Jarod's a prisoner of The Triumvirate. This is the sequel to Conflict Zero.
yay, another chapter!! pls tell me you've got more, the wait is killing me inside!
Author's Response: there will be more..I promise!! I'll try and be as quick as possible!!
Thank you for another chappie, Katie!!!! Please continue. You've got me on the edge of my seat here! Grrrrr on you for being such a great writer!!! You really know your cliffhangers!!!! ^_^ (I hope you caught the true meaning of my 'grrrrr's... :-p please use it to spur you on for another 10 chapters in, say, 2 weeks? ^^)
Author's Response: Hey!! You are spurring! Next three chapters are at the mercy of the beta readers. You will get them, as soon as I do! But I will keep writing! Thanks for the kind words.
AARGH!! What a cliffhanger!!! I hope you don’t intend on leaving us hanging for too long… you just gave me just a little inkling of hope in a world you created, of naught else but suffering and depression; I hope you can come up w/ something to back up the little night-light of hope you just produced!!! :-p
Author's Response: night-light of hope... lmao! I love it. I'm really trying and i do apologize for the wait. The outside world is keeping me oh so busy!! I promise to keep kicking away at the next part... and agian SORRY for keeping you waiting. Thanks for the feedback though :)
I like, I like!!! just hope mp doesn't change into what she's pretending to be. hope ur working on this!!
Author's Response: next chapter is ooh so close.. oh so close.. thanks though :)
Jarod is captured and returned to the Centre. Part of the Guess Who/Guess What Challenge
nnnnnice!!!!! I was thinking it was em and jay...
I hope ur working on this!!!! :-))))
nnnnnice!!!!! I was thinking it was em and jay...
I hope ur working on this!!!! :-))))
Author's Response: always..it's just that the writing up of my thesis is competing for time, but thanks for the pop in, gives me a good kick in the ass!
see, P-D? here I am... oh, and I replied to both you and jacs, where u 2 amazed me w/ compliments! I am stunned, I truly am. (test story, ch 1)
I'm not too keen on sex-stories, but the plot, as well as the contemplating-thoughts of both of them, are great!
I AM a big JMP shipper, but I like how zoe uses her female intuition to figure out what's wrong, and it is a LITTLE refreshing to see J as more of a typical, out-of-it, sometimes-insensitive jerk of a guy that guys tend to be.
Zoe's a dork, but she's a nice dork who doesn't deserve how J's treating her. besides, its now her fault that's how the writers wrote her... and since he wants MP, he should just go to her and deal w/ that, rather than use Zoe to try and forget MP. she's not a thing.
*steps down from unexpectedly-appeared soapbox* oops... :-p sorry, that was NOT planned.. :-)
Author's Response: WOW! Thanks for the great review! That was unexpected and such a nice surprise! I'm glad you liked it. (blush!) Now when do we get another story from you?
lolll u asked for it, u got it!!! we luv u for writing this..
Author's Response:
I guess so! And I love you guys for reading it!
Reviewer: CrackerjacknPez SignedLOLLL sah-weeeet!! fun fun fun!!! I hope ur working on this! looking very much fwd to reading the rest.
Author's Response: Always fun to write about these characters!
yay!!!!!! u updated!!!! then, for you, I will work on posting a new chappie of 1 of my fics! this is such a wonderful story!!! ur right, it WAS just BEGGING to be written!
Reviewer: CrackerjacknPez Signed
I love it!!!!!! I loved how he was drawn to his other self's preferred clothing, ah, but the dinner.... I loved how he acted!!!! I wonder what was on his plate... what could they have gotten that u can get at a mall?
as usual, tinanaz, MORE PLS! :-p
ugh!! grr, now I have to wait some more! this is VERRRRRRRRY GOOD! it makes sense on several levels for j to be acting like that... and interesting how j's reaction to green veggies is the same as other kids, even tho ots for different reasons. (i wonder if SLM and CVS was thinking of the green veggie thing when they created the opt. nutrit. supplm.?)
Reviewer: CrackerjacknPez Signed wha-at???? ok, is j dead, or is he alive??
Author's Response:
Hi!
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. I just posted another chapter.
Anna
Reviewer: CrackerjacknPez Signedhmmm.... and the plot seems to be thickening...
Author's Response:
Hi!
Thanks so much. I'll update soon.
Anna
Reviewer: CrackerjacknPez Signed
goood.. can't wait to read the rest.
Reviewer: CrackerjacknPez Signedand the interest gets deeper...
Reviewer: CrackerjacknPez Signedthis is good.... where's the rest of it? :-)
Reviewer: CrackerjacknPez Signedyay! I'm glad the rest (i hope :-) ) is posted! thanks... this is good, and its getting me slightly interested in highlander..
Reviewer: CrackerjacknPez Signedmore pls!!!!! this is REALLY good!
Reviewer: CrackerjacknPez Signedyay! good story....
hope there really is a continuation! I look fwd to the possibility of one.
First in a series of sequels to "Steel Doors..."
The best-laid plans just may set Jarod free and forever change the lives of a few very special people.
this is good!!!!! I think it'd be a natural progression in the series, if it had gone on. you could tell, b/c the trio were researching for 'jarod'.... verrrry good! *in syd's voice*
Reviewer: CrackerjacknPez Signedoh, I meant to ask... are the two friends OCs of urs, or are they from another series/movie?
Author's Response:
Nope, not mine, much as I might wish it. lol. The two are the main charac. from the show 'The Sentinel'. The rest of the series pieces will also be from familiar (one hopes) TV shows, such as Walker, Texas Ranger, MacGyver and Angel. I'm especially excited about the Walker piece, as it gives me the chance to expand on the Native American experiences Jarod has already been through in the early search for his father. Hope you enjoy the rest of the parts of the series and thanks so much for the response to these stories.
Reviewer: CrackerjacknPez Signedinteresting. I like the plot. ur right, zoe's insecurities pretty much determined jarod's choice, tho not completely. mp and j WERE made for each other...
Author's Response: Thanks. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
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