We all just want some ANSWERS.
"I run. You chase. What if... we didn't?"
yay!! ty... and now, more pls. :-) :-p
Author's Response: Hey, you're welcome! I'll try and get on that some time I suppoooose.
great so far! looking fwd to more. no matter how used the plot could be, which obviously I don't know about yet, I like how uniquely ur doing it. going back and forth like that is a hard-acquired writing skill..... like grammar and spelling skills, which I might add, ur doing wonderfully...
Author's Response: Oh wow that was like a triple compliment! Thank you so much!
ooh, yay!!!! an update!! and just as good, if not better, than the first two!!!! bartender, another round, and keep 'em comin' !!!
Author's Response:
Another round it is. I'll have you drunk with love for my story as quick as I can!
Reviewer: CrackerjacknPez Signedthe only symbolidm I could see was wanting to die, but I don't think it ever mentioed jarod wanring it in 'gone', it was always lys.... well, I did see the avoiding-their-direct-gaze thing that waw big for the triimvirate, and the harsh results that'd follow...
nice job!
Author's Response:
Thanks!
As far as symbolism, the 'sack' was a hood that doubled as a body bag (remember, Jarod said that ending his life would save others), the 'eyes' were red like the camera lights, and the 'changeling' reflected Jarod's confusion over just who he was trying to go home to. You hit the nail on the head with the 'avoid-their-gaze' thing.
CrackerjacknPez gets bonus points for guessing the symbolism and LOTS of brownie points for giving me a chance to discuss symbolism!
Reviewer: CrackerjacknPez Signedcool.... thx for clarifying about the sequel. u must know what we're all waiting for.. :-p
Reviewer: CrackerjacknPez Signednnnniiiice! I like it. hope more's coming soon...
Reviewer: CrackerjacknPez Signedtastefully done....
I love the way they left jackson! I WAS a nice touch....
tastefully done....
I love the way they left jackson! It WAS a nice touch....
hmm.. yeah, that's a very real possibility on why he calls... nice.
Author's Response: Thanks Sabs. And yes, I thought so, happy to hear someone agrees
I like!! I hope u intend to post more chapters soon...
Author's Response: I do indeedy! Hope u keep reading!
it's the second part to alone, Jarods answer to Miss Parkers E-mail
I like it!! NIIIIICE job. and u did well considering where english is on your language list.
Reviewer: CrackerjacknPez SignedA mobster in New York kidnaps the charaters in this story to find out who kidnapped his daughter. Will they save her in time?
that was interesting.... yeah, u couldve gone a little deeper, making the story longer, but u did good with what u did. :-)
Author's Response: This is actually the first of three stories. I haven't had a chance to finish the second one. Even though I have the third one finished but you can't post it without finishing the second one. Thank you for the kind words.
aww, that was sweet! thanks.
Author's Response: Thanks. My email didn't tell me I had a review. I'm sorry it took so long to respond.
interesting start. trying to figure out how AU it is.... I'd think I understand, then it goes into the classoc tP story. we'll have to see, I guess. :-p
Author's Response:
Hi!
Thank you taking the time to reading and reviewing. I'll update soon.
Anna
Reviewer: CrackerjacknPez Signedgood! finally, a tP-story 'in the real world', w/ real problems. I like. it meshes w/ the series's storyline so well. keep it up, pls!!! :-)))
Author's Response:
Hi!
Thank you. Sorry for taking so long in thanking you for your great review. I'll update soon.
Anna
Reviewer: CrackerjacknPez Signedwow!!! NNNIIIICE job. that was truly lovely.
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