Characters: Jarod, Miss Parker, Sydney
Classifications: Genres: General
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 913
Read Count: 2379
I didn't expect this. You did something here I would have never expected, and I'm impressed that you not only did it, you did it plausibly. The writing is solid, the characters are as I remember them, and the story telling is tight.
It's a shame that I don't have more time to read this evening. Congratulations. I applaud you.
Reviewer: Mr PezHead SignedNo one is more wicked than Miss Parker. (Except Jarod)
Jami, Jami, Jami, this is wicked. In the extreme. It's as wicked as you said it would be when we talked last month. I know you'll continue the wickedness. Love ya.
Reviewer: Mr PezHead SignedThe pursuit for Jarod turns deadly in this present day Dystopia. Who will die and who will live?
Let's find out.
Brilliant work.
Reviewer: Mr PezHead SignedTerrific follow up. I'm loving this.
Reviewer: Mr PezHead SignedThis scriblet follows Incursion.
I see now that you have a lot of in process work. I won't read or review this series until it's finished. I want to fairly judge the entire piece. I will browse and see what else grabs my attention.
Reviewer: Mr PezHead Signed_
Just poppin' in to say I'll be reading more of you. Jami sent me here. This is solid writing and I like that it follows the series. The novels that were released alienated me in ways I didn't expect.
This is a short chapter but I understand quality over quantity, and you probably have a life. I enjoyed this.
Reviewer: Mr PezHead SignedSending me here is one of the kindest things Jami has ever done for me. This has been a treat.
All treat and no trick, Mirage.
I'm intrigued and eager to read more.
Congratulations!
Reviewer: Mr PezHead SignedBroots honors a promise.
(FON sequel)
Bam!! Hell of an opening chapter! This is genius.
I haven't read Forces Of Nature in full yet but I did skim it and Jami has apprsised me of what happened in that story. I don't need to read FON to understand what is going on here.
Your voice is strong, your writing is amazing, your plotting blows me away.
Mor please and the sooner the better!
Reviewer: Mr PezHead Signed