Characters: All the characters
Classifications: Genres: Angst, General
Warnings: Warning: Violence
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 63775
Read Count: 78903
This beginning is so good !!! You have to continue this fanfic, I'm really curious to know what happened to Jarod and who kidnapped Parker. Has the monster any connection with Lyle ?!? Well, you are the only one who can tell me, so please keep writing.
Author's Response: Thanks, I am glad you enjoyed the beginning.
You really have to continue this !!! I'm already waiting for the next chapter.
Reviewer: Miss Nathou Love SignedI'm definitly a fan of your story !!! Don't stop I love it !!! It's getting better and better.
Reviewer: Miss Nathou Love SignedIt's really getting creepier and creepier. I hate it when the bad guys have the uper hand. I'm waiting for other chapters, of course. LOL !!!
Author's Response: It will get better, I promise. Thanks for the reviews.
Very dark, great deal of suspense... Keep writing !!!
Author's Response: thanks for your reviews...hope its not to dark...but will keep writing.
Hey ! you finally kicked some of the bad-guys asses. Good Job !!! The current question is : what are Jarod and Miss Parker going to do now ??? The answer in the next chapter... Keep posting, this story is just too good. "big grin"
Author's Response: About time, ;-) hope you like the next one.
And I was thinking it was going to get better... Are you on the psycho's side or what ?!? LOL ! But don't worry, I'm already waiting for your next chapter.
Reviewer: Miss Nathou Love SignedYour fanfic was very good !!! But the end is somewhat abrupt, now you have to show us how Jarod will fight against the Centre or how he will destroy it. I'd also like to know how he deals with his newly found family and his former pursuers on an everyday basis 'not easy) : conflicts, jalousy, anger, friendship, hate, love...whatever it is. But in any case keep writing, because I'd love to have more than just one fanfic. So a sequel would be real fun !!!
Reviewer: Miss Nathou Love SignedSo much action !!! I really do hope that Miss Parker and Jarod are both going to be alive in the end. Please you have to continue this !!!
Reviewer: Miss Nathou Love SignedNice beginning, I'm already waiting for the next chapter.
Reviewer: Miss Nathou Love SignedHey ! I'm glad you're writing a sequel to soul splinter. You also began another fic, son of adam.I think I'm already curious and hooked to them both. Though I wonder if in the present fic, you'll turn J into a psycho, he really seems to have big problems... Well no need to tell you that I want more than a first chapter. Good luck !!! "evil grin"
Reviewer: Miss Nathou Love SignedThat was really so sad ! I really hope this is just a dream, and when she'll wake up she just realized she had made the wrong choice. He is not really dead, is he ???
Author's Response: Well I hope you stick around to find out. This story is quickly turning into a novel. But I need all the necouragement that I can get!
I love this fanfic, even if it is really sad sometime. It's easy to read and the characters are captivating. I just can't get used to a JMP tribe with 29+3 children. That's crazy !!!
It's strange to see the usual strong-minded Parker so broken. She is much more the type oif woman to say "OK I made some huge mistakes in my life, but I can try and do better". So I find it interesting that you choose to depict the weak, depressed, self pitying Miss Parker.
Another thing that I find sometime really strange is that she doesn't really have the usual "mother status", I mean the children don't really need her. She looks like the liability of the family.
This fic is really a good surprise and I'd love to read some more chapters. So keep writing and I'll keep reading. ( :
Author's Response: Everything your saying is true and I'm gonna address it all really soon. There is a reason Miss Parker is being portrayed like this. The next chapter she will be completely out of character.......but I need to be this way so part of the story develops the way I want it to. All I ask is that you don't drop the story because of it! I assure you that things will change. Thanks for the compliments and I do hope you keep reading it.
My god !!! This is a real tribe !!! How many people are there in this goddman family ?!? The lattest member of the family seems to be fun though. I like the introduction between the two sisters and the slaps and punches that came with it. Lol !!!
Author's Response: Thanks! It was one of my finer moments. I just knew someone would like it!
Lol !!! I think I guess who turned up in the chapter 53. Tell me if I'm wrong, but he is alive, but normally should have been dead !!!
Author's Response: Hehe......nope. The last line in the chapter tells you who the person is. But its not a man!
Oh yeah !!! You're right I just didn't see the last word because it was stuck to "submit a review". Mea Culpa. Ok !!! So SHE was supposed to be dead but is alive.
Author's Response: No problem!
Oh yeah !!! You're right I just didn't see the last word because it was stuck to "submit a review". Mea Culpa. Ok !!! So SHE was supposed to be dead but is alive.
Author's Response: No Problem!!
HEY !!! Are you kidding me ??? Of course I want a sequel !!! Ahhh !!! Finally I recognise MY Miss Parker, strong, brave, stubborn... but motivated by love instead of being manipulated by anger. If you remember in one of my first reviews I thought the whole thing wasn't real, I couldn't believe Jarod was dead. I wasn't that far from the truth. You really made me doubt : you are wicked with your readers, in the end before the whole revelation in the cemetery I really thought it was real. But I truly loved the whole story. I can't help but wonder what's going to happen next? what will become of J&MP and their whole bunch of children and their crazy family? I am waiting for the REAL meeting between Parker and Jamieson, will she still be herself at that moment? Finally what is this whole Stargate-Centre-Prophety theory of yours? A SEQUEL !!! A SEQUEL !!! A SEQUEL !!! ...
Author's Response: I am going to answer so many of your questions in the sequel and hold on to your hat.........some of the answers are a trip!
I think I already read this chapter somewhere, but I can't remember where. It probably was on another fanfic site. Anyway I loved this story too, but I think that when I stumbled on it you hadn't finished it. So I'll probably get to read what I couldn't.
To tell you the truth reading "the reason" first help a great deal to memorize the characters, so that you don't get lost in the next one.
Keep writing because I really love what you write. It seams Georgia loves it too. Lol !!!
Author's Response: Thanks Love! I hope you love this story! It's actually harder to write because this story is 'set' in reality! I really hope your like it!
Well, I know that Dar is not going to shoot Raines... Nobody ever managed to kill the bastard. But everybody wish him to die. Strange isn't it ??? Keep writing, I'm still there waiting for the chapters I didn't have the chance to read.
Author's Response: Miss Nathous Love I must say that u have valid point. But I have someone in mind for the task....let's see if I make it happen!
I'm still there reading everything. So don't stop and keep this wonderful fic going. ( :
Author's Response: Don't worry I won't stop! Plus I think your going to love the little twist and turns in this story. It's definately got a different tone to it.......especially because Jarod is in it :)
Jarod can sometime be the biggest moron on this planet : he took his time to register that Amanda was his daughter. And the guy is supposed to be a genius ?!? Well I like the fact that even Jarod isn't perfect in your story, it makes him more normal instead of Mr Perfect Do-Gooder. You see what I mean...
Author's Response: He can't help it! Plus he's too cute when he messes up.
At that point either some girl became a woman during the night either someone had a major noseblood or the was manslaughter among the sibblings during the night. Since I have already read this chapter, I know what's going to happen... "evil grin" But since I love this story so much , I can't help it, I'm reading it and enjoying it all over again. DON'T STOP POSTING !!!
Author's Response: I won't, don't worry! I really am glad that you do enjoy this story! I'll post another chapter up today just for you!
Lol !!! I always loved that line, after everything broke loose between Dar and Jar, Parker asking "what girlfriend ?" is really hilarious. I mean I'm really, really sorry for poor fellow Jarod, but still I can't help chuckling each time I read it. Go On !!! I'm dying for the next chapters.
Author's Response: Georgia is telling you the truth Miss Nathou Love!
Lol !!! I always loved that line, after everything broke loose between Dar and Jar, Parker asking "what girlfriend ?" is really hilarious. I mean I'm really, really sorry for poor fellow Jarod, but still I can't help chuckling each time I read it. Go On !!! I'm dying for the next chapters.
Author's Response: I posted 2 new chaps for you!! Hope you like!