Characters: Angelo, Broots, Jarod, Lyle, Miss Parker, Mr Raines, Sam, Sydney
Classifications: Genres: Angst, Drama
Warnings: Warning: Violence
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Word count: 46107
Read Count: 25658
I'm a senior in college working for an English degree and a masters in education. I'm far too obsessed with The Pretender for it to be healthy, but hey aren't we all? My greatest pet peeve is when people ask what my favorite TV show is and when I say tP they have never heard of it. :(
My previous penname was Aqua, but I changed it to TLM. So if these stories sound familiar. You may have read it on another site.
Sometimes I forget that I'm writing fics or refuse to update for months at a time and I realize it's quite annoying but what can I say? I'm a moody writer that way. Just harass me a lot and that will probably help.
[Images from cila81 and babybacke.]
Such great writing. You really captured the unspoken messages that Sydney and Jarod can share in a conversation. Great chapter, can't wait for the next one!
Author's Response: Thanks, TLM! I just hope the next few chaps can live up to expectations.
Very interesting. I don't think I've ever read a fic where Jarod and Parker get together and then it doesn't work out. This is sad but I really like the concept!
Thank you so much. I love writing "angst". I'll be updating soon.
AnnaReviewer: TLM Signed
Sigh, that's so sweet.
Author's Response: Aw, thanks!
I really love this story. It's unique and I can't wait to find out what happens next. You do a great blend of description and dialogue. Keep it up!Reviewer: TLM Signed
Oh I like. Bittersweet but not in a cliche-d out kind of way. You should definitely continue, the end was so sketchy!Reviewer: TLM Signed
This is coming along so nicely! Poor Jarod though. I'm thinking there's a party in Blue Cove that needs crashing and only one man for the job. Update us soon. :)
Author's Response: Crashing a party in Blue Cove, hmm? Nope, can't see it happening anytime soon. He has other things to deal with first.
Raines and Willie capture Jarod. Horrible things follow. You'll have to read it to find out more.
Hahaha! Oh the mental pictures. I can't get them out of my head. This was hilarious. Disturbing, but hilarious.
Author's Response: I was aiming for hilarious, but not sure about the disturbing part. Sick, yes, but disturbing, umm got to say no. Mr. Wiggles is disturbing, Jarod scratching his butt is just sick.
Nice Christmas story. Cheery. Ha except you know not, but it was still a very good story! Their lives are always so tragic, these kind of endings just fit them so perfectly.
Author's Response: Ta TLM, glad you found it so cheery lol. Their lives are tragic and this is a tragic ending so yay you think it fits so good. thanks heaps and have a good chrissy :D
What a great, fresh perspective on the Jarod/Parker relationship. I really liked it a lot!Reviewer: TLM Signed
Very nice start! You write with great detail. I look forward to reading more chapters :)Reviewer: TLM Signed
Jarod is suffering from Ennui and during a momentary lapse of concentration is caught by the Centre, who now have their sights set on reclaiming Gemini...
This was really wonderful! I love the ingenuity of having the kid cuff Jarod, perfect. I really hope you continue this.
Thanks TLM, I’m really glad you liked it! The third chapter will shed a bit more light on why it was the kid (so hopefully I won’t disappoint)… Thank you so much for your review, it’s most appreciated!Reviewer: TLM Signed
An empty lair sends the gang into unfamiliar territory. The hunters turn game, while Jarod fights for what he thought he'd always have; His mind.
Wonderful job, Sarah. It looks fantastic! I'd almost forgotten how this whole thing started oh so long ago.
Author's Response: Yeah, I know the feeling. It feels like we've been writing this story forever, which in fanfic terms I guess we kind of have. Fun to finally see it up here where it all began
- ManolineReviewer: TLM Signed