That's too bad no one ever reviewed this one... it's a very good fanfic, and the last seen is very sweet... I've always thought Miss Parker was the best and Broots was second close! Very good one!

That's a really wonderful story! I'm checking every day for a new chapter! You write it so well and each character has its own important role to play! except for Jarod, who's a bit out of the plot but that's a new thing in a Pretender story so I'm glad to see something like that, and it's working very good!

We don't really know what to think about the father of the child... You insist a lot on the possibility of Major Charles being the father and he's acting so nice with Parker while Jarod is just really harsh on her (with what he thinks of her being with his family but personnally I think he just can't stand to be the one in the dark! He loves playing with Miss Parker's mind but he doesn't really like it when SHE plays with his mind!)

Love your story so far and I'm glad that Miss Parker is given such an important role (I'm definitely a Miss Parker Fan!!!) Also love Broots' reaction at discovering that Miss Parker talks in her sleep!  Please, Be quick for the next chapter!

Please, don't tell me that this last sentence means that he's telling goodbye in a way??? he can't just decide it's over just because they could posssibly, maybe, hurt each other?? What is he? Stupid? For a genius, Jarod sure did not act very clever!  hope to read soon another chapter from that so wonderful story!

My God!!! I really want to read more! This is so new, and different, I've never read a fanfic like this one (and I've read many!)Just amazing!!! I want more, and soon would be great! Keep going, it's just excellent, twisted but so good!

Author's Response:

Thanks. I expected to log on today and either read negative reviews or no new reviews at all. It is a twisted piece and very different than anything I ever expected to write.

Glad you like it. You will get more and very soon, I hope. Thanks again for reading!

Oh My God!! It keeps getting better and better and we keep wanting more and more!! Hope you'll post soon because I don't think I want to wait any longer!!!

Author's Response: Hi Faith! Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. I'm glad you think it's getting better and I'm thrilled that you want more. It gives me hope that maybe I'm doing something right. I just posted the next bit- You don't have to wait any longer. :-)

so wonderful! Loved their kiss, and the way Parker's opinion about the situation between them is slowly changing from blaming Jarod to blaming herself! that's exactly how I understand Miss Parker's mind (blaming herself for everything inside and showing a cold exterior meaning 'I don't care whose problem it is' to everyone)

I also love the way you depict the clone's character. Too many fanfictions describe him as very mature and all because of his genius when it is obvious in the show that genius or not, Jarod himself is NOT mature in so many ways!!!

You're really doing a great work with this fanfic and I hope we'll have the next chapter very soon cause it's getting harder and harder to wait patiently for the next chapter each time!!!!

I just need to ask and I have one more chapter? Great!!! If I ask for the next chapter now, will I have it tonight???

Seriously, this chapter was really interesting! Everytime we think we know where you're going, you change direction and surprise us! Great job!!!

By the way, I agree with Miss Shannon : no typos found!

keep writing! I really LOVE this fanfic!!!

My.... I loved it!!!! It's getting better and better, and so true to what we could have expected in the show... I love the way you depict everyone's feelings and reactions. It's just perfect! I hope you'll get inspired enough to keep writing many more chapters! Keep writing, that's one of the best stories on the Pretender I've read (and I've read plenty of them!!) keep writing, you're doing GREAT!!!

Author's Response:

Oh wow, this is incredibly overwhelming and very appreciated. I'm glad you like the depictions. These characters are so complex and I want to do them justice. Maybe it isn't too bad. I feel extremely inept but the encouragement helps, so thank you for that..

I will try to write more and hopefully, you'll like. Thanks again.

I loved this chapter (and all the other ones as a matter of fact!) Are we really close to an end? because it doesn't sound like a very happy ending... And at the same time, I sometimes have difficulty imagining a real happy ending for them... more like a black and white ending (meaning, both happy parts, and some unhappy others...) well, I hope we'll have the next chapter soon, cause it's a real pleasure to read such emotional chapters!!!

Author's Response:

Hi Faith! Thank you. I'm glad you liked this chapter (and the others!) You guys know how to make my week with these wonderful reviews. About that ending. Hmm, it's too soon to tell. I think it may end on sligthly bittersweet note but again, I don't know. The next chapter is in the works and wow, it's been a pleasure to read the reviews. Thanks so much for all of your support Faith!

WOW! very interesting... and so full of emotions! I loved it! it's getting harder and harder to wait for the next chapter... Your story is brilliant! You are a very talented writer...

Author's Response: Thank you Faith. I just popped in to proof (tons of typos) and was pleasantly surprised to find this. I'm glad you like! Thanks for the r and r- as always.

Amazing once again!!! I loved it! I love the fact that Jarod is confused as hell, and that he reacts in such a way to Parker being called 'his girl'...

And we've seen Parker, yippee! (wasn't sure at first whether she would be half-absent in this fic)

Hope for them to meet soon (even if Parker goes away after, just for the sake of having them snarl at each other!!!) Just keep writing and makes us happy : post a new chapter soon!!!

(just to clarify for Mr X : Green is the surname given to Sydney by the NBC which first aired the show, when they made a synopsis of the TV show... (they even gave Jarod a surname at first, telling that the fisrt one he uses, Russel, was the actual one) Anyway, the name Green was never actually used in the show... And you know the rule : you either have a first name or a surname!!! (except for Catherine Parker or Edna Raines, but they're dead after all....) Voilà!

I've just realised I haven't reviewed this piece of work so far, even if I'm still glued to your fanfiction (as always!)

Even if it is not my favourite (maybe because Miss Parker is so distressed that I feel like crying when reading her life....) it is a very different one. As always, you manage to write something so profound and twisted that it has never been done before! Jarod is so annoying in this one! I'm annoyed that he couldn't just push Parker away instead of hurting her (even if I understand how complicated their relationship is) and worse, that he came back!

I'm glad you're still on with your writing and you convinced me to post a fanfic too. Because we, pretender junkies, still need our pretender fix after all! Keep up with the great writing!

That's so nice of you! I am working on my fanfic (wouldn't want to disappoint you!) but I also have to manage real life (I'm pregnant again, which is good news but all my writing time has now turned into napping time!) I'll try my best to post in around a month or two , but I want to be sure where it goes before I post (I hate it when authors have great ideas, make you want to read more and never finish their stories!) But your encouragement is well appreciated and the 'push' I needed to find more writing time!