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This is a sequel to Soul Splinters.Characters: All the characters
Classifications: Genres: Angst, General
Warnings: Warning: Violence
Series: None
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 55671
Read Count: 65868
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Summary: This is a sequel to Soul Splinters.
Categories: Indefinite Timeline
Characters: All the characters
Classifications: Genres: Angst, General
Warnings: Warning: Violence
Series: None
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 55671
Read Count: 65868
This is a sequel to Soul Splinters.Characters: All the characters
Classifications: Genres: Angst, General
Warnings: Warning: Violence
Series: None
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 55671
Read Count: 65868
[Report This] Published: 09/03/06 Updated: 05/07/07
Title: Chapter 8: All you have ever offered us is pain.
Date: 09/07/07
oh, wow... I forgot lyle liked the woods... good job on incorporating that in the story.
Reviewer: CrackerjacknPez SignedDate: 09/07/07
Title: Chapter 9: To learn
Date: 09/07/07
what did I think? good chappie, although u did confuse me w/ the coast switching... I didn't know tP ppl could beam to places, like in star trek... :-p
Reviewer: CrackerjacknPez SignedDate: 09/07/07
Title: Chapter 12: Choices
Date: 09/07/07
aww, man.... jarod couldve at least shot lyles leg or something... lol
Reviewer: CrackerjacknPez SignedDate: 09/07/07
Title: Chapter 17: To be free
Date: 09/07/07
thanks for finishing it! I'm glad everything worked out... syd's death just made the happy ending more realistic.
Reviewer: CrackerjacknPez SignedDate: 09/07/07
Summary: 
A love story...my way. ;-) Read and review please
Categories: Indefinite Timeline
Characters: All the characters
Classifications: Genres: Action/Adventure, Romance
Warnings: Warning: Violence
Series: None
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 55206
Read Count: 171268
A love story...my way. ;-) Read and review pleaseCharacters: All the characters
Classifications: Genres: Action/Adventure, Romance
Warnings: Warning: Violence
Series: None
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 55206
Read Count: 171268
[Report This] Published: 05/08/06 Updated: 19/06/11
Title: Chapter 1: Zero degrees
Date: 10/07/07
ok, lemme guess.... j, mp, and a couple sweepers? and it sounds like she must have very recently left the centre.. right? :-p just insanely wild guesses...
Reviewer: CrackerjacknPez Signed Date: 10/07/07
Title: Chapter 2: Changes
Date: 10/07/07
oh, wow... the plot thickens! so, either he really died, and ch1 was about other ppl, or j didn't really die. hmmm..... where did I put my thinking cap, the 1 w/ little tP bunnies on 'em...
Reviewer: CrackerjacknPez Signed Date: 10/07/07
Title: Chapter 3: Meeting
Date: 10/07/07
ok, now you've got me hooked.... I'm thinking john's jarod, w/ amnesia, or PTSD from the accident/suicide atttempt...
oh, and 1 more thing... maybe I just missed it, but were there intros? he knew mp' name.
Date: 10/07/07
Title: Chapter 4: The saddest Little Valentine
Date: 10/07/07
*tears dot page* ... (er, well, virtual tears on a palm pilot, while RL tears well up)
Reviewer: CrackerjacknPez SignedDate: 10/07/07
Title: Chapter 5: Faith
Date: 10/07/07
*more tears welling* grrrr.... *sniff sniff* u really killed jarod... I can't believe it, I just can't believe it.
Reviewer: CrackerjacknPez SignedDate: 10/07/07
Title: Chapter 6: The gift
Date: 10/07/07
first thought was, I'm sorry. my condolences. greatly inspiring dedication. love how things are progressing.
Reviewer: CrackerjacknPez SignedDate: 10/07/07
Title: Chapter 7: The truth about what makes you sad
Date: 10/07/07
that had better not john just soothing mp!!!!!! that had better BE jarod!!!! uuuuuugggggg!!!!!
Reviewer: CrackerjacknPez SignedDate: 10/07/07
Title: Chapter 8: It's a powerful thing...
Date: 10/07/07
I KNEW IT I KNEW IT I KNEW IT!!!!!!!! the candy heart, the petals, the super-tingling when they touched... THANK YOU for making him HIM!!! 10 stars all the way!!!!
Reviewer: CrackerjacknPez Signed Date: 10/07/07
Title: Chapter 9: At the hour...
Date: 10/07/07
NNNNNNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *jaw drops, despair fills gap*
Reviewer: CrackerjacknPez SignedDate: 10/07/07
Title: Chapter 10: Bloodlines
Date: 16/07/07
aaargh! that's IT?!?!?!? this story is just too cool to be left like that... more SOON pls. :-p
Reviewer: CrackerjacknPez Signed Date: 16/07/07
Title: Chapter 11: Getting closer
Date: 24/07/07
good... keep 'em comin'. :-p nice job.
Reviewer: CrackerjacknPez SignedDate: 24/07/07
Summary: Miss Parker is in trouble and the person she least expected will come to her aid.
Categories: Indefinite Timeline
Characters: Jarod, Miss Parker
Classifications: Genres: Angst, Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed:No
Word count: 33207
Read Count: 26670
Characters: Jarod, Miss Parker
Classifications: Genres: Angst, Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed:No
Word count: 33207
Read Count: 26670
[Report This] Published: 14/09/06 Updated: 05/03/07
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6
Date: 06/01/07
Wow! Wheres the rest?? More, please, and soon!!
Author's Response:
Hi CrackerjacknPez,
I love that name. Thanks for reading my story and chapter 7 is up already. Enjoy.
Mercy
Reviewer: CrackerjacknPez Signed Date: 06/01/07
Summary: response to the weekly challenge: YOU'RE WORKING AT THE CENTRE. BROOTS HANDS YOU A PIECE OF PAPER AND A DISK. ON THE NOTE THERE ARE SEVERAL NUMBERS AND SOMETHING THAT LOOKS LIKE SL-20. YOU PUT THE DISK IN YOUR COMPUTER. WHAT HAPPENS?
Categories: Spoofs / Parodies
Characters: None
Classifications: Genres: Comedy
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 974
Read Count: 2231
Characters: None
Classifications: Genres: Comedy
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 974
Read Count: 2231
[Report This] Published: 20/09/06 Updated: 20/09/06
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Date: 03/07/07
Great story! I was kept guessing who the narrator/main character was until about half way through, so VERY nice use of mystery! VERY NICE job.
Reviewer: CrackerjacknPez Signed Date: 03/07/07
Summary: There comes a time when a turning point happens regardless of whether one chooses to or not.
Categories: Post IOTH
Characters: Jarod, Miss Parker
Classifications: Genres: Angst, Character Musing, Drama, General, Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed:No
Word count: 11440
Read Count: 8213
Characters: Jarod, Miss Parker
Classifications: Genres: Angst, Character Musing, Drama, General, Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed:No
Word count: 11440
Read Count: 8213
[Report This] Published: 08/10/06 Updated: 14/08/07
Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10
Date: 16/08/07
... wow!!! talk about a cliffhanger...
at the start of the chapter, it got very confusing, and I was going to suggest putting in a flashback note or something, but when I got to the end of the dreams, THEN I understood, so nevermind. :-)
this is GOOOOD!!!! I hope you plan on posting again VERRRY soon...
Date: 16/08/07
Summary: Jarod encounters the "Harry Potter" phenonemon - ie books, movies, lollies, lego sets, wands, trading card game... so much for him to get addicted to!
Categories: During The Series
Characters: Jarod
Classifications: Genres: General
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 1452
Read Count: 1894
Characters: Jarod
Classifications: Genres: General
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 1452
Read Count: 1894
[Report This] Published: 07/01/07 Updated: 07/01/07
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Date: 09/01/07
Nice idea! Love his fascination with the series.. Hehe, wonder how J would get along in the HP world.. *muses 2 self* anyway, good job!
Reviewer: CrackerjacknPez Signed Date: 09/01/07
Summary: jsut testing to see if it works...
Categories: Poetry
Characters: All the characters
Classifications: Genres: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed:No
Word count: 364
Read Count: 179224
Characters: All the characters
Classifications: Genres: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed:No
Word count: 364
Read Count: 179224
[Report This] Published: 19/01/07 Updated: 03/07/08
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Date: 24/01/07
... Wow. That is such thought-provoking material! The way you described MP's heart turning toward J, the work she's willing to put into it... whoa! It's so moving, yet so in-character for both of them! I can really tell the angst and the emotional journey MP had to go through. Thank you for you vulnerability in this fic!
Author's Response: So very pleased you liked it. You may well imagine how much time it took me and I am glad it is paying off so well, and you are having the chance to enjoy it.
Date: 24/01/07
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
Date: 24/01/07
Oh, wow! You've captured J's welcoming MP into a shared life is so profound! 'hey hey'... so unlike MP, yet so like her as well! I can tell a logical transformation during the time you've placed MP in J's loving care. Keep it up, and again, thank you!! More, please!!
Author's Response: More will be coming soon, although i feel we need a lighter chapter after all this heaviness, so i will endevour to lighten things up a little hopefully. And there may yet be hope it all turns out well.
thanks so much for your encrouagment too, keesp the candle burning in the dark hours.
Date: 24/01/07
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
Date: 24/01/07
*stunned* Oh. WOW. That is so provocative! Such divine imagery as you relate how J and MP gather the courage to TEST the fortitude of the current ADMINistration and bring down the Centre! I've never seen the like in all my fanfic reading! Thanks!
Author's Response: It is such a releif to hear you say that. You are spot on in your analysis too, it is amazing how perceptive you are and am pleased to have reached such like-minded people.
Date: 24/01/07
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
Author's Response: If I tell you they succeed, surely it will spoil it, so I must keep the upcoming plot secret until the chapters are revealed.
I am not well known as a shipper (as anybody who reads my other stuff will testify) so I can't make any promises there either. But i will try not to disappoint you too much.
Reviewer: CrackerjacknPez Signed
Date: 24/01/07
*startled* Oh. My. Gosh. I'm simply speechless w/ this latest chapter in our young MP and J's lives. You have captured the essence of the enormity of the task given them for the good of humanity.
Such a cliff-hanger, though! Please tell me they succeed in their noble quest... and not die in the attempt. Oh, how I hate major (protagonists) character deaths.
Thank you, Jacci, for making such a difference in my life. *sniff sniff* I'm rooting for JMP all the way.
Author's Response: If I tell you they succeed, surely it will spoil it, so I must keep the upcoming plot secret until the chapters are revealed.
I am not well known as a shipper (as anybody who reads my other stuff will testify) so I can't make any promises there either. But i will try not to disappoint you too much.
Reviewer: CrackerjacknPez Signed
Date: 24/01/07
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Date: 30/01/07
Oh, wowie-wowie-wow!!!! Such an insightful chapter! I can REALLY tell that you've captured the essence of who Jarod is! He DOES need a break... from being chased, from having so many questions staying unanswered... And he needs to catch a break, too, after everything he's been through! I can tell that if there's one thing he doesn't need a break from, it's MP, and you've captured that so beautifully! In fact, you've made it transparently clear in the poeticism of your words that it's b/c of MP that J's lasted this long. Thank you so much for this chapter! Keep it up, please!!
Author's Response: OH no!!!! you have out-ed me as a shipper before the entire world!!!
Date: 30/01/07
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Date: 16/08/07
quote:
Crackerjacknpez, while neither of us can reach the height or caliber of Jac's writing, you truly write well and express your self eloquently. I could feel your pain re: Miss Parker and Jarod in your last reveiw as clearly as if it were my own. Truly you are gifted. And because of that, I was spurred on til late at night, writing the story I had started. And now it is complete, a tribute to your's and Jac's inspiration.
Author's Response: I could not agree more. you can see the talent in all of the reveiws here, it is just oozing out all over the place.
Your story is a moving tribute, and i am forever grateful for it.
AWWW, THANKyou, Patricia-D, Jacs!!!! I am absolutely floored by the back-to-back compliments. that means a lot, ESPECIALLY coming from you two!
for that, patricia-d, I'm going to look fwd to reading your fics! *heads there now*
Date: 16/08/07