This was so sad, but lovely. Good job.

Great story, but all of yours are. And I can truly testify to this because I've spent the last week or so carefully reading every story you have posted onto this site. You could say I became quite the fan. You stay so true to the characters and deliver such unique and believable storylines. Thanks for some really great reading!

This is so random, but I just sat down and read your entire story for these past few hours and I loved it. Very few people can pull off the J/MP relationship properly and you really did. Your writing was wonderful and even if this is a couple years late, you did a great job and you should know you made my night!

Oh boy I just read your story and am so sad. It's so depressing to think it could end that way. You did a wonderful job with it. It's good when someone goes for something other than "they lived happily ever after" because the bitter truth is The Centre is a dark powerful place. It's not unrealistic for them to win in the end. Great job.

Author's Response: Thanks soo much. Usually i get crucified for that ending...lol. Nice to know not everyone hates it. So many stories all in the same way, so i figured... hey, what if Lyle actually won for once? woudlnt that be cool.

Oh brilliant. I was sad until I read the last few paragraphs. Great job on this one. Very typical what Jarod and Miss Parker might pull!

Author's Response: Thank you!  I'm glad you enjoyed the twisted ending.  It was so much fun to write.

What a wonderful little story! Took me way too long to discover it, but it's truly great.

Wow. This was one of my favorite series back in the day. It's so good to see this story again. I'm glad you reposted it.

I absolutely love this. You have such a special way of writing, I was entranced.

I just read this whole story all the way through and it's really great. The whole time switching thing makes it so interesting (a thought we both seemed to have when writing our stories!). Keep it up and I'll be waiting eagerly for your next chapter!

My my my, I just read this entire story in one sitting and it was one hell of a ride. Please continue, it's so captivating. The end to this chapter was so sweet.

Author's Response: thanks!  I guarantee the next few chapters will make the ride much sweeter!

This story is fantastic. You really have the characters down and the fragility of Jarod and Parker's relationship. I can't wait to read more!

Aw I just read this thanks to your plug over at the forum. You did such a great job. Miss Parker + Christmas time = ensuing hilarity, you captured it perfectly. Oh and I'm glad Jarod hadn't found his family and Parker was still bitter after ten years because some things don't change and it just makes everything more interesting when it isn't "happily ever after" perfect. You don't need romance for Jarod to care. All you need are pliers and a hammer!

Author's Response:

Thanks T!