Welcome Back, Mighty E-Dict.  I don't think the feed is fixed because this story didn't pop up on the feed when I looked this morning.  Sorry.   But now for the really important question: have you found Jarod and brought him back for all of us to play with?

Author's Response: If there is to be any playing with Jarod, I get first dibs on that. Hmm on the feed, did you press the orange RSS button, or the orange XML button down the bottom of the front page?

It seems to be working for me, i have had feeds on both new chapters. It might be that you need to delete your old feed and add it again. Try using the XML instead of the rss and see if that is any better.

jacci, you are becoming our very own Brootsie.  *claps hands for the E-Dict*

Great Chapter, Katie.  Love how Lys is now the strong one and Jarod is the one needed help.  My favorite line is when Lys tells the guard to get "nice and intimate with the floor.".  It show the power she was commanding at that moment, without making her a b*^%h or an ice queen.  So the important question is how much is the thesis gonna interfer with the next chapter?

Author's Response: I'm glad you have your priorities straight re: my thesis versus the next chapter ;). But thanks for the feedback, I'm glad that you enjoyed and still could remember the plot line.

Best chapter yet, Katie.    Love all the twists and turns.   Was sure that it was MP and Jarod talking, now am thinking Zoe and J.  Or maybe Emily (preferably) and the Major is the one sick.  Aaahhh, the torture of the wait...how long until the next chap?

Author's Response:

how long until the next chapter.. what an excellent question...

soon i hope .. soon :)

and i shall reveal nothing! Thanks for R&R, it's always very appreciated.

So, did she?  To be continued?  Please?

Author's Response:

Well ... if she did that's another story. (big smile) But for now it'll have to wait!  Thanks for reading and reviewing!

This is a great story.  I don't usually like cross-overs, but you are doing a fantastic job with this one.  Can't wait for more.

Interesting concept, the time shifts back and forth.  Makes it seem like an episode.  Can't wait for more.

Author's Response: I didn't even think about that, but you're right. You see what happens when I try and be different. ;)

Hmmm, a chapter that gives more questions than answers, a suspenseful ending after lots of anxiety.  Would have to rate the chapter as Great, but mean.  Poor Jarod being beating for the fun of it, poor Parker for the emotional breakdown in her mom's studio and poor Syd for almost growing some cahones.  So now the big question is : When's the next chapter? 

Author's Response: Isn't tP just so good at doing that though? It is a very mean, very painful chapter. Glad you liked it though!

Cliffhangers:  aarrrrhhhh!  Meanie!  Can't leave us hanging there!  Is poor Jarod truly trapped?  He's not thinking the unthinkable, is he?  Write faster, please. *whimpers a little at the thought of a long wait*

Great chapter! Shippers are tough to write well and you are doing a great job. Can't wait for the next chapter.

Author's Response:

Hi Tinanaz!

Thank you very much for your kind words.

Anna 

Ohhh, I like this story.  So the evil Dr. Raines has had his hand in the breaking up of more than one set of twins for the Centre.  And having Jarod and Kyle as twins helps explain why the boys looked so much alike in age when they first met.  The only question I still have is how did Harriet Tashman know about Kyle, then.  I can't see the Major admitting what he did.  Did he just it off as an elaborate kidnapping scheme later on?  Hmm.

Author's Response: Yes, the "twin" angle was one I hadn't seen done--which is surprising considering how much fanfic is devoted to strange and surprising family connections.  There's more in the works, so hopefully I'll be able to fill in the blanks with plausible explanations.  I'm mum till I have time to sit down and write the next installment!

Yay!  Next chappie is up!  Great job so far, can wait for next chapter (hint, hint).

Author's Response: yay! lol, thank Tinanaz, do you mean you can't wait for next chappy? lol

Very nice, MP.  Love how you made Jarod and Kyle twins and how young Jarod was a bit of a troublemaker, unintentionally of course.  How soon for the next installment?  Soon, I hope.  Very very soon, in fact.

Author's Response: Thanks, Tina!  I wasn't sure if the twin thing was going to work, but I liked the ideas it raised.  As for little Jarod, I based a lot of him off of my older brother.  It always seems like the smartest kids have the most trouble fitting in, so I decided to play that up.  No promises on the next installment; my multi-chapter fic Flight of Memory needs some serious TLC at the moment.  There are ideas running around in my head, though, and I'm sure it won't be too long before I just *have* to write them down.