Penname: MP [Contact]

Real name: Brennan

Member Since: 26/07/07

Membership status: Member

Bio: I'm just a bored American teenager twenty-something who loves the Pretender.

Beta-reader: Yes
Affiliation: Pretender

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Onli Teh Bezt Story Evar by Sezzie
Rated: NC 18 starstarstar [Reviews - 3]
Summary: Once upon a time there was a happily ever after and an ending...

Categories:
Characters: None
Classifications: Genres: Romance, Action/Adventure, Drama, Tragedy, Comedy
Warnings: Warning: Sexual Content, Warning: Language

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:No
Word count: 6
Read Count: 642
[Report This] Published: 16/04/05 Updated: 16/04/05


Title: Chapter 1: !!!!11!wun

:) :) :) :) :) :) :) :)

The real question is:  wil their bee a sekwel?

 Reviewer: MP Signed
Date: 05/12/07
Power by Eveylin
Rated: PG [Reviews - 1]
Summary: You're doing great things // Power corrupts...

Categories: Confessions
Characters: Jarod
Classifications: Genres: Angst
Warnings: None
Challenges: Drabble #33 Confessions

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 109
Read Count: 2148
[Report This] Published: 19/04/05 Updated: 19/04/05


Title: Chapter 1: Power.

Wow.  Great little drabble!  Very sad, especially when you consider that it could have ended that way so easily.

 Reviewer: MP Signed
Date: 16/09/07
Remnants by Eveylin
Rated: PG [Reviews - 2]
Summary: Hope.

Categories: Hope
Characters: Jarod, Miss Parker
Classifications: Genres: Romance, Tragedy
Warnings: None
Challenges: Drabble #03 Hope

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 102
Read Count: 1876
[Report This] Published: 19/04/05 Updated: 19/04/05


Title: Chapter 1: Remnants.

Sad.  Perfect.  This is what drabbles should be.

 Reviewer: MP Signed
Date: 16/09/07
To Jacob by The Lurker
Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2]
Summary: It's Christmas Eve at Centre. Miss P may think she's Santa's elf, but finds out she isn't. It's a vignette, no plot here.

Categories: Season 3
Characters: Miss Parker, Sydney
Classifications: Genres: Drama, General
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 2509
Read Count: 317
[Report This] Published: 21/04/05 Updated: 21/04/05


Title: Chapter 1: Ch1

This is a beautiful story. (And truly in the spirit of the season.)

 Reviewer: MP Signed
Date: 11/09/07
The Substance of Things Hoped For by Adastra
Rated: PG 13 starstarstarstar [Reviews - 4]
Summary: While pretending to be a cab driver, Jarod tries to solve a murder. Unable to escape unresolved feelings about Kyle's death, he considers spiritual matters. While in pursuit, Miss Parker and Sydney deal with their own issues. Set between seasons 1 and 2.

Categories: During The Series
Characters: Jarod, Miss Parker, Sydney
Classifications: Genres: Angst, Drama, General, Suspence/Mystery
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 13483
Read Count: 2102
[Report This] Published: 10/05/05 Updated: 10/05/05


Title: Chapter 1:

I'm just slightly in awe of this story.  You took an episode that I always wanted to see but that was never made, and captured it and all the characters in it perfectly.  I know you've probably moved on to other things by now, but I'd love it if you'd write more.

 Reviewer: MP Signed
Date: 07/09/07
Missing Pieces by Eveylin
Rated: G [Reviews - 1]
Summary: Major Charles thinks about his life and his children.

Categories: Character Musing
Characters: Jarod, Jarod's Family
Classifications: Genres: Angst, General
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 763
Read Count: 1669
[Report This] Published: 12/05/05 Updated: 12/05/05


Title: Chapter 1: Missing Pieces

Great writing!  I love Major Charles's "voice."  It's angry and stressed and nostalgic and even a bit funny, in a dark, ironic way.  (wow, too many "and"s!)  You perfectly captured what a normal guy who found himself in the middle of all this Centre insanity would feel like. 

 Reviewer: MP Signed
Date: 16/09/07
Simple Facts by The Lurker
Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2]
Summary: Jarod plays a practical joke that Sydney does not find amusing.

Categories: Indefinite Timeline
Characters: Jarod, Miss Parker, Sydney
Classifications: Genres: General
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 2462
Read Count: 619
[Report This] Published: 12/05/05 Updated: 12/05/05


Title: Chapter 1: Simple Facts

This is the first piece I've read from you, and I've never seen such a spot-on Sydney.  I'm a big time Syd fan myself, so it's nice to see someone doing him justice.  You're a very talented writer.  Excuse me while I scamper off to read the rest of your work!

 Reviewer: MP Signed
Date: 17/08/07
Angel Tears by The Lurker
Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3]
Summary: Miss Parker deals with the latest turns her life at Centre have taken

Categories: Post Pretender 2001
Characters: Miss Parker
Classifications: Genres: Angst, General
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 2301
Read Count: 768
[Report This] Published: 12/05/05 Updated: 12/05/05


Title: Chapter 1: Angel Tears

Wow.  That.  Was.  Beautiful.

Not many people can pull off Parker in a moment of weakness.  You managed to make it symbolic and poetic while still being completely in character.  That's amazing.

 Reviewer: MP Signed
Date: 17/08/07
Empty Spaces by The Lurker
Rated: R [Reviews - 2]
Summary: Miss Parker discovers a truth or two about herself and one close to her. Major character death implied

Categories: Indefinite Timeline
Characters: Miss Parker, Sydney
Classifications: Genres: Angst, General
Warnings: Warning: Character Death

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 1413
Read Count: 678
[Report This] Published: 12/05/05 Updated: 12/05/05


Title: Chapter 1: Empty Spaces

Oh, that ending's cute.  I've read similar stories, but this one stands out in the emotion you portray.  It's so understated--no details, we're not even 100% sure who that was at the end--but it's powerful at the same time.  I like!

 Reviewer: MP Signed
Date: 17/08/07
The Silent Enemy by The Lurker
Rated: R starstarstarstar [Reviews - 4]
Summary: Miss Parker and Broots must race to save Sydney from a death trap.

Categories: Indefinite Timeline
Characters: Angelo, Broots, Jarod, Lyle, Miss Parker, Mr Parker, Mr Raines, Sydney
Classifications: Genres: Drama, General
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 21143
Read Count: 793
[Report This] Published: 12/05/05 Updated: 12/05/05


Title: Chapter 1: The Silent Enemy

Wow.  I should have known you would write angst as well as you write everything else.  This story is excellent; a little Centre deceit, a little race against time, but in the end it all comes back to the Sydney/Parker/Jarod relationships.  The backdrop was excellent, and, as always, the emotions were heart-wrenching.

 Reviewer: MP Signed
Date: 10/09/07
Cold by The Lurker
Rated: PG 13 [Reviews - 1]
Summary: A friend of Parker's is keeping an eye on her.....

Categories: Indefinite Timeline
Characters: Jarod, Miss Parker
Classifications: Genres: General, Romance
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 803
Read Count: 2296
[Report This] Published: 12/05/05 Updated: 12/05/05


Title: Chapter 1: Cold

I normally shy away from anything with "Romance" in the description, but I'm glad I read this one.  It all felt very in character (and not at all sappy!)  Your comment about how "she reminded everyone of Catherine" was particularly insightful.

 Reviewer: MP Signed
Date: 18/08/07
Empty Hallways by The Lurker
Rated: R starstarstar [Reviews - 1]
Summary: Miss Parker sets Sydney straight about a few things

Categories: Indefinite Timeline
Characters: Sydney
Classifications: Genres: General
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 883
Read Count: 548
[Report This] Published: 12/05/05 Updated: 12/05/05


Title: Chapter 1: Empty Hallways

I'm still reading.  Sydney's still perfect.  I'm liking Miss P too.

 Reviewer: MP Signed
Date: 17/08/07
Heavy Snow by The Lurker
Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2]
Summary: heavy snow falls, bringing with it heavy hearts. Major character death, be warned.

Categories: Indefinite Timeline
Characters: Jarod, Miss Parker, Sydney
Classifications: Genres: Angst, General
Warnings: Warning: Character Death

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 709
Read Count: 648
[Report This] Published: 12/05/05 Updated: 12/05/05


Title: Chapter 1: Heavy Snow

*sniff, sniff*

Great writing, as usual.  I gotta stop reading these before they make me cry--and I never cry over stories.  You captured more emotion in seven hundred words than I could have in seven thousand.

Great writing.  Catch you in the morning.

 Reviewer: MP Signed
Date: 17/08/07
Presence by The Lurker
Rated: R [Reviews - 1]
Summary: This ditty was in response to a story challenge on a mailing list. Short and Sweet.

Categories: During The Series
Characters:
Classifications: Genres: General
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 599
Read Count: 613
[Report This] Published: 12/05/05 Updated: 12/05/05


Title: Chapter 1: Presence

Short, sweet, and well written.

 Reviewer: MP Signed
Date: 18/08/07
A Barren Elm by The Lurker
Rated: R starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 2]
Summary: MP ponders the meaning of her life and where everyone fits in

Categories: Indefinite Timeline
Characters: Miss Parker, Other Centre Character, Sydney
Classifications: Genres: Angst, General
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 1544
Read Count: 1310
[Report This] Published: 12/05/05 Updated: 12/05/05


Title: Chapter 1: A Barren Elm

Written with the clear, poignant emotions that are your trademark.  Once again, a beautiful piece with perfect imagery.  This one is unique, though, in the way it leaves the audience questioning--trying to get inside Parker's head.  I guess that's the real point of this story.  Great work.

 Reviewer: MP Signed
Date: 18/08/07
Blue Moonlight by The Lurker
Rated: R starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 4]
Summary: Miss Parker receives an unusual Christmas gift from Jarod

Categories: Indefinite Timeline
Characters: Jarod, Miss Parker, Sydney
Classifications: Genres: General
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 1486
Read Count: 929
[Report This] Published: 12/05/05 Updated: 12/05/05


Title: Chapter 1: Blue Moonlight

That's a very sweet story.  It's not easy to have Parker be vulnerable and still be Parker, but you did very well.

 Reviewer: MP Signed
Date: 17/08/07
One at a Time by The Lurker
Rated: R [Reviews - 1]
Summary: A disgruntled employee holds the Centre hostage

Categories: Indefinite Timeline
Characters: Broots, Jarod, Miss Parker, Mr Parker
Classifications: Genres: Action/Adventure, General
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 5466
Read Count: 772
[Report This] Published: 12/05/05 Updated: 12/05/05


Title: Chapter 1: One at a Time

Great story.  I especially love how she finally stands up to "Daddy."

 Reviewer: MP Signed
Date: 10/09/07
Warm Embrace by The Lurker
Rated: R [Reviews - 1]
Summary: On the anniversary of Jacob's death, Sydney receives comfort from an unlikely source

Categories: Indefinite Timeline
Characters: Jarod, Sydney
Classifications: Genres: Angst, General
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 1149
Read Count: 391
[Report This] Published: 12/05/05 Updated: 12/05/05


Title: Chapter 1: Warm Embrace

Another good story.

 Reviewer: MP Signed
Date: 18/08/07
Refuge by The Lurker
Rated: R [Reviews - 1]
Summary: After receiving a string of strange post cards, Sydney fears he'll never hear from Jarod again.

Categories: Indefinite Timeline
Characters: Jarod, Sydney
Classifications: Genres: Angst, General
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 2247
Read Count: 395
[Report This] Published: 12/05/05 Updated: 12/05/05


Title: Chapter 1: Refuge

Good story.  I especially liked Jarod in this one.

 Reviewer: MP Signed
Date: 18/08/07
Gentle Rocking by The Lurker
Rated: G starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3]
Summary: Jarod recaptures some memories.

Categories: During The Series
Characters: Jarod, Sydney
Classifications: Genres: Angst, General
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 1082
Read Count: 2108
[Report This] Published: 13/05/05 Updated: 13/05/05


Title: Chapter 1: Gentle Rocking

Verrry good.  This is the first Jarod-heavy story I've read from you.  You capture the tortured aspect of his mind quite well.  I love the last paragraph.

 Reviewer: MP Signed
Date: 17/08/07
No Solace in Beauty by The Lurker
Rated: R [Reviews - 1]
Summary: Sydney grieves the loss of a child..... major character death in here, be warned

Categories: Indefinite Timeline
Characters: Jarod, Sydney
Classifications: Genres: Angst, General
Warnings: Warning: Character Death

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 1136
Read Count: 417
[Report This] Published: 13/05/05 Updated: 13/05/05


Title: Chapter 1: No Solace in Beauty

I've said this before . . . but you do tragedy really *really* well.  The strength of this piece is the imagery.  It's beautiful.

 Reviewer: MP Signed
Date: 18/08/07
Reflections by The Lurker
Rated: R starstarstarstar [Reviews - 1]
Summary: Mr. Raines resurrects an old pet project, that could cost Miss Parker and Sydney their lives.

Categories: Season 4
Characters: Miss Parker, Mr Raines, Sydney
Classifications: Genres: Drama, General
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 26987
Read Count: 1215
[Report This] Published: 13/05/05 Updated: 13/05/05


Title: Chapter 1: Reflections

Comments . . . um . . . Wow!

This one certainly kept me reading!  As usual, Sydney was all I wished he could be and more.  I've read quite a few fics, but thus far you're the only author who's been able to make Syd and Jarod actually discuss their feelings in a way that wasn't trite or corny.  Great job!  I aspire to one day writing a piece that's half this good.

 Reviewer: MP Signed
Date: 04/12/07
Shadows In The Mist by The Lurker
Rated: R starstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 2]
Summary: Jarod and MP wind up on the edge, in their ongoing battle against each other

Categories: Indefinite Timeline
Characters: Jarod, Miss Parker, Sydney
Classifications: Genres: Drama, General
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 1650
Read Count: 789
[Report This] Published: 13/05/05 Updated: 13/05/05


Title: Chapter 1: Shadows In The Mist

Oh, I like this one a lot.  It has more action than many of your pieces, and that just serves to make the emotional aspect even more compelling.

 Reviewer: MP Signed
Date: 18/08/07
Sweet Orange by The Lurker
Rated: R starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 3]
Summary: Miss Parker revisits some childhood memories.

Categories: Character Musing
Characters: Miss Parker
Classifications: Genres: General
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 1562
Read Count: 328
[Report This] Published: 13/05/05 Updated: 13/05/05


Title: Chapter 1: Sweet Orange

This is a beautiful little story.  You really let us see the room--smell it even.  The imagery  and characterization are perfect.  Parker just seems so very human.

 Reviewer: MP Signed
Date: 11/09/07
The Garden Beyond by The Lurker
Rated: R [Reviews - 1]
Summary: Sydney tries to cope with his guilt regarding Jarod.

Categories: Post IOTH
Characters: Jarod, Sydney
Classifications: Genres: Drama, General
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 1274
Read Count: 291
[Report This] Published: 13/05/05 Updated: 13/05/05


Title: Chapter 1: The Garden Beyond

Wow.  Of all the pieces you've written for Sydney, I think this is my new favorite.  Imagery and anguish.  You are very gifted.

 Reviewer: MP Signed
Date: 18/08/07