you write multiple epic works all at the same time. You must be pretender? A genius! You skillfully interweave entertainment, action humor, and a profound, original plot, with unpredictable turns and intrigue. Your sharp turns keep me on the edge of my seat. One other thing I love about a Mirage story is the well chosen dialogue! I can't believe that you are not writing the Pretender novels. You would be my first pick for what's it worth. Please continue..

Mirage Mirage Mirage oh my God this is amazing. I hope you'll continue. I want the details. How did she get in jail? how long did he leave her there before visiting. Was it really his fault she was arrested and locked away? OH GOD! Can she please get out? You write so it real that I feel that Miss Parker is actually in a jail somewhere and I feel so yucky! Nobody and I mean NOBODY writes the characters in canon the way you do and that's the way it's suppose to be. Thank you for staying true to the characters, to canon fandom and for sharing your talent with your fans. OH and please update who will guard the guards. So dark!

Didn't know you were a comedianne and a poet as well as the master craftsperson of prose, angst, smut, drama, dark, comedy, dark comedy, non cheesy romance and general prose! If I understand correctly, you were a vidder too? You are a PRETENDER aren't you? I hear they are among us. I hope you will grace us with more updates. Can't rate it anything but a 10.