Penname: AJeff [Contact]

Real name: Anna

Member Since: 29/03/07

Membership status: Member

Bio:

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Hi! I've been lurking around "Missing Pieces" for sometime and finally decided to join. I'm a member of two other sites. Besides posting "Pretender" fics, I do write for others on this one site. The other is a "Pretender Challenge" group where I love to write my smut. Most of my stories are "angst" with "romance" mixed in together. So, if you're in the mood for "angst", click on one of my stories. If you're in the mood for "smut", click away and ENJOY!



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Affiliation: Pretender

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Summary: none

Categories: Poetry
Characters: Jarod, Miss Parker
Classifications: Genres: Angst, Romance
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 190
Read Count: 2677
[Report This] Published: 22/04/05 Updated: 22/04/05


Title: Chapter 1: ch 1

Beautifully written!

Reviewer: AJeff Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20/04/07
Fire! by RaChell
Rated: G starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1]
Summary: Short story.,written in First person. Miss Parker loses a important part of her past. First story in the Fire! series.

Categories: Season 3
Characters: Jarod, Lyle, Miss Parker, Mr Parker
Classifications: Genres: Angst
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:No
Word count: 607
Read Count: 2351
[Report This] Published: 10/05/05 Updated: 10/05/05


Title: Chapter 1: none

Hi RaChell!

I love this!  Thank you for sharing.

Anna 



Author's Response: Thank you for reading it!  It was one of my favorites stories to write.

Reviewer: AJeff Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25/04/07
Lie To Me by Leni Ba
Rated: PG starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2]
Summary: Anything but...

Categories: Hope
Characters: Jarod
Classifications: Genres: Angst
Warnings: None
Challenges: Drabble #03 Hope

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 121
Read Count: 2029
[Report This] Published: 26/05/05 Updated: 26/05/05


Title: Chapter 1: --

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So sad.  Now their "chase" has ended.

Anna 

Reviewer: AJeff Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09/05/07
Summary: Just a few thoughts about love..

Categories: Poetry
Characters: Telling Would Spoil
Classifications: Genres: Romance
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 61
Read Count: 2021
[Report This] Published: 04/08/05 Updated: 04/08/05


Title: Chapter 1: -

Great poem!

Reviewer: AJeff Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20/04/07
Summary: It's all about Hatred and Love...

Categories: Poetry
Characters: Jarod, Miss Parker
Classifications: Genres: Romance
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 76
Read Count: 699
[Report This] Published: 23/10/05 Updated: 23/10/05


Title: Chapter 1: ...

Nicely done!

Reviewer: AJeff Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20/04/07
Summary:

A sweet, fun short story for Christmas time based on my own Christmas distasters.



Categories: Jarod/ Miss Parker
Characters: None
Classifications: Genres: Comedy, General
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 5890
Read Count: 14706
[Report This] Published: 06/12/05 Updated: 14/05/07


Title: Chapter 5: V

Gosh!  This was the best "Pretender" Christmas story I've ever read!  I feel so christmasy, and it's only seven more months until Santa arrives.pretend2.jpg

Anna 

Reviewer: AJeff Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14/05/07
Once by jacci
Rated: G starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 4]
Summary: Possibly the saddest word in the English language

Categories: Poetry
Characters: Jarod
Classifications: Genres: Angst
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 97
Read Count: 2152
[Report This] Published: 20/09/06 Updated: 20/09/06


Title: Chapter 1: Once

Beautifully written. I especially love your last line!

Author's Response: Thanks so much, glad you liked it.

Reviewer: AJeff Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20/04/07
Once.... Again by jacci
Rated: G starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 2]
Summary: Companion piece to Once

Categories: Poetry
Characters: Miss Parker
Classifications: Genres: General
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 92
Read Count: 2024
[Report This] Published: 24/09/06 Updated: 24/09/06


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Bravo!

Author's Response: Thanks so much, this type of writing is very new to me and i am well out of my depth i fear.

Reviewer: AJeff Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20/04/07
A Choice by Manoline
Rated: PG starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 7]
Summary: We all wish for freedom, the question is how far are we willing to go to get it?

Categories: Poetry
Characters: Jarod, Miss Parker
Classifications: Genres: Angst, Tragedy
Warnings: Warning: Character Death

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 198
Read Count: 3522
[Report This] Published: 24/11/06 Updated: 24/11/06


Title: Chapter 1: A choice

Sad, but, beautifully written.

Author's Response: Thanks AJeff, glad you liked it :)

Reviewer: AJeff Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20/04/07
Release by Jazzy
Rated: G starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 7]
Summary: It's only love!

Categories: Love, Post IOTH, Indefinite Timeline
Characters: Jarod, Miss Parker
Classifications: Genres: Angst, Romance
Warnings: None
Challenges: Drabble #01 Love

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 1431
Read Count: 2805
[Report This] Published: 13/02/07 Updated: 13/02/07


Title: Chapter 1: The first and the only...

Cameleon07.jpgBeautifully written!  Perfect!  Bravo!

Reviewer: AJeff Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30/04/07
Glowing Ember by icd
Rated: G starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3]
Summary: Written for the 'Angel'-challenge on Pretender100
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Categories: Angel, Character Musing
Characters: Telling Would Spoil
Classifications: Genres: Character Musing
Warnings: None
Challenges: Drabble #52 Angel

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 96
Read Count: 1910
[Report This] Published: 06/03/07 Updated: 06/03/07


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Hi icd!

Beautifully written.  I love the last line.  Yes, they were fallen angels.

Anna



Author's Response: Hi Anna, glad you like this little piece.

Reviewer: AJeff Signed
Date: 30/04/07
Next Week by krisrussel
Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 11]
Summary: Miss Parker decides to use her inner sense to track down Jarod and take him back to The Centre.

Categories: Post IOTH
Characters: Jarod, Miss Parker
Classifications: Genres: General, Romance
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 6825
Read Count: 2062
[Report This] Published: 16/03/07 Updated: 16/03/07


Title: Chapter 1: Next Week

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I love happy endings.  Well done!  Thanks for sharing!

Anna 

Reviewer: AJeff Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18/06/07
Summary: Jarod corners Miss Parker!

Categories: Alternate Universe
Characters: Telling Would Spoil
Classifications: Genres: Smut
Warnings: Warning: Sexual Content

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 1225
Read Count: 1698
[Report This] Published: 27/03/07 Updated: 27/03/07


Title: Chapter 1: Desire

Wow!  Love this!

Reviewer: AJeff Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30/03/07
Summary: In memory of Steven, a valued Missing Pieces member that was taken from us far too early in life.

Categories: Misc
Characters: None
Classifications: Genres: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 31
Read Count: 6786
[Report This] Published: 16/04/07 Updated: 16/04/07


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I am so sorry for your loss.  You have my deepest condolences.  I'd like to share a poem which I wrote a couple of years ago.  Hope it brings you comfort.

If I hang on to all of you too closely
It's because I can't bear the thought of leaving you
I may not be able to express my feelings
But, can't you see it in my eyes, what I feel for you

I shall be looking down at you
I shall be missing my family
You are my loves, my greatest treasures
You are the most precious things to me

Farewell, my loves, I may be leaving
But, my love for you is here to stay
I love you all so very much
I will be seeing you one day

When it is your time to join me
I shall be waiting for you
I shall welcome you here in paradise
I shall be saving a place for you

So, for now I bid you goodbye
Until we meet again in eternity
I shall welcome you with open arms
"Here I am, you are finally home with me"

Reviewer: AJeff Signed
Date: 17/04/07
Storybook by 24
Rated: PG starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2]
Summary: Miss Parker thinks about the book that Jarod wrote about her.

Categories: Indefinite Timeline
Characters: Miss Parker
Classifications: Genres: General
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:No
Word count: 270
Read Count: 1081
[Report This] Published: 04/05/07 Updated: 04/05/07


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

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I love your last line.  Nice oneshot.

Anna

Reviewer: AJeff Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04/05/07
Summary: Sydney's POV. This story is inspired by Gables "X Marks the Spot series". sydbroots.jpg

Categories: Indefinite Timeline
Characters: Sydney
Classifications: Genres: Comedy
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 473
Read Count: 3966
[Report This] Published: 05/05/07 Updated: 05/05/07


Title: Chapter 1: Sydney's Point Of View

Hi RaChell!

I love this!  I'm waiting for more.  great start!

Anna 



Author's Response: \"pretend2.jpg\"Thanks Anna!  I'm happy you liked it!  But unless my muse hits me over the head witha great idea and a light bulb in my brain comes on, there won't be anymore.  It's hard to follow Gables and I almost didn't post this one.  BTW can we expect some more stories from you soon?

Reviewer: AJeff Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05/05/07
The End by afroupean
Rated: NC 18 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 13]
Summary: Thou shall not.  A Jarod, Ms Parker angst story.

Categories: Post IOTH
Characters: All the characters
Classifications: Genres: Angst, Romance
Warnings: Warning: Incest/Twincest, Warning: Language, Warning: Non Consensual Sexual Content, Warning: Sexual Content, Warning: Violence

Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed:No
Word count: 4192
Read Count: 2903
[Report This] Published: 07/06/07 Updated: 11/06/07


Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I love this story, and I've already reviewed on your other site. Reading this the second time seemed ever better!  Love the way you wrote Miss Parker and Jarod.  Well done. 

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Author's Response:

Hi

Thanks, your story and writing style rock too.

Reviewer: AJeff Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09/06/07
Not My Problem by 24
Rated: PG starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3]
Summary: Miss Parker catches up with Jarod.

Categories: Indefinite Timeline
Characters: Broots, Jarod, Miss Parker, Sydney
Classifications: Genres: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 1226
Read Count: 1180
[Report This] Published: 20/06/07 Updated: 20/06/07


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

 

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Great story.  Thanks for sharing.

Anna 

Reviewer: AJeff Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25/06/07
Summary: What would the characters think.... about our stories if they existed in a different plane?

Categories: Spoofs / Parodies
Characters: Jarod, Miss Parker, Original Character
Classifications: Genres: Character Musing, Comedy
Warnings: Warning: Violence

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:No
Word count: 2523
Read Count: 1884
[Report This] Published: 24/06/07 Updated: 24/06/07


Title: Chapter 1: Plan B or Rescue Us!

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Hi RaChelle!

I really loved this piece.  Well done!  You made me laugh!  I could see all of this right in front of me.  

Hope you'll be writing more.

Take care,

Anna 



Author's Response:

Thank you Anna!  I'm glad I made you laugh.  This was fun to write.

And of course I'm looking forward to more of your stories.  We will get something soon I hope?  Is that a 'yes' I hear?

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Reviewer: AJeff Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25/06/07
Summary:

Continuation of the Sleepyhead series.

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Categories: Indefinite Timeline
Characters: Broots, Lyle, Miss Parker, Mr Parker, Mr Raines, Original Character, Sam, Sydney
Classifications: Genres: Drama
Warnings: None

Series: Sleepyhead Challenge
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 1450
Read Count: 1984
[Report This] Published: 29/06/07 Updated: 29/06/07


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Hi RaChell!

This was really good.  Poor Miss Parker, can't she see what kind of person "daddy" is?

Well done!

Anna



Author's Response:

Thank you Anna!  I'm glad you enjoyed it, esp. the part re: Daddy Parker.  I tried very hard to keep him 'in character'.  (grin)

Sooo when will we see another story from you? 

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Reviewer: AJeff Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29/06/07
Summary: On a special occasion, a certain book powerfully jolts a character's memory.... inspired by one of my favorite episodes of The Pretender

Categories: Character Musing
Characters: Original Character, Telling Would Spoil
Classifications: Genres: Angst, Character Musing, Vignette
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 803
Read Count: 2332
[Report This] Published: 21/08/07 Updated: 21/08/07


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I have never read a more beautiful story than I have right now.  Wonderfully written.  As you told Debbie's story, I could picture it as if she was right in front of me in my living room acting out the scenes you've created.  I love the memories of the precious time Miss Parker and Debbie had with each other, and you replayed it PERFECTLY!  Thank you so much for sharing!

Anna 

Reviewer: AJeff Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22/08/07