Lovely writing, beautiful story

Exactly what I'd imagine Jarod would do if something like that happened. Nice and peaceful moment in all the drama.

What I really like about your stories is that although they are all rather short (but then again so are most of mine) they are all very much in character and fits with the universe of which The Pretender resides. And they leave the reader wanting more, and making up the next scene, and perhaps even the next after that.

So keep up the good work.

Beautiful piece, you captured the silence of night very well.

And I knew I'd read the "big strong hands"-thing somewhere else, thanks for clarifying, saves me a lot of frustration ;)

Oh this was very good!

You did a great job telling the story from Angelo's point of view.  

Wow

I mean...wow

Such a fresh and creative way to write. It's incredibly good. I love how you vary the way you tell the plot throughout the story, yet manage to keep it completely nonconfusing and move the plot forward.

Incredible

Sweet little piece. Although I'm not really big on the shipping it's nice to read a happy ending for once

I like how you didn't narrow down who this is. This can be pretty much everyone from the show.

Really like this piece. Nice for Parker to get a realistic, but happy ending for once.

Very nice piece, I think you summed up the essentials of the whole Jarod/Zoe-thing quite nicely. And on top of that it's written very well.

Her reaction sounds very accurate to me, exactly what I'd expect her to say. Because really, the only reason they can have any kind of relationship is if they never realize it, and even if they do, you never say it. That's breaking the code man! Well, actually that's exactly what it is.

Oh well I'll stop rambling now. Truly great piece. Both true, and beautifully written. Wonder if I guessed the characters right...

I really like the last line; Her life was hell. But the moment she closed her eyes forever, it felt like heaven.

I hope to read more of your work in the future