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Pretender
FINALLY COMPLETED. A saga with lots of action, plot twists, and a little romance thrown in from time to time. It's Jarod and Miss Parker's journey together toward the truth and the end.
Lyle is like Freddie Krueger, you just can't kill the man. Great story, hope this isn't the end.
Author's Response: Haha you are so right. Thank you and don't worry, there's a little bit more left to come.
Loved the last chapter. The idea of a normal Jarod and MP is hilarious and you did a great job of showing how difficult it would be for them.
Author's Response: Oh thank you. I think the ultimate shipper vs non-shipper debate comes from the fact that it would be so weird for them to be together like normal people are soooo I tried to keep the normalcy as them as possible. Thank you for being my 100th review, how exciting!!
This is a sequel to Soul Splinters.Tough story to read (and I imagine to write) with all the ups and downs. Enjoyed it except for the end. Didn't like Sydney dying. He deserves a chance to live a Centre-free life too.
Reviewer: Tinanaz Signed
A love story...my way. ;-) Read and review pleaseVery interesting story. The time flip-flops are great. So Jarod/John married MP? And how/when did the Centre find them? Does Sydney know Jarod/John is alive? Please don't keep us in suspense too long.
Reviewer: Tinanaz SignedHmmm, interesting. Do the PTB really know J is still alive? Do they really believe in the scrolls? Can't wait for the next chapter.
Reviewer: Tinanaz Signed
I love how you are mixing the episodes with the fanfic. Excellent job. How soon for the next chapter?
Reviewer: Tinanaz SignedCliffhanger....aaaagggghhhhh! Not nice, you meanie. Better write the next chapter quickly or I might make a play for Jacci poker and come after you. Oh, by the way, great job so far.
Reviewer: Tinanaz SignedDun dun dun. Talk about a cliffhanger. Suspense and anguish all tied up together. Please dont leave us hanging too long. Too many questions are now brewing in my overactive imagination that; questions need answers before I drive myself nuts. Please, please, write soon.
Author's Response: Dun dun...and my evil plan worked. mwhahahaha, your imagination will now run wild with
unsubstantiated theories. Thanks for the review.
Reviewer: Tinanaz SignedThis is a great story, please don't forget about it again. I love the flashbacks, seems just like an episode. And a kind nurse? In the Centre? Bet she didn't last long, but love the addition. How soon til the next one? Or are you too busy beta-ing other people's stories. Tell the others to go away (well, most of them) so you can write more on this one.
Author's Response: Thanks a lot! Yeah, a kind nurse, i doubt she lasted longer than a few years lol. I will make notes to myself so i dont forget and hopefully in a few days. (and Tinanaz, arent you one of them I beta for lol)
I would agree with RaChell, but since you are betaing a story for me....and I have noticed you are doing the same thing with Grace. Is completed, but you are teasing those who haven't read it already. Is that what you call playing with your PTB power?
Author's Response: Yes Tinanaz, you be nice to me or there will be heaps of red in it for you (or would that be no red for you?) lol And to cove my butt, Gracie has nothing to do with me when it comes to posting. That is all Jacci's fault, she controls our stories here, and i do on the other site i post them for us. thanks though for bugging me lol, i will post now for you all
Was that a hint of Parker softening? Is it possible that the Ice Queen was actually nice to the Labrat or have you just been messing with our minds? Was Jarod delusional then? Love the interplay between the two at the store, was so believable. How soon til the next chapter?
Author's Response: Thanks Tinanaz, glad you thought it was believable. As for the Parker softening hint, I am not going to say anything lol, just have to wait and find out
Great story, great twist. I like how MP followed her heart, but in a way that the Centre couldn't prove anything. A car accident could have been caused by any number reasons, but a deliberate accident (contradiction, I know) would be plausible for them. Great job!
Author's Response: Thanks a heap tina, really appricaite you taking the time to reveiw :D i thought car crash made sense too when i wrot eit so long ago lol, so glad it still makes sense yay
Great job, Kye. Pull those emotions out and put them throught the wringer. I can so totally see Sydney erupting at Jarod like that and then regretting it later. How soon til the next chapter?
Author's Response: Thanks Tina!! glad you liked it and as i reread it before posting i was thinking might be a little to far ooc for Syd, but its written and done so blah lol. the next chap wont be long, im gonna make me a note to do it lol
Very nice, Kye. Poor Jarod, the death magnet. And now is the time he really need Sydney and Sydney is actually there for him. But does he realize that? Nope. Great job of pulling the emotions out of Jarod. Can easily see the guilt building up in him. So how soon til the next chapter?
Author's Response: yeha, poor Jarod is a death magnet isnt he? and about time Syd is there for J dont oyu think? lol. thanks for the review, hope you like the next chaps comming
Jarod drunk and hanging around Blue Cove, hmm he really doesnt care about his own life right now, does he. And why isn't Sydney stopping him. Does Syd still blame Jarod, deep down inside, for the accident? And how come the PTBs at the Centre aren't smart enough to have a sweeper or ten at MP's favorite bar? They knew how he felt about her. Anyways, great chapter, Kye. Lots of questions for us to ponder over while you torture us with the wait for the next chapter? Which is when, btw?
Ah, Kye, posted just cause I wouldn't leave you alone. Poor baby, but the chapter is well worth the bugging. Knew MP wouldnt stay dead, cant wait to find out how her broken leg healed so quickly. And poor Jarod, caught pantless. See what happens when you drink. And how's Syd gonna handle Jarod in Raines' hands, he should have saved Jarod from himself. You know the routine, Kye, when's the next..........
Author's Response: yeah, i posted because you pestered me lol. yeah, now, no one at the Centre really stays dead lol, and the mystery of the broken leg is reveled in the upcoming chapters, so dont worry about it. thanks for the feedbak tina!!!
Poor Jarod, so confused, so pitiful. And now without his support system (if you could ever call Sydney that). Great job of showing his confusion and fear, Kye. How soon until the next chapter (and no, this doesn't count as your daily reminder).
Author's Response: poor Jarod indeed, and Sydney isnt happy is he? thnaks for the compliment, and i know i responded to this late, but the next chap has already been put up lol, and you have read it already. oh well.
So glad my poking worked, Kye. I may just have to keep it up.
I think poor Jarod is headed for a world of hurt and I think this is gonna turn out to be an elaborate set-up by the Centre. Guess your gonna have to post again real soon so I can see how badly I messed this guess up.
only prob I see is the text has run out of the box.
Author's Response: Ohh it has? that is not good. ![\"smack.gif\"](\"stories/519/images/smack.gif\" "\\"smack.gif\\"")
Be careful. If the figure is still a ways away, then it could be MP in her all-leather B&D outfit and toting her gun. Have you been doing anything you shouldn't have lately?
Author's Response:
Me??? Something i shouldn't have done???? Never, i am always a good girl :d
If it is MP in some kind of B/D outfit, i will be running away screaming for help?
Lmao, what a truly terrifying image
Reviewer: Tinanaz Signedyou turnin shipper on us? or is it just she doesnt want J to have any "fun"?
Author's Response:
Bite your tongue you evil person!!! Lmao.
Perhaps she is just thinking about giving that B&D thing a go.
Reviewer: Tinanaz SignedWarning system so the Pretenders know who to stay away from, right?
Reviewer: Tinanaz SignedNow MP is finding out the true reason Jarod escaped from the Centre. It wasn't because they were misusing his SIMs (that was only a small part), it was to get away from Sydney's shrinkness. Beware, Jacci, that Syd doesnt come after you when MP final evades him.
Reviewer: Tinanaz SignedBe careful you don't strain something. These mega-length chapters can be hazardous to your health if your not used to them.
Reviewer: Tinanaz SignedMystery girl is taking a vacation WITH Jarod. So totally not fair. I wanna take a vacation with Jarod, say somewhere quiet, secluded, Centre-free.
Author's Response:
I don't know if there is much I can do about that unfortunatly, Mystery Girl seems pretty determined to keep Jarod all to herself... But maybe if you grab him while I distract her you can have a little time with Jarod as well...before Mystery Girl hunts you down and takes Jarod all to herself
Reviewer: Tinanaz Signed