Chapter 9: 9
Topanga suggested i read entropy and aftermath. she said to tell you that she forgot how well-written both these stories are. it certainly reminded her of why she considered you and kye to be "celebrities" in the world of tP fanfiction (not that ishe reads any other kind). but i will tell her these stories are too sad for me. i don't like jarod hurt. he's my friend.
i like flipper.
i think you did such an excellent job with keeping everyone in character and pushing it over the top to the dark side that it was extremely difficult to get through and i actually had to read it in pieces, it was so disturbing. y'know my species has a very simple life. we eat mostly. i might like the green stuff. i like sea grass.
when i started "aftermath," i had to first jump to the end to prepare myself so i'd know if it had a happy or at least hopeful ending. i'm sorry, but i cannot recommend it to my friends unless you write another chapter with a happy ending.
the tv show always had happy endings. we watched it from the boats, when we come up to breathe.
you do understand tv's can't go in the water? jarod said people are smart, not like him, but if they're so smart why do they hurt us with their propellors?
i am happy here at pretender centre and missing pieces. i will like it when topanga write a special page all about just us manatees. make her hurry up. and i will read fan fiction that has happy endings.
Reviewer: Topanga Signed