Characters: Jarod, Miss Parker
Classifications: Genres: General, Romance, Smut
Warnings: Warning: Sexual Content
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Word count: 5944
Read Count: 1966
I love a nice romantic story with a happy ending .. and a little smut for good measure!
Great job!Reviewer: jeanneb Signed
Good story so far ~ I hope you continue it.Reviewer: jeanneb Signed
Wonderful story and well written ~ you should write more Pretender stories.Reviewer: jeanneb Signed
Great story ~ please continue it.Reviewer: jeanneb Signed
Another great chapter ~ and great smut!
Author's Response: Well I do try!
I've enjoyed all your stories, this one would have fit right in with the tv series.Reviewer: jeanneb Signed
I'm loving this story ~ more please!
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing and glad you are enjoying the story. The next chapter is about half written (or 3/4, depending on if you are asking me or my muse). But, either way, should be posted sometime this week. Hopefully.
Jarod is suffering from Ennui and during a momentary lapse of concentration is caught by the Centre, who now have their sights set on reclaiming Gemini...
Believe me ~ none of your chapters suck! This is a great story. Can't wait for more.
Author's Response: :) Thank you so much for all of your encouragement jeanneb. Its always so nice to hear that a chapter is appreciated!
An empty lair sends the gang into unfamiliar territory. The hunters turn game, while Jarod fights for what he thought he'd always have; His mind.
Just caught up on this story ~ I can't believe how smoothly all you gals write together ~ it really shows your talent.
This story would make such a great pretender movie!
And I love how fast you update!!
Actually writing in a team is much easier than you might think. I mean, of course it has its challenges but there are many advantages as well. For instance, if you feel like you're writing yourself into a corner with no idea how to get out, one of your coauthors usually snaps you right out of it with a fresh batch of plot twists.
Thanks for a lovely review.
- ManolineReviewer: jeanneb Signed
I'm intrigued .. hope there will be more
thank you...I think ;-) erm, failure is not an option is a one off story, but I am currently working on Barely a whisper, which you might like too...
Reviewer: jeanneb Signed